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Diasukeuzumaki

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Hmm yeah it's pretty good for a first card. God Kaiba has a good point, change it to, you tribute all other monsters you control, and this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly Fix the OCG (official card grammar), capitalize beginnings of sentences and make spaces after periods, also capitalize words like Special Summon, End Phase, Normal Summon, Set, Life Points, Deck. Also don't try to make a new type unless it is in a whole set, make it Pyro or Beast.

BTW, is that the Nine-Tailed Fox from Naruto?

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