Makο Posted August 19, 2010 Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 [spoiler=Here They Are!][img]http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/5921/258841f.jpg[/img][img]http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/6238/258841.jpg[/img] [img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/3476/258841j.jpg[/img] [img]http://img844.imageshack.us/img844/6238/258841.jpg[/img][img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/6238/258841.jpg[/img] [img]http://img841.imageshack.us/img841/5921/258841f.jpg[/img][img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/9517/258841l.jpg[/img] [img]http://img830.imageshack.us/img830/3173/258841i.jpg[/img][img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/5921/258841f.jpg[/img] [img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/7927/258841x.jpg[/img][img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/4159/258841cn.jpg[/img] [img]http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/9517/258841l.jpg[/img][/spoiler] Made with some Help from Ilan. Thx man. [Edit] Edited versions made with the help and support of .Ghost Rider and Fiend. [Spoiler=MMM...Zerger King][img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/5343/258841s.jpg[/img] [img]http://img693.imageshack.us/img693/342/258841b.jpg[/img] [img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/6107/258841v.jpg[/img] [img]http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/7366/258841h.jpg[/img][img]http://img827.imageshack.us/img827/6564/258841t.jpg[/img][/spoiler] New Support Cards! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted August 19, 2010 Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 Too many fake types. Keep it to Warriors and Machines. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makο Posted August 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 *sigh* fine...but why don't you ignore the types and rate the cards themselves?[img]http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/dry.gif[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.GhostRyder Posted August 19, 2010 Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 [b][size="2"]As said before there are fake types which arnt neccicerlly alound but I will ignore that fact. I like the whole theme it is based around. Your ocg and wording needs a little work on. Here is a list of basics: Normal Summond or Set Draw Battle Phase Pm me if you want more help.[/size][/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted August 19, 2010 Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 I will, but I don't tolerate fake types. They just bother me. As far as the cards, most effects are bland and overused. Your pictures are great, and your balance is... okay. 5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makο Posted August 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 that was rather...discouraging...maybe I should stick to video games:(... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.GhostRyder Posted August 19, 2010 Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 [b][size="2"]O'rly? You havnt seen my comment? Your a gamer?[/size][/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makο Posted August 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 i saw yours, and I meant Fiend. Yours was just fine, and yes, I'm a gamer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted August 19, 2010 Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 It wasn't meant to discourage. It was my way of telling you you need to be more creative. Like, for Ghosts, their ability in the game is to cloak and call in nukes. You could make a good card from that. For example, a Ghost's effect could be: "This card cannot be selected as an attack target. This card cannot attack. Every turn this card is face-up on your field, put 1 Nuke Counter on it (max. 5). You can remove 5 Nuke Counters to deal 2000 damage to your opponent's Life Points." That was a really rough idea, but see how it really speculated on the abilities of Ghosts? That's all I was saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makο Posted August 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 I see...I was just thinking what these units are good against in the game. Ghosts are great against infantry, so i put its affect as such. ya know what? i am gonna change most effects, fake types, OCG, and ATK and DEF and re-post!!!![img]http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/laugh.gif[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.GhostRyder Posted August 19, 2010 Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 [b][size="2"]I dont like the way my name is being used. I dont own nukes *cough crap their onto us. cough* Dammed Cold. For better images use Devianart. People usually rate cards because of the image. Off Topic Alert: BTW PS3 or XBOX.[/size][/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted August 19, 2010 Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 [quote name='Mako109' timestamp='1282237438' post='4542805'] I see...I was just thinking what these units are good against in the game. Ghosts are great against infantry, so i put its affect as such. ya know what? i am gonna change most effects, fake types, OCG, and ATK and DEF and re-post!!!![img]http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/laugh.gif[/img] [/quote] Yeah, but that's not really that creative. BattleCruisers might have an ability to pay a certain amount of life points to increase the ATK by a substantial amount, somewhat mimicking the Yamato Ray. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makο Posted August 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 @Ghost Hey, i got those images from The Official SCII website. my "parental controls" prevents me from going anywhere thats not allowed, so my options were limited... Off Topic Alert: 360 @Fiend Well, what do you want me to do then? Give up? [img]http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/dry.gif[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.GhostRyder Posted August 19, 2010 Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 [b][size="2"]Parental Controls? They are just images. Devianart is a place where the images have been edited and suited for cards and sigs, ect. 360 rocks btw.[/size][/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makο Posted August 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 hey, if you want to argue wth my parents go right ahead. I can't do anything about it. BTW yea it does! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted August 19, 2010 Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 I don't want you to give up at all! I'm not trying to insult you! I'm trying to tell you that your cards will be rated A LOT better if you use more creative effects. The ones you have, while they are effective, they've been done WAY to many times. It's not enough to have a good theme for the cards, you need to execute that theme well, too. You just need to put more time into coming up with effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makο Posted August 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 hmm...maybe...err...! genius! redoing and reposting now! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted August 19, 2010 Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 Good. And also, through your time here, especially in the beginning, people aren't gonna think your cards are perfect the first time through. Don't be discouraged by it, let it help you learn from your mistakes. That's how you work your way up to 10/10s Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makο Posted August 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 alright. I will. How is this? [img]http://img682.imageshack.us/img682/6238/258841.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.GhostRyder Posted August 19, 2010 Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 [b][size="2"]Take your time. Every Bit counts.[/size][/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted August 19, 2010 Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 Here's a fix: "Once per turn, add a Yamato Counter to this card (max. 3). Once this card has 3 Yamato Counters, flip a coin. If the result is heads, deal 700 points of damage to your opponents Life Points. If the result is tails, deal 700 points of damage to your Life Points." I'm not positive about my OCG in there, but that's how it should sound. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makο Posted August 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 Can i copy paste that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted August 19, 2010 Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 Yeah, it's just a fix of yours. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makο Posted August 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 thx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted August 19, 2010 Report Share Posted August 19, 2010 No problem. That's exactly what I mean by creative effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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