The Four Horsemen of the End..

[インフェルニティ・ミラージュ]

 

Effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 5 monsters on your side of the field. Every time this monster destroys an opponent's monter by battle, place 1 "Horse Counter" on this card. If this card destroys a monster while you have 4 "Horse Counters" on this card, you win the duel. If this card is destroyed, your Life Points are reduced to 0.

[Zextra]

Though the idea is creative, the card itself seems way UP'ed. Removing 5 monsters for a 2000 ATK monster that has no immunity to Spells. Mirror Force/Bottomless/Icarus Attack would destroy this card easily. Plus, if it's destroyed, you lose, so it's not a big help.

Still, it's an original concept, so 8/10 :D

[nhmeco]

if your gonna give it an effect where if its destroyed then you lose the game, then you should maker it immune to magic,trap,and monster debuff effects

[~Riku~]

Yes, you should most probably be giving the monster an immunity.

 

Otherwise, the monster I am liking it, so a good rating I give to you now.

 

8/10

 

FAWFUL HAS SPOKEN!

[Skarlet]

"Five Headed Dragon" Style battle immunity, and immunity to Spells, Traps, and monster effects.

 

 

Anyway, slight OCG error. should just be "When this card destroys a monster by battle" as opposed to "Every time this monster destroys an opponent's monter by battle"

 

Also "Horse Counter" sounds kind of lame, maybe "End Counter" or "appocolypse Counter" Plus, 3-card combo, this + Ojama Trio + Final Attack Orders.