Random Cards

[Dark Magicians Brother]

[Dante Dimercurio]

Picture: 2/10. 5/7 of them have no backgrounds. Most of them are low Quality. The last one is a real life picture. You don't see that in a real yugioh card do you? No you don't.

 

OCG: 3/10. The first card doesn't make sense. Only Fuses Dark Monsters? You have to explain that more. Neo is not a real type. (Highly recommend using Beast or Aqua.) Dragon sister you must pick either Dragon or pyro, you can't have 2. (Highly Recommend Dragon.) The effects are worded badly. "Vampire Dragon Lady" Is a bad card. Get rid of it or we can fix the effect. ::

"Vampire Mother" + "Dragon Sister"

Once this card is sent to the Graveyard, pay 2000 Life Points to send this card Face-up on your side of the field.

(Only fair effect I can think of.)

Instead of it's type being Crossbreed, Make it Zombie. (Well, Zombie is highly Recommended anyways, you can always use Spellcaster as well.)

Neo-Ocean Aqua Dolphin::

"Pay 500 Life Points and you can destroy one level 5 or lower monster on your opponents side of the field."

Best I got for that one anyways.

I think I fixed enough OCG errors for you to figure out what Neo-Mammal Dark Dolphin's errors are.

 

Total: 2.5/10. Work on your cards, you are getting there.

[Dark Magicians Brother]

Picture: 2/10. 5/7 of them have no backgrounds. Most of them are low Quality. The last one is a real life picture. You don't see that in a real yugioh card do you? No you don't.

 

OCG: 3/10. The first card doesn't make sense. Only Fuses Dark Monsters? You have to explain that more. Neo is not a real type. (Highly recommend using Beast or Aqua.) Dragon sister you must pick either Dragon or pyro, you can't have 2. (Highly Recommend Dragon.) The effects are worded badly. "Vampire Dragon Lady" Is a bad card. Get rid of it or we can fix the effect. ::

"Vampire Mother" + "Dragon Sister"

Once this card is sent to the Graveyard, pay 2000 Life Points to send this card Face-up on your side of the field.

(Only fair effect I can think of.)

Instead of it's type being Crossbreed, Make it Zombie. (Well, Zombie is highly Recommended anyways, you can always use Spellcaster as well.)

Neo-Ocean Aqua Dolphin::

"Pay 500 Life Points and you can destroy one level 5 or lower monster on your opponents side of the field."

Best I got for that one anyways.

I think I fixed enough OCG errors for you to figure out what Neo-Mammal Dark Dolphin's errors are.

 

Total: 2.5/10. Work on your cards, you are getting there.

 

 

 

 

 

Ok thanks i will follow your advice but they were just cards that popped in to my mind.