[KING.] Memorial Memory [KING.]

[Limited Edition KING]

When a monster you control is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon it. During the End Phase of the turn this card was activated, send the Special Summoned monster to the Graveyard.

 

I will give reps for constructive and honest reviews.

[Codeson]

It would work well as a Blocker for a turn of attacks if it was stronger then all the monsters on the field except the one that already destroyed it.

Maybe a different name. But probably not.

[Saturn of Elemia]

IMAGE: It's cute - and I like cute.

 

OCG: You're missing commas.

 

EFFECT: From what it sounds like, this only works on one monster. If you worded your effect a little differently, you could have it work on ALL monsters destroyed during the turn. If that was the case, then this card would be a nice defensive card since the same monster(s) could come back and defend your LP again until the end of the turn. I say you make it so that it works on ALL monsters destroyed in battle during the turn. Oh lord, I just realized something. You could make a set of monsters that have abilities activate when they hit the field (although this is similar to the Ally mechanic from Magic: The Gathering). This would be PERFECT if you could get them into some kind of infinite loop to keep attacking the same monster over and over again to keep activating the effects.

 

*cough* Okay, I think I should stop ranting for now...

 

PLAYABILITY: Please see 'Effect' for the rant. The fact that this is a Quick-Play is interesting. You can do it during their turn for defense - or do it during YOUR turn for offense (effectively turning something in a Colossal Warrior-ish monster).

 

OVERALL: As is, it's limited to only one monster from what I see. I'd rate it about an 8/10 like that. Now, if you change it to where it works on ALL monsters, then I'd give you a 10/10.

[Anbu-of-Sand]

Memorial Memory

 

OCG / Common Sense:

Might need a comma in a few places, not entirely sure.

 

Effect:

Revives a fallen monster you controlled that was run over. But as soon as the End Phase hits, that monster goes back to the Graveyard. This gives use to the monster only for it's effect for the little time it has...I think. Fits the name quite well the effect. Card reminds me a bit of Call of the Haunted though.

 

Usefulness / Balance:

Quite useful in most Decks, can be a great tech in most Decks and IMO, has the potential to be a staple as well. The balance in this card is balanced because of how you only get to use the monster for a little bit of time before it goes back to the Grave.

 

Ratings:

OCG / Common Sense: 1.9/2

Effect: 3.9/4

Usefulness / Balance: 4/4

Overall: 9.8/10

[Limited Edition KING]

I limited down to one so it fits the card name, when I thought of this card I wanted to recapture a memory of a fallen comrade or a lost lover. But you've caught my attention with being able to Special Summon more.

 

Could you maybe point out where the commas are supposed to be? that would be much appreciated ^_^

[Saturn of Elemia]

Here you go:

 

When a monster you control is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon it. During the End Phase of the turn this card was activated, send the Special Summoned monster to the Graveyard.

 

The commas go after the first 'Graveyard' and after 'activated'.

[Limited Edition KING]

Ah okay thank you. ^_^

[-Griffin]

Outright outclassed:

 

[RickiMinaj]

Outright outclassed:

 

 

Time machine works the exact same way too :3

 

But this card is nice, being a quickplay and all, it's great for cards like mystic tomato to SS another monster during the turn. :3

 

You probably were creative in making this card, but were just unaware that another existed, so in the spirit of creativity, good job :3