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This IS THE HERO'S OF TOMMOROW! thread. Current card count: 1. Started: 8/18/10. NEWS: NEW CARDS!

10 cards per pack

 

 

 

 

 

CARDS!

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Gold Dragon: Card 1 Added: 8/18/10

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Gold dragon V.2: CARD 2 added 8/18/10 Limited

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Gold Dragon v.GOD is banned card 3 8/18/10

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Maximum fusion X 8/18/10 Limited

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Dragon Serpent 6/18/10 Semi-Limited

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Dragon Synchron 8/19/10

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Gate warrior: Gorbor the brave 8/20/10

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Gate weapon: Gorbor's Blade 8/20/10

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Well, I might as well help.

 

A huge list of Fixes:

* For Gold Dragon V.God, there is no need to put "Effect 1:" or "Effect 2:". And do NOT put separate effects in different paragraphs, all effects are just one paragraph.

* "spell cards" or "trap cards" should be "Spell Cards" or "Trap Cards"

* "dragons" should be "Dragon-Type". You will also do this with other types such as Fish, Fiend, Beast, etc.

* When you refer to a card by name, you always put quotes around it. Example: "Gold Dragon" gains 200 ATK points.

* "attack" or "defense" should be "ATK" or "DEF".

However, this does not apply with positions. Example: "Attack Position" or "Defense Position"

* "deck" should be "Deck"

* "greaveyard" should be "Graveyard"

* "tributing" should be "Tributing"

 

~ For your Fusions, look at this card:

http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Blue-Eyes_Ultimate_Dragon

I think you'll see what you did wrong. Note: That Fusion monster has no effect, but Fusion Monsters can have effects.

Fusion Monster that has an Effect:

http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Elemental_Hero_Flame_Wingman

 

Fixed "Dragon Synchron":

Dragon-Type monsters on your side of the field gain 1000 ATK points.

Note: That effect is very Overpowered.

 

Again there's a problem with Gold Dragon V.God, I noticed you put a description AND an effect. Do not do that, a Effect Monster is an Effect Monster. A Normal Monster is an Normal Monster

 

Like other people have said, the pictures need work.

 

On an unrelated note: I see that you play Roblox.

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