Jaedumuth Posted August 21, 2010 Report Share Posted August 21, 2010 While admins are trying to save my original account from certain doom, I am resuming my card-making while I wait hopefully. I present to you, the latest addition to my Dark-themed set! Kazuki the Dark Clown! [center][spoiler="Kazuki the Dark Clown"] [center][img]http://img713.imageshack.us/img713/7204/270219.jpg[/img] [spoiler="Lore"] FLIP: This effect is activated when this card is flipped face-up after it was selected as an attack target. Change this card to Attack Position and increase the ATK of this card by an amount equal to the ATK of the attacking monster, until the End Phase. [/spoiler] [/center] [/spoiler] [/center] No, not Kazuki Takahashi, but Kazuki Shizuoka. Difference! And for once I am kind-of proud to say I am the original artist of the used image. Feel free to give me kudos. Or laugh at me. I want to keep the original idea of the effect, but I know there are some OCG errors and I'm not sure how to rephrase everything clearly. Also please give your opinion and constructive critique! Kthx! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaedumuth Posted August 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2010 Bump. Response? Rating? Anyone? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaedumuth Posted August 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2010 I'll just keep bumping this one every single day until someone comments. I'm serious, I put effort into this card and your opinions are important to me. I'll rep the first one who comments in a constructively critical way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vyrath Posted August 23, 2010 Report Share Posted August 23, 2010 Pretty basic card. OCG fix: "FLIP: This card can only be Flip Summoned when a monster your opponent controls declares an attack. The ATK of this card becomes the ATK of the attacking monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaedumuth Posted August 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2010 Thanks for the OCG fix, but that is ridiculously minimal critique. You're not even suggesting anything. You didn't even give a rating. Is it basic as in "boring" or as in "a useful basis for other things"? Because right now it's just a Man-Eater Bug with a slightly different effect, being that if you increase it's attack with another kind of card, it survives the attack and deals Battle Damage. I'm still waiting for the first actually useful constructive critique. I'll rep you anyway just because you're the first one, but I won't like it. Edit: How do you give rep? I'm not getting the Vote option in your profile. Edit: Hey, wait! The OCG fix is not correct! It is still Flip Summoned, but the effect does not activate. PLUS the opponent has to declare an attack on THIS card. That OCG fix is rubbish. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lolz Dialgaz Posted August 23, 2010 Report Share Posted August 23, 2010 the card is great, it kinda reminds me of saggi the dark clown...... 9/10 Nice Graphics by the way and it has a great effect, if i had this card i would use it in my beatdown deck.... GoodWork! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaedumuth Posted August 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2010 A rating! I wallow in joy. You will receive a rep just for your shameless flattery once I figure out how. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crossader Posted August 23, 2010 Report Share Posted August 23, 2010 OCG Fix: FLIP: This effect is activated when this card is flipped face-up after it was selected as an attack target. Change this card to Attack Position and increase the ATK of this card by an amount equal to the ATK of the attacking monster, until the End Phase. That's it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaedumuth Posted August 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2010 Alright, effect OCG updated, but now the ATK is immediatly increased with the attacking monster's ATK, so it's 200 ATK + attacking monster's ATK. It's better OCG-wise, but now the card's effect is not that both cards are destroyed, but that this card is always 200 ATK stronger. I still want it to have a base ATK so it's not COMPLETELY defenseless in Attack Position, but I want the effect have both monster's ATK to be equal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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