♥~Doomed Prowler~♥

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

Zombies

 

This card can be Normal Summoned without a Release. When this card is Normal Summoned without a Release, if this is the only Zombie-Type monster on the field, this card is destroyed. Once per turn, you can send 1 Zombie-Type monster from your Deck to your Graveyard. When this card is destroyed, Special Summon 1 Zombie-Type monster from your Graveyard.

[Rokandre]

I think it's Op'd. If you don't have any monsters on the field you can normal summon. It will be destroyed by its own effect and you get any zombie from the grave.

[Anbu-of-Sand]

Doomed Prowler

 

OCG / Common Sense:

Release = Tribute

 

Effect:

First effect is great for getting out a free beater. Reminds me of Sirocco from Blackwings. However, there's a drawback if you Normal Summon it without a release, this makes you depend on having at least 1 other Zombie on the field, unless you want this destroyed, which benefits from it's last effect. Can fill up the Grave of Zombies, which is great for dumping monsters for fodder for Mezuki, Zombie Master and such. The final effect works great with this card's drawback, being able to Special Summon a free Zombie from the Graveyard at no costs and no Level cap.

 

Usefulness / Balance:

Quite useful in Zombie Decks. Fills up the Grave quite well and is great for decent swarm. Card seems balanced enough except no drawback on that last effect to get a free Zombie from your Graveyard, but IMO, it might or might not need a drawback, depending on how this card would work in the TCG. ATK stat might be a bit to high as well? Maybe 2100-2200? DEF IMO seems good enough.

 

Ratings:

OCG / Common Sense: 1.9/2

Effect: 4/4

Usefulness / Balance: 3.8/4

Overall: 9.7/10

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

Thank you very much both.

 

@ Anbu: Thanks. I know TCG does Tributing but I felt like using OCG Release. I actually like using release more.

Thanks, I added the Summoning drawback because I wanted it to have a good ATK but I also knew it would be a much stronger Cyber Dragon that could be Normal Summoned first turn of the duel so I figured it would need a drawback.

 

Thanks both

[Zeaux]

This is just a better version of Malevolent Mech - Goku En + Foolish Burial effect once per turn + Special Summon effect, that could actually be pretty over powered, since you can re-summon this thing if you already sent one of it to Graveyard. Like it, but toooo over powered. :/

 

BTW, PM me the picture please? ^-^

 

 

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

Hmm...I see your point, Dual Doomed Prowlers can cause a tsunami of zombies...

 

Would it be more balanced if I added an "except Doomed Prowler"?

[Zeaux]

You still can summon more powerful things like eh... any powerful Zombie sent to the Graveyard by this card. I would re-work on the effect. Add a restriction to the easy summoning, make it send a Zombie to the Graveyard only when it is Summoned or attack, Special Summon only Level 4 or lower Zombie monsters in Defense Position. < Things like that. 

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

Hmm..Well that kinda crushes my vision of what I wanted the card to be like. I wanted it to be a powerful support to Zombies without having all those restrictions.

 

Although that MAY be what I have to do =/

 

Perhaps I could re-work a bit of the lore and the stats of the card

 

 

Perhaps let it be Normal Summoned with 1 Tribute, Level 7 ATK: 2700 DEF: 1900