Doom Dusk Dragoon

[~Jay~]

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1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters
During your End Phase, you can discard 1 Zombie-Type monster in your hand to destroy 1 face-up monster on the field. During your opponent's End Phase, you can discard 1 card in your hand to destroy 1 face-down monster on the field. Once while this card is in the Graveyard, you can remove this card from play to, negate the Special Summon of a Level 8 or higher monster and destroy it.[/center][/b][/size]

[·Toot]

i guess this is kewl
nice OCG and effect
but that is an overused pic

8/10

[Jaedumuth]

This really fits a typical Dark-element "card-discarding" playing strategy, but overusing the effects for any and every threat might cost you all of your deck.

Personally, I think you should remove either the first or the second effect in which you discard cards; It is best to still somewhat limit the power of a card. If not, it might dominate the game and become the next dominant strategy.

Still, nice card! I'll give it a 7.5/10


Edit: Wait, what? You're female?!

[~Jay~]

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Edit: Wait, what? You're female?!
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Duh! A guy couldn't make any of my cards

[·Toot]

lol i love that confidence

[Where are my COOKIES]

I find it a bit OPed since you have the possibility of destroying a monster every turn.
Only error is an unnecessary comma.

8-10

Cool card.

[Archwing]

Ack! I found a Dirty Synchro - I MUST BURN IT!
Pic is good
Effect is good, I really like the last part (Bout the negatin teh LV 8 monster)
Not too OPed (Mabey make it so it can only destroy face down monsters with its effect?)
But shouldnt part of the Synchro material be a zombie?
OCG looks good
And i have run out of good comment juice sooooooo
*Facedesk* i bleed for your amusement....Ow....
9/10

[Monkey]

Too much 141 destruction. It's too OP'ed

[Subtlety]

personally, i wouldve made it more interesting, like destroy 2 zombies to destroy a tuner:D but you should pick one of the effects for it.
ALSO-who knew jay was a fine as hell girl?

[~Jay~]

@Subtlety: Uhm, thanks I guess lol

@ Monkey: Maybe so, I should probably add a Summoning restriction or something :/ Or get rid of the last effect

[Guest]

I love how I've known that your a girl and that one guy is hitting on you

Anyways to the card:

The double destruction effect is too strong during the current meta because your setting up your win condition while pretty much negating their field advantage monster wise.
Instead of making it just so you can destroy FD monsters I think it would be suitable for it to be a monster in general, even if its face up or down.

As stated before since it's a zombie support card you might want to use a zombie as a requirement, either as a tuner or a material.



My 2 cents my bffl~

[Subtlety]

nice double post. and i wasnt hitting on her. i said she was hot. big difference

[Guest]

I see no double post, and the is jokey.

My net sometimes glitches so I have to fix posts -shrug-

[Subtlety]

your interwebs are faulty.

[Zeaux]

Zombie Synchros usually use Plaguespreader Zombie Zombie as a Material since it is the only Zombie Tuner, until now. Just change it to "Plaguespreader Zombie" + 1 or more non Tuner monster OR make it a generic Synchro, with a lower ATK

[shelds9]

agreed with .Kan