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I'm really sorry if I'm picking on you (I feel like it) but you wanted me to rate these cards so here I go:

 

-The card type (dragon and spellcaster) and attribute don't really match the picture.

-The levels are wrong

-Names are pretty boring

-First 2 pictures are okay (the last one is bad)

-You have lots of OCG errors (it's hard to understand)

-Not balanced

-Effects are really bland

-You obviously don't know what spirit monsters are (they return to your hand at the end of the turn)

 

Overall, you need lots of work. 4/10....try again.

 

Your card have officially been rated by -Athena-

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I'm really sorry if I'm picking on you (I feel like it) but you wanted me to rate these cards so here I go:

 

-The card type (dragon and spellcaster) and attribute don't really match the picture.

-The levels are wrong

-Names are pretty boring

-First 2 pictures are okay (the last one is bad)

-You have lots of OCG errors (it's hard to understand)

-Not balanced

-Effects are really bland

-You obviously don't know what spirit monsters are (they return to your hand at the end of the turn)

 

Overall, you need lots of work. 4/10....try again.

 

Your card have officially been rated by -Athena-

EVERYTIME I DO SOMETHING YOUR THERE!

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I'm really sorry if I'm picking on you (I feel like it) but you wanted me to rate these cards so here I go:

 

-The card type (dragon and spellcaster) and attribute don't really match the picture.

-The levels are wrong

-Names are pretty boring

-First 2 pictures are okay (the last one is bad)

-You have lots of OCG errors (it's hard to understand)

-Not balanced

-Effects are really bland

-You obviously don't know what spirit monsters are (they return to your hand at the end of the turn)

 

Overall, you need lots of work. 4/10....try again.

 

Your card have officially been rated by -Athena-

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Once per turn, you may pay 1000 Life Points. If you do, destroy one monster your opponent controls.

 

Once per turn, you may Tribute 1 monster you control. If you do, this card can attack twice this turn.

Don't make Spirits if you don't know the effect for one, they go like this:

This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to the owner's hand during the End Phase of the turn that this card is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up.

You capitalize the Types, like Spellcaster, Zombie, Divine-Beast, etc. etc., as well as the names. You don't randomize the Set ID, you make it like this:

Take your Set Name, ex. Ruler of Chaos, and you take the first letter in it's name, so, ROC. Next, you use EN00X, replace the X with the number of the card in the set, starting with 0.

Bad spelling, bad OCG, and just bad grammar in general. I half to deduct from your score by making a Spirit without being a Spirit.

4/10. Try Harder next time.

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