Serenity the Candyman Posted August 17, 2010 Report Share Posted August 17, 2010 after a long vacation I present Haya Hibiki, The Unseen Blade and others: [spoiler=Haya Hibiki, The Unseen Blade] [spoiler=[b]Lore[/b]] Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can flip a coin twice. If both results are Tails, this card cannot be selected as an attack target during your opponent's next Battle Phase. [spoiler=Lee Yen Chi, Ninja of the Shadow Wind] [spoiler=[b]Lore[/b]] Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can flip a coin twice. If both results are Tails, negate the effect of 1 card on your opponent's side of the field and destroy it. [spoiler=Kiyoshi Minoru, The Pure Falcon] [spoiler=[b]Lore[/b]] Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can flip a coin twice. If both results are Tails, your opponent cannot Summon a monster during your opponent's next turn. Thank you for your commments and any advice is appreciated.watch for updates. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoon55 Posted August 17, 2010 Report Share Posted August 17, 2010 Shouldn't there be some sort of effect of only getting one tails or none? (Will rate after) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serenity the Candyman Posted August 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 17, 2010 no since i didnt want it to have any effect 1 or no tails popped up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoon55 Posted August 17, 2010 Report Share Posted August 17, 2010 Alright I like the art of the card, balanced as it is. Solid 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serenity the Candyman Posted August 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 17, 2010 thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kiyo Posted August 17, 2010 Report Share Posted August 17, 2010 Shouldn't there be some sort of effect of only getting one tails or none?Na, I think the point of the 2 coins is to make the chances smaller. I like the name and artwork, the concept is okay and balanced. The OCG needs a fix-up though: I'm not sure if you wanted the effect to be optional or not, but if it was supposed to be optional, you should include " you can" after the first comma."toss a coin 2 times" should be "flip a coin twice".You should specify how many times a turn the player can use the effect, or else the player will just use the effect until they get two Tails :/ I think once per turn would be good.I'm pretty sure "2 out of 2" should be "both".Also, "Attack Phase" is "Battle Phase" (Basic Yu-Gi-Oh knowledge). To sum up, the effect should be like this:"Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can flip a coin twice. If both results are Tails, this card cannot be selected as an attack target during your opponent's next Battle Phase." 7/10I like the card, keep it up :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serenity the Candyman Posted August 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 17, 2010 noted and fixed it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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