[δαίμονας] Robot Elephant!

[John A. Zoidberg]

A little Idea I had. Sorry about the lengthly effect. OCG fixes would be appreciated.

Enjoy! :D

 

[spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play up to 5 "Brutal Beast" monsters from your hand, field, or Graveyard. For every "Brutal Beast" monster that was removed from play, this card gains 1 Brutality Counter (Max. 5). Once per turn, you can remove up to 5 Brutality Counters to activate one of the following effects depending on how many counters were removed:

1: This cards ATK is increased by 500 until the End Phase.

2: Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower "Brutal Beast" monster from your Graveyard.

3: This cards ATK is increased by 100 for every "Brutal Beast" monster in your Graveyard.

4: Special Summon 1 Level 5 or lower "Brutal Beast" monster from your Graveyard.

5: This card can attack twice.

 

[Card Board Box]

* "This card can attack twice." should be "This card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase."

* "Max. 5" should be "max. 5"

 

The 1,2,3,3,4,5 effects are just one paragraph, not 5 different paragraphs.

 

Is "Brutal Beast" a Archetype you're making?

 

8.9

[John A. Zoidberg]

Yes, it is.

Their main focus is getting as many monsters out as possible, giving them as much strength as possible, and dealing as much damage as possible until your opponent figures out a way to kill them all.

[John A. Zoidberg]

* "This card can attack twice." should be "This card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase."

* "Max. 5" should be "max. 5"

 

The 1,2,3,3,4,5 effects are just one paragraph, not 5 different paragraphs.

 

Is "Brutal Beast" a Archetype you're making?

 

8.9

 

And what did you mean by that second thing wiht the 1 paragraph,

[Vyrath]

OCG fix:

 

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 5 "Brutal Beast" monsters from your hand, field, or Graveyard. For every "Brutal Beast" monster removed from play due to this effect, put 1 Brutality Counter (Max. 5) on this card. Once per turn, you can remove Brutality Counters from this card to activate one of the following effects:

1: The ATK of this card increases by 500 until the End Phase.

2: Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower "Brutal Beast" monster from your Graveyard.

3: The ATK of this card increases by 100 for every "Brutal Beast" monster in your Graveyard.

4: Special Summon 1 Level 5 or lower "Brutal Beast" monster from your Graveyard.

5: This card can attack twice during your next Battle Phase."

 

 

I think there should be bullets added in front of every number (see shop)

[John A. Zoidberg]

OCG fix:

 

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 5 "Brutal Beast" monsters from your hand, field, or Graveyard. For every "Brutal Beast" monster removed from play due to this effect, put 1 Brutality Counter (Max. 5) on this card. Once per turn, you can remove Brutality Counters from this card to activate one of the following effects:

1: The ATK of this card increases by 500 until the End Phase.

2: Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower "Brutal Beast" monster from your Graveyard.

3: The ATK of this card increases by 100 for every "Brutal Beast" monster in your Graveyard.

4: Special Summon 1 Level 5 or lower "Brutal Beast" monster from your Graveyard.

5: This card can attack twice during your next Battle Phase."

 

 

I think there should be bullets added in front of every number (see shop)

 

Good point.

And I'm going to wait for another member to give me an OCG fix before trusting yours 100% (not cause you're a 1-star, because it's just something I often to)

[Vyrath]

No need to explain :)

Your card = your choice

[John A. Zoidberg]

Thanks!

[Card Board Box]

And what did you mean by that second thing wiht the 1 paragraph,

Notice how you put your effect like this:

"1:

2:

3:

4:

5:"

 

It should be "1: Blah. 2: Blah. 3: Blahblahblahblahblahblah. 4: BAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWW. 5: Lolno."

 

Look at the card "Clear World" if you still don't understand.

 

Also, @Vyrath's OCG Fix

Max. is not capitalized, it should be "(max. 5)"

If you want proof for that one, look up "Skilled Dark Magician"

[John A. Zoidberg]

Ah.

I get it now.

[♣Master of the Dead♣]

Holy bull s***!!! This is great, i would so f***ing use this! 1000000000000/10' Love the pic!!

[John A. Zoidberg]

XD thanks!