Banagher Links Posted August 16, 2010 Report Share Posted August 16, 2010 I have no clue if this has been done or not but here is the first of many "Chaos" cards to come.Lore:As long as this monster remains face-up on the field you cannot control any other monsters. If your opponent controls a monster and you do not you can Special Summon this monster from your hand. When this monster is summoned your opponent selects and activates 1 of the following effects:-Select and destroy 1 monster your opponent controls, your opponent then draws 2 cards.-Select and destroy 1 monster you control, you then add 1 designated card from your deck to your hand. also im planing on printing these out so ignore the creator and date stuff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Athena- Posted August 16, 2010 Report Share Posted August 16, 2010 You have lots of OCG errors. To prevent some of it, start using commas. And summoned and special summon should be capitalized. Also, one should be 1. (I suggest you to use - instead of *) Finally, you should consider rearranging the sentences around.Cool picture.Okay name.This is pretty balanced.Overall, I like the effect and I'm gonna say 8.9/10.Great job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Banagher Links Posted August 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2010 ok i'll edit and then repost the card thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Banagher Links Posted August 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2010 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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