Dark Eyes Dragon the Tormentor

[XT_011]

My First Yugioh Card

[Wind Road]

Good Job Dude! 7/10 Just needs to be less Up'D

[XT_011]

Thanks (btw, what do points do?)

[NeriesUmbra]

dude that card is invincible the only way your opponent can do anything is with burn cards It has a very high cost yes but actually It is about as hard as exodia to gain so it mite just be balanced since you can still lose 8/10

[XT_011]

Thanks for the advice! :D

[D.A._Sakuyamon]

this cards to easy to get out Future Fusion or Miracle Fusion for Ultimate. Premature for Obelisk and then any old Polermazation(not sure thats spelled right) card....for game

Way OPed to easy to summon is Divine Attribute

5.243523/10

[BlackWindDragon]

actually, the way the text is, this card doesnt have a purpose since if it destroys all cards on the field, that includes itself. honestly, its a stronger, fusion version of Chaos Emperor Dragon - Envoy of the End. and it kinda breaks that unwritten rule of 5000 as well

[D.A._Sakuyamon]

actually, the way the text is, this card doesnt have a purpose since if it destroys all cards on the field, that includes itself. honestly, its a stronger, fusion version of Chaos Emperor Dragon - Envoy of the End. and it kinda breaks that unwritten rule of 5000 as well

well no cause its immune to all card effects include itself so which leads to a paradox of sorts....

[Kuri]

Well the card is a God card and I can't consider it OP'd but I do think it should have gone in AoC. But anyways its not that bad so 8/10

[shaka1]

iknow its a god card but its invincible and way to overpowered weaken it to about 5000 and the only way to kill is by battle and you have one heck of a ard so for the effort of your first card il give it 6/10 :)

[Silver]

I don't really approve of the card, as I don't really agree that a God card should be allowed to fuse with anything, as it's pretty finite.

 

And no card should have the ability to be invincible. Every card must have a flaw, in my eyes at least. So I'd say no, this card shouldn't be legal.

 

The picture looks like BEUD in poor lighting. Try and find a picture that actually shows a combination of the two. Also, why is the card called 'Dark Eyes Dragon the Tormentor' when clearly the Dragon's eyes in your picture are white?. Confuzzled here. Also you missed out the Effect part in [Divine Beast / Effect]. Fix that.

 

If I did rate it, you should probably add an effect that stops players bypassing it. EG: "This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon.", just in case people play Traditional Format and are all like "LOL CYBER STEIN". (Then again, Traditional Format is pretty extinct these days).

 

Also, just to reiterate, when it's Fusion Summoned, all cards on the field are destroyed? But it's effect that prevents it from being targeted by monster effects counteracts that?

 

Really, I don't think you've given this card much though. You've just created something impossible and invincible, and I assume that it probably would be allowed in the TCG. However, it does no justice to the Yu-Gi-Oh! cardgame.

[Smesh]

Did any of you see it was an attachment!? Attachments are not allowed. Click on the card in card maker and a code will form below the card. Copy and paste that code onto a new thread.

[Vyrath]

This card can't be used.

(See "Obelisk the Tormentor", left low corner)

[dzx9000]

in my opinion its a great card but its a little overpowered and like "the tera void" said its easy to summon so my rate is 6.5/10 but other then that its a great card keep it up

[-Resistance-]

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[XT_011]

I don't really approve of the card, as I don't really agree that a God card should be allowed to fuse with anything, as it's pretty finite.

 

And no card should have the ability to be invincible. Every card must have a flaw, in my eyes at least. So I'd say no, this card shouldn't be legal.

 

The picture looks like BEUD in poor lighting. Try and find a picture that actually shows a combination of the two. Also, why is the card called 'Dark Eyes Dragon the Tormentor' when clearly the Dragon's eyes in your picture are white?. Confuzzled here. Also you missed out the Effect part in [Divine Beast / Effect]. Fix that.

 

If I did rate it, you should probably add an effect that stops players bypassing it. EG: "This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon.", just in case people play Traditional Format and are all like "LOL CYBER STEIN". (Then again, Traditional Format is pretty extinct these days).

 

Also, just to reiterate, when it's Fusion Summoned, all cards on the field are destroyed? But it's effect that prevents it from being targeted by monster effects counteracts that?

 

Really, I don't think you've given this card much though. You've just created something impossible and invincible, and I assume that it probably would be allowed in the TCG. However, it does no justice to the Yu-Gi-Oh! cardgame.

 

i am just a beginner u know. i was just making it for fun but thanks for the advice. i will put it for my next card :D