BlueDragonOmega Posted August 19, 2010 Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 Before the new format, I wrote a fanfiction taking elements from YuGiOh and fantasy books such as Alice in Wonderland. Well, it's BACK! AHHAHAHA! [spoiler=Chapter 1: The Next Queen of Games]As the sun shone down upon the city of Domino, a girl ran through the streets. Her blonde hair flowed in the wind like ribbons over her blue t-shirt and white skirt. Her icy-blue eyes held a look of despair and determination. "I'm late, I'm late, for a very important date!" she said in desperation, "Gotta get to Duel Academy, I'm late, I'm late, I'm LATE!" Her name was Alice Yuudai, an aspiring female Duelist who wants to enter Duel Academy. And soon, she'll become the focus of a series of unusual events, in her quest to become the first "Queen of Games." --- "Attention, DUELISTS!" a voice sounded through the speakers of the Duel Dome in which Duel Academy was enlisting students, "My Hair has found a Dark Magician Girl card, and it has been placed under my Hair's protection until its owner comes to claim it." Almost immediately, people who weren't dueling began speaking up. "Oh, that's mine." "No, it's not! It's MINE!" "Are you kidding? I lost mine earlier!" --- "Well, it appears no one else is going to enter," a random attendant noted, "Shall we begin shutting it down?" "Agreed," another attendant replied. "NO, WAIT!" a voice sounded out. "What the?" both of the attendants notices a blonde girl round the corner. "I apologize for my lack of promptness!" Alice replied, "I have come to enlist into Duel Academy, as Alice Yuudai!" "Good for you," one of the attendants replied. --- "Face it, kid!" one of the Duel Testers yelled at his opponent, a lanky teenage boy wearing a green jacket and matching top-hat, "With my Voorse Raider and Chthonian Soldier ready for combat, You've got no chance of winning! Why don't you go back to your pet rabbit and mouse and have a little tea party?" TESTER LP: 1000 "Let me ask you a riddle," the boy replied, "What kind of ring blows up like a bomb without anybody wearing it?" APPLICANT LP: 1200 "Destruction Ring," the Tester replied, "Inflicts 1000 damage to each opponent. With that, You'll probably win the duel. But it's a good thing it's not on the field." "Beg to differ," the boy replied, "Trap Card Activate! Destruction Ring!" "AH, C'MON!" KA-BOOM! TESTER LP: 0 APPLICANT LP: 200 "Not bad at all," Alice commented. A girl with snow-white hair with two spikes coming out like bunny-ears turned to her and asked, "Who're you?" "Alice," Alice replied, "Alice Yuudai." "Bunny," the girl replied. "Never heard of a girl having a name like that," Alice replied. "Family name," Bunny explained. Then the boy in the top-hat walked by. Alice turned to him and saw his face. His eyes were a deep green, and his hair was as black as a Red-Eyes Black Dragon. "Very interesting duel," Alice said, "What's your name?" "Henry Madigan," the boy replied. "I thought it was Hatter Madigan," some guy replied. "Shuddup." "My name is Alice Yuudai," Alice introduced herself. "Well, nice to meet you, Alice," Henry replied. "Attention Duelists!" The loudspeaker sounded again, "Will Miss Yuudai please report to Duel Field 5? Also, has anybody seen my hair? I've been looking for it everywhere!" "Guess I'm up," Alice replied, "It's Game Time." "Good luck," Bunny added. --- Alice entered the Duel Field and noticed that the Tester wasn't wearing the same uniform as the others. Rather, his uniform was bright red and unbuttoned. Also, he had brown hair with an orange highlight. "Hello, Miss Yuudai," the Tester welcomed her, "Here are the rules for the Exam Duel. One, You must duel your best, but you don't have to win necessarily." "And?" Alice asked. "Well, there aren't very many rules," the Tester replied, "Shall we begin?" "Very well then," Alice replied, "It's Game Time!" "So, we're beginning, huh?" the Tester smirked, "Fine. Get your Game on!" ALICE LP: 4000 TESTER LP: 4000 "I'll start," the Tester smiled, making his first draw, "To start off, I'll place two cards face down, then summon Elemental Hero Avian in attack mode! (1000/1000) I'll end my turn with that." As a man that looked like the American's idea of a hero appeared before the Tester, Alice nodded, then drew a card. "For my first turn," Alice stated, "I'll summon White Pawn Crusader in attack mode! (1300/1200)" A giant chesspiece appeared before her, then shifted into a human wearing some white variety of armor that looked relatively weak, armed with a pair of swords. "Next, I'll take down Avian!" Alice stated, "White Pawn Crusader, attack Avian!" the warrior nodded, then charged at Avian. "I activate the Trap Card, Hero Barrier!" the Tester replied, "Negating the attack!" Crusader struck an invisible barrier around Avian, then retreated. "If that's the case, I'll set one card face down and end it with that," Alice replied. "My turn," the Tester replied, "I'll summon Elemental Hero Burstinatrix (1200/800) to the field!" A long-haired woman with pale skin and red markings covering most of that skin emitted from the ground, then turned to Avian. Avian nodded in acknowledgment. "Next, I'll play Polymerization to bring forth another ally of theirs!" the Tester added, as the outlines of the two heroes blurred into a single shape, "So come on out, Elemental Hero Flame Wingman! (2100/1200)" The shape fully formed, to reveal another hero, with elements of a dragon on him. "Now, I'll use it to attack White Pawn Crusader-" "That's what you think! Trap Card - Mirror Maze!" Alice smirked, as a labyrinth made of mirrors bursted out of the ground, "This allows our monsters to switch sides and conduct the battle phase normally!" Suddenly, Flame Wingman and White Pawn Crusader appeared on alternate sides of the field. Flame Wingman scratched the Pawn, shattering it into a million pieces. TESTER LP: 3200 "And, according the effect of Flame Wingman, you take damage equal to the attack power of the White Pawn Crusader!" Alice smirked, as Flame Wingman fired a jet of flame from the dragon head on his left arm into the tester's face. TESTER LP: 1900 "My turn!" Alice drew a card, "I'll attack with Flame Wingman!" Flame Wingman nodded, then fired a fireball from the dragon head at the Tester. It hit, ending the Duel. TESTER LP: 0 "The game has been ended," Alice smiled, "Guess I'm a shoe-in for Duel Academy!" "Well, good job," the Tester replied, "Welcome to Duel Academy." "Thank you, Mr..." Alice frowned, "Never got that name." "Yuki," the Tester replied, "Jaden Yuki." "Thanks, Mr. Yuki," Alice replied, then went up to join her fellow students. [i]This kid has potential[/i], Jaden thought to himself. [i]Indeed[/i], Yubel replied, [i]Indeed.[/i] [i]I'm gonna have to keep a close eye on her, [/i]Jaden thought back... [b]TO BE CONTINUED...[/b][/spoiler] [spoiler=[b]CARDS PREMIERED:[/b]] [img]http://img816.imageshack.us/img816/339/27466.jpg[/img] White Pawn Crusader Light/Warrior/3/1300/1200 A warrior clad in white armor. They serve as the bulk of the White Chessboard Nation. [img]http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/339/27466.jpg[/img] Mirror Maze Trap/Counter Activate only when an opponent's monster declares an attack on one of your monsters. Switch control of both monsters and conduct the battle phase normally. Those monsters cannot change their battle positions for the rest of this turn.[/spoiler] Edit: Oh, wait, I found the original. Nevermind -.- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makο Posted August 19, 2010 Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 >.< ur taking stuff from YGOTAS and YGOGXTAS! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlueDragonOmega Posted August 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 [quote name='Mako109' timestamp='1282187916' post='4541200'] >.< ur taking stuff from YGOTAS and YGOGXTAS! [/quote] Actually, I'm HOMAGING it. There's a difference. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dzx9000 Posted August 19, 2010 Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 awesome series btw my i make a request when you post the other part please copy and paste it in an email for me to read thx in advanced Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlueDragonOmega Posted August 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 20, 2010 [spoiler=Chapter 2: Come for the Duels, stay for the Open Bar]The ocean held a sense of tranquility, as the giant helicopter approached Duel Academy Island. "If you'll look to your left," The pilot of the helicopter spoke from the speakers, "You'll see your home for the next four years, filled with friends, fellow duelists, and other cool stuff, like Shadow Riders, Alternative Universe, White Dorms, and good-natured people gone unexplainably evil. Enjoy your stay." "Did that guy just ruin four whole seasons of Yu-Gi-Oh GX?" Someone asked. "Shut up!" Everyone else replied. "Ruined four what now?" Henry asked. --- "Attention Students!" a man with a very interesting hairstyle, like a spire, yelled, "We have given you uniforms based on your skills in the Duels. Red means it could use a lot of work, and those people are called 'Slifer Reds.' Yellow means you're good, but not that good, and those people are called 'Ra Yellows.' Blue means you're top of the top, and those are 'Obelisk Blues'." "What about green?" someone asked. "Black means you're awesome, right?" another guy asked. "There are only three colors and dormitories!" the 'Hair Guy' responded. "Then why are some of us wearing white uniforms?" some girl asked. "It's an alternate color version of the standard uniforms," the 'Hair Guy' explained, "There has to be some other color in there." "Oh, now, I see it," the girl responded, "Wait, I'm a Red?" --- "So, we're both Ra Yellows, apparently," Alice noted. "Good to know that we'll be seeing each other a lot!" Bunny replied. Then, a guy in a Obelisk Blue Uniform walked by. "Hey, that guy's probably pretty good," Bunny observed, "Why else would he be in Obelisk Dorm?" "Yeah," Alice noted, "But he acted all high and mighty just because he's in the best dorm." "Yeah," Bunny replied, "Who does he think he is? Being humble is a rule of social engagement!" The guy stopped in his tracks, and turned almost suddenly, revealing his crystal blue eyes and darkish brown hair. "SCREW THE RULES!" The Obelisk Blue roared at the two, "I HAVE MONEY!!" "... oh," Alice said, almost timidly, "Sorry." "Great," Bunny whined, "I think I wet myself..." "Sucks to be you," the Obelisk Blue smirked, then turned and walked away. --- MEANWHILE, IN THE SLIFER RED DORM... "So," Henry looked out the window of his dorm, which happened to be a Slifer Red dorm, "I guess I gonna be here for a while." "Don't I know it," Henry's roommate, Majiru Bakura, added. His short, white hair complemented his uniform, a white one with red lines, "I only got in here because I took to insulting my tester in order to distract him. And I don't even remember thinking of it. It was like some sort of malevolent force was manipulating me." "No offense," Henry replied, "But that's just lame." "It could happen," Majiru reacted meekly. --- "... and we take a left and..." Alice walked into the Duel Arena, "This isn't the little girl's room!" "Remind me to smack you the next time you take directions from a blind guy," Bunny deadpanned. "Blind guy?" Alice turn to her, "I thought that he was wearing those sunglasses to look 'Cool.'" "He had a guide dog!" "I thought that was his PET dog." "He was wearing a Guide Dog jacket." "I thought that was a fashion statement!" "NO! WHAT THE HECK'S WRONG WITH YOU!" "Hey," a voice spoke up, "You two aren't supposed to be here!" The two looked up to see two Obelisk Blue girls standing by, Bunny adding, "Reaction shot" as she did so. "A couple of pathetic Ra Yellow girls," one of them, a pink-haired girl with hair reaching her legs, noted, "Shouldn't be a problem." "Y'Know," the other, purple-haired with short hair, added, "There was a time where only Obelisks were girls. Time sure changes, right?" "Stacy," the pink-haired girl replied, "I didn't care the first hundred times you noted that." "But it's kinda interesting," Stacy replied, "Isn't it, Mandy?" "No." "Okay," Bunny spoke up, "We don't want trouble, so we'll-" Footsteps clanked on the ground, catching everyone's attention. It was none other then the Obelisk with brown hair. "Ty-Sama!" Stacy yelled, "We were just ruining two perfectly good days, no big deal." "For your information, we were just trying to find the bathroom," Alice explained, "but a guy with sunglasses and a dog in a cute jacket told us to go the wrong way!" "Oh for the love of..." Bunny stated under her breath. "Hey, I know you," 'Ty-Sama' spoke, "You're that girl that beat Professor Yuki in a Duel. He's a good duelist. How he was able to lose to you escapes me." "Just luck," Alice winked. "Then, perhaps your luck may service you in a Duel against me," 'Ty-Sama' smirked, "Or it may not. Either way, I'd like to test that luck out." "Fine," Alice replied. "I'd like to Duel you sometime," 'Ty-Sama' grinned, "But first, lunch." --- LATER AT THE OBELISK BLUE GIRL'S DORM "So, they snapped his neck and he dropped to the floor." "Oh, how horrible!" "Poor Slifer..." --- AT THE OBELISK BLUE GUY'S DORM "So I got him in a vice lock and killed the bastard!" "W00T!" "Yeah!" --- AT THE RA YELLOW GIRL'S DORM "So, that Slifer had to pick a fight with a Ra Yellow and an Obelisk Blue. He wasn't lucky to survive." "Wow, how brutal was it?" "My God..." --- AT THE RA YELLOW GUY'S DORM "So me and an Obelisk Blue got in a fight with a Slifer Red and we KILLED the guy!" "YEA-HA!" "All right!" --- AT THE SLIFER RED GIRL'S DORM "So, that guy got killed by those two brutes." "How *sniffle* sad." --- AT THE SLIFER RED GUY'S DORM "So, we got in a fight, and my friend got killed!" "Ahhh, that sucks." --- After the Dinner, Alice was looking up duels on YouTube, when her phone rang. "Hello?" Alice answered it. "So, that Duel I mentioned earlier?" "Who is this?" Alice asked. "The Obelisk Blue that screws the rules because of his fortune." "Oh, hey," Alice replied, "So, why are you calling?" "I challenge you to a Duel!" "And how did you get my number?" "I know a guy. Now, get over here and duel me already!!!" "Fine... what's your name anyway?" "Tyler K-" Suddenly, the call was cut off, followed by a message saying, "Your caller could not continue the conversation, as they are just too rich. You noob." --- Alice entered the Duel Arena to see Tyler there. Bunny and Tyler's associates watched from the sidelines. "Good to see ya," Tyler smirked, his crystal blue eyes seeming to pierce Alice's icy ones. "No problem," Alice smiled as her Duel Disk engaged, "It's Game Time!" "Time to Duel!" Tyler replied. TYLER: 4000 LP ALICE: 4000 LP "My turn!" Tyler began, "I'll summon one monster to the field - Chthonian Soldier (1200/1400)!!" A soldier dressed in dark grey armor busted from the ground, muttering, "I'm a fatherless bastard." "One card facedown will end this turn for now," Tyler smiled, "Your move!" "I summon White Pawn Crusader! (1300/1200)" Alice smiled as the White warrior with Twin swords appeared before her, "And now, I'll attack Chthonian Soldier!" The White Pawn Crusader charged. "Pwn'd!" Tyler yelled, "Trap Card Activate! Sakuretsu Armor!" Suddenly, a hideous being covered in silver armor jumped up in between the two and struck a suckerpunch across the Crusader. the Crusader shattered instantly. "My Crusader!" Alice yelled in surprise. "Sakuretsu Armor destroys one monster in the middle of an attack," Tyler explained. "Fine," Alice said, setting a trap card and ending her turn. "I summon ANOTHER Chthonian Soldier!" Tyler smiled as a second soldier appeared. "I don't have a father, either!" the other Soldier said, "WHYYYY???? *sniffle.*" "There, there," the first soldier patted the second on the back. "Next, I play Double Summon!" Tyler smirked, "This allows me to normal summon one more time this turn! And I think I'll bring out something powerful by tributing my field's contents." "WAIT, WHAT!?" both Soldiers shouted, as they were tributed to summon an immense, dark grey and gold dragon. "Behold my Trump Card!" Tyler smiled, "Felgrand Dragon! (2800/2800)" "Awesome..." Alice muttered. "With that monster on Tyler's side," Bunny observed, "Alice is in big trouble." "Looks like your friend's toast!" Stacy smirked. "Get bent," Bunny snapped. "Now, I proceed to attack your life points with Felgrand Dragon!" Tyler yelled, as the dragon opened his mouth to reveal a glowing light at the end of his throat, "FALLEN BLAST!" The Dragon emitted a blast of golden light upon the girl before her. ALICE: 1200 LP "Then, I'll set a card face down and end my turn." Tyler smirked, "Your move!" "Fine," Alice drew a card, "I summon White Knight Striker in Defense Mode! (1600/1400)" A white knight chesspiece appeared before her, "Two cards face down will end my turn," Alice placed a card face down. "If that's the case," Tyler replied, drawing a card, "A llttle destruction might be nice, courtesy of my Lighting Vortex!" Suddenly, lighting struck the chesspiece, shattering it. "Now, your life points are wide open to a direct attack!" Tyler shouted. "Hey!" a Voice sounded from the halls nearby, "Is someone dueling past curfew?!" "Crap!" Tyler yelled, "The Duel ends with a draw! I'm out of here!" Tyler deactivated his Duel Disk, causing Felgrand Dragon to vanish. "TYLEEEEEEERRRRR KROOOOOOZTONNNN!" Tyler yelled as he ran off. "Huh?" Alice blinked, confused. "Hey!" a security guard walked in, "What're you doing here?" "... We were trying to find the Bathroom," Bunny replied. "Oh, okay," the Guard replied, "But why didn't you try asking directions?" "We asked a guy with a dog and cool sunglasses for directions," Alice lied, "But he told us to go the wrong way." "Damn blind guy," the Guard cursed, "Anyway, the Bathrooms on the other end of this hall." "Thanks," Alice smiled. --- "So, the Duel ended in a draw," Bunny noted as they walked back to Ra Yellow, "Lucky you." "I had two cards face down," Alice reminded her, "And one was Call of the Haunted. The other? Mirror Maze." "So?" "So I WOULD'VE won." "Oh. Good job." "Yeah, wonder what Tyler's thinking." --- "Man, I hate these damn nutritional milkshakes my father keeps sending!" Tyler shouted, as he squeezed the 'Nutrishake' in his hand, "Die, Nutrishake, Die. That's right, Nutrishake, your nutritional value is illegal! Now you go to Milkshake Prison."[/spoiler] [spoiler=Cards Premiered:] [img]http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/5062/59812.jpg[/img] (4/Warrior/Light/1600/1400) Once per turn, if this card destroyed your opponent's monster as a result of battle, it can attack again once in a row.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Character Explaining Tiem!] Tyler's first name is a common one, while his last name is based off of internet celebrity [b][i]KROOOOOOOOOZE!![/i][/b] His personality is based partially off of Abridged Kaiba. He's screwing the rules, 'cuz he has money.[/spoiler] Yeah, DESPITE the original still being up, I'll continue posting these chapters until chapter 5, around which I'll start posting new material Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dzx9000 Posted August 26, 2010 Report Share Posted August 26, 2010 dude i loooooooooooooooooooove your series congrats Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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