Engetsu Posted August 16, 2010 Report Share Posted August 16, 2010 I made this card for fun, but feel free to provide constructive criticism if needed. Card Lore You can Special Summon this card from your hand by Tributing 1 FIRE Attribute monster on your side of the field. When this card battles a monster whose ATK or DEF is equal or higher than this card's ATK, you can remove from play 2 FIRE Attribute monsters from your Graveyard to increase this card's ATK by 1000 points during Damage Step only. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Athena- Posted August 16, 2010 Report Share Posted August 16, 2010 On the second sentence you wrote "When this card battles a monster whose ATK or DEF is equal or higher than this card's ATK", well isn't that any monster card? You have lots of OCG error (on your side of the field=you control) so you should fix that up.Good picture.Why is it partly a warrior type?And this would be pretty balanced if you changed 1000 into 500 or something like that. Overall, pretty good card :) I liked it. 8/10. Your card have officially been rated by -Athena- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Engetsu Posted August 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2010 On the second sentence you wrote "When this card battles a monster whose ATK or DEF is equal or higher than this card's ATK", well isn't that any monster card? You have lots of OCG error (on your side of the field=you control) so you should fix that up.Good picture.Why is it partly a warrior type?And this would be pretty balanced if you changed 1000 into 500 or something like that. Overall, pretty good card :) I liked it. 8/10. Your card have officially been rated by -Athena- Yes whenever it battles any monster, should I change it? I'm not sure really lol. Blaziken seems like it would be a Beast-Warrior type monster. Should I change it to Warrior or Pyro? It wouldn't be much of a increase if I did change it to 500. Perhaps I could lower it's ATK to 2500 to keep the 1000 point boost? Or no? >_< I'm making changes to the card now. I'll post the fixed card as soon as I'm done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Athena- Posted August 16, 2010 Report Share Posted August 16, 2010 Yes whenever it battles any monster, should I change it? I would say so. I'm not sure really lol. Blaziken seems like it would be a Beast-Warrior type monster. Should I change it to Warrior or Pyro? IDK. I was think just beast. It wouldn't be much of a increase if I did change it to 500. Perhaps I could lower it's ATK to 2500 to keep the 1000 point boost? Or no? >_< Well, it'd be more balance if you do change it but it's your call I'm making changes to the card now. I'll post the fixed card as soon as I'm done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Engetsu Posted August 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2010 I'm not sure how to change the OCG for the second sentence of my card's effect. Would you mind helping me with that part? If you don't mind that is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Athena- Posted August 16, 2010 Report Share Posted August 16, 2010 I'm pretty sure this is wrong but here's my suggestion (and I kinda changed it around a little): Some of it is wrong though (because I'm terrible at OCG fixing). This card can be Special Summon from your deck by Tributing 2 FIRE Attribute monsters you control. If this card destroys 1 of your opponent's monster during your Battle Phase, you can remove from play 1 FIRE Attribute monster from your Graveyard to increase this card's ATK by 500. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Engetsu Posted August 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2010 I'm pretty sure this is wrong but here's my suggestion (and I kinda changed it around a little): Some of it is wrong though (because I'm terrible at OCG fixing). This card can be Special Summon from your deck by Tributing 2 FIRE Attribute monsters you control. If this card destroys 1 of your opponent's monster during your Battle Phase, you can remove from play 1 FIRE Attribute monster from your Graveyard to increase this card's ATK by 500. That's a pretty good effect change for Blaziken, but this "If this card destroys 1 of your opponent's monster during your Battle Phase" I think it's more like this "When this monster destroys a monster by battle, you can remove from play 1 FIRE Attribute monster from your Graveyard to increase the ATK of this card by 500 points." I'm not too sure either. I'm pretty bad when it comes to OCG as well. Anyways I think I'll stick to my card's effect, but I'll change the Special Summoning requirement for Blaziken. Thanks for the suggestion :) I appreciate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
justinator119 Posted August 16, 2010 Report Share Posted August 16, 2010 OCG seems perfect, but I might have overlooked something. I like the effect, and I love that picture. Where did you get it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Engetsu Posted August 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2010 OCG seems perfect, but I might have overlooked something. I like the effect, and I love that picture. Where did you get it? I got the picture from Photobucket. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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