Anbu-of-Sand Posted September 4, 2010 Report Share Posted September 4, 2010 This chapter was better than the previous ones. Better details and better suspense in certain places, while like I said, there would be that one sentence / paragraph that just made me want to skip it. Otherwise, this chapter was really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Premier Alexander Romanov Posted September 4, 2010 Report Share Posted September 4, 2010 Where is the list of cards used? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♫♪GoldenBoy♪♫ Posted November 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 14, 2010 bump chapter four added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♫♪GoldenBoy♪♫ Posted November 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 21, 2010 This is gonna need a bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dokktorawesome Posted February 7, 2011 Report Share Posted February 7, 2011 good story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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