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My First Card


Mp3beast

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Sorry about earlier, here they are.

[img]http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/2687/270812.jpg[/img]

Magical Knight Temari
Effect:If this monster is attacked by a Zombie-type monster, then destroy that monster at the end of the battle phase. Battle Calculation is applied normally.

[img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/2687/270812.jpg[/img]

Priestess of Eternal Ice
Effect:This monster cannot be destroyed by a "Fire" element monster.

These are my first two cards. Just experimenting, you know?
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Well, let me first say it's great you've made your 1st cards. If you want the cards to appear w/o a thumbnail (and thumbnails are frowned upon), just click the card when you've finished making it, and a link should appear below it. Your cards are good for a first try. However, OCG (official card grammar) could be improved, the effects are relatively simple, and not unique. They are balanced, though, and the images are fine. I would post an OCG fix, but I'm not really a expert myself.
For a n00b,7/10.

SORRY I posted wat the other people said, when I began, I was going to be the first.
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