Quantum™ Posted August 22, 2010 Report Share Posted August 22, 2010 [img]http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/1233/269475.jpg[/img] Effect: This card can only be Normal Summoned while you control 1 Trap Card. Once per turn, if you control 1 other Trap Card when this card attacks an opponent's Monster Card, place 1 Cursed Counter on this card (max.3). You can remove upto 3 Cursed Counters from this card to inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of Cursed Counters removed x 200. If you inflict more than 800 damage to your opponent during this turn, remove from play 1 Trap Card you control and destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls. Picture credit to Jazin Kay. My first card guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest fLare2 Posted August 22, 2010 Report Share Posted August 22, 2010 very good card like it a lot, 10/10 make it a 4 star monster and make the requirements 3 trap cards to normal summon it. Hope you make a ninja set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quantum™ Posted August 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2010 Thanks, by the way I changed my last bit of the effect with Shradow's suggestion and when I thought through I think it does sound a lot better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◎Kaleidoscope Posted August 22, 2010 Report Share Posted August 22, 2010 One of the best first cards I've seen in a while. A quick question: the way you have it worded, the 800 damage can come from anywhere. Is that what you want? Nice to see a newbie has found a good place for Images, and is crediting them. I think in the 1st sentence, you should change it to 2 Trap Cards. If the effect I mentioned ^^ is the way its worded, the card is balanced. If its only by the Counter effect, then the cards UP. Name is good, though I normally shy away from commas. Overall, for a 1st card, 8.8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quantum™ Posted August 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2010 [quote name='Static Nautilus' timestamp='1282494002' post='4553668'] One of the best first cards I've seen in a while. A quick question: the way you have it worded, the 800 damage can come from anywhere. Is that what you want? Nice to see a newbie has found a good place for Images, and is crediting them. I think in the 1st sentence, you should change it to 2 Trap Cards. If the effect I mentioned ^^ is the way its worded, the card is balanced. If its only by the Counter effect, then the cards UP. Name is good, though I normally shy away from commas. Overall, for a 1st card, 8.8/10. [/quote] 800 damage comes from anywhere. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quantum™ Posted August 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2010 This is disappointing. Why do all the bad cards get more replies and views? Shouldn't be happening... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serenity the Candyman Posted August 22, 2010 Report Share Posted August 22, 2010 i be mad. its just that they havent reconized genius when they see it.Great first card.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quantum™ Posted August 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2010 Thanks Senerity xD OK, maybe it is good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serenity the Candyman Posted August 23, 2010 Report Share Posted August 23, 2010 Never Doubt for it will corrupt the soul with anguish Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted August 23, 2010 Report Share Posted August 23, 2010 For your first card this is awesome Even if it weren't still great 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quantum™ Posted August 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2010 Thanks, bump! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
baily18 Posted August 24, 2010 Report Share Posted August 24, 2010 tons better than my first card 10/10 Good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quantum™ Posted August 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2010 Thanks baily =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted August 24, 2010 Report Share Posted August 24, 2010 [quote]This is disappointing. Why do all the bad cards get more replies and views? Shouldn't be happening... [/quote] Bad cards get tons of people yelling at them First cards get a few more people expecting it to be a fail, So that they can yell at it Singles get some attention Sets get very little attention..... Which i hate cause thats what i do the most >.< Anyway onto the card, The picture is great, The name is good, The effect is good, Im not sure about the OCG, Balance seems okay. 8.5/10 Waka Waka Waka Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quantum™ Posted August 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2010 I'm pretty sure the OCG is close to flawless. I read the book. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted August 24, 2010 Report Share Posted August 24, 2010 [quote]I'm pretty sure the OCG is close to flawless. I read the book. [/quote] I wasnt sure about it cause im horrible with OCG, I wasnt saying i thought it had a problem, i was saying i couldnt tell the diffrence if it did Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quantum™ Posted August 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2010 OK, thanks for commenting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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