MissionGenocide Posted August 22, 2010 Report Share Posted August 22, 2010 I had an idea for an archtype that had you and your opponent compete against each other to determine thier final power. Im still working on it but heres one Ive come up with so far, I think this will be one of the more powerful ones. Let me know if things need tweaking up/down so I can get the rest of them right [img]http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/6055/271038.jpg[/img] [b]Text[/b] [i]Unstable Stormkin Light/Thunder/Level 6/Effect/0/0 When this card is tribute summoned and during your standby phase, you may discard a card to increase this cards ATK by 500. Then your opponent may discard a card to decrease it's ATK by 200. Repeat this process until both players choose to not discard a card. If this card has 2000 or more ATK, when it attacks a defence posistion monster whose DEF is lower than this cards ATK, inflict the difference as battle damage to your opponent's lifepoints.[/i] Artwork by wenart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted August 22, 2010 Report Share Posted August 22, 2010 The first effect is wonky. OCG issues make it sound weird o.O. But i understand. Its really OP for a level 6. It can have a max of 12,000 ATK and a minimum of 9000. Far to OP for any level actually ):. That and this card can be heavily abused by DW and Fableds. I can fix the OCG. I suggest lowering the Increase to 500 and the decrease to 200. Then the max will be 3000 and the minimum will be 1700 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MissionGenocide Posted August 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2010 [quote name='♥Łövëły Ċ.Ċ♥' timestamp='1282508210' post='4554685'] The first effect is wonky. OCG issues make it sound weird o.O. But i understand. Its really OP for a level 6. It can have a max of 12,000 ATK and a minimum of 9000. Far to OP for any level actually ):. That and this card can be heavily abused by DW and Fableds. I can fix the OCG. I suggest lowering the Increase to 500 and the decrease to 200. Then the max will be 3000 and the minimum will be 1700 [/quote] Ah...I guess that is much to high. oops. I fixed the attack increase/decrease values but Im not sure how else to word his "compete" effect. Lol hopefully with trail and error I will be able to make non-OP cards heehee Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted August 22, 2010 Report Share Posted August 22, 2010 Lol it takes time ^^. I can edit the whole thing for you though "When this card is [b]Normal Summoned[/b] [s]and during your standby phase[/s], you [b]can send your hand to the Graveyard to have this card gain 500 ATK for each card sent[/b]. Then your opponent [b]can send their hand to the Graveyard to have this card lose 200 ATK for each card sent[/b]. If this card[b]'s ATK is 2000 or more, during battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent.[/b]" It's the same effect except the OCG is updated (I took out the "and during your standby phase" because that make this effect a kind of continuous effect which OPs it) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaedumuth Posted August 22, 2010 Report Share Posted August 22, 2010 Sounds like a very good card. In the best case, it can fight on par with a Blue Eyes White Dragon, and that for only a Level 6 Monster... That's pretty good. Then again, the opponent can prevent that. By the way, did you know there are cards that raise the limit of cards you can hold in your hand? Sounds pretty balanced thought. Pretend as if I'm giving you a thumbs up, but I still feel like there's something missing... I carefully suggest allowing both players to continue adjusting it's ATK during the time it is on the field, but I am not sure how. Anyway, I'm giving this a rating of: 7/10 Nice work. Kudos! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MissionGenocide Posted August 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2010 [quote name='KazukiShizuoka2' timestamp='1282514373' post='4555092'] Sounds like a very good card. In the best case, it can fight on par with a Blue Eyes White Dragon, and that for only a Level 6 Monster... That's pretty good. Then again, the opponent can prevent that. By the way, did you know there are cards that raise the limit of cards you can hold in your hand? Sounds pretty balanced thought. Pretend as if I'm giving you a thumbs up, but I still feel like there's something missing... I carefully suggest allowing both players to continue adjusting it's ATK during the time it is on the field, but I am not sure how. Anyway, I'm giving this a rating of: 7/10 Nice work. Kudos! [/quote] I might make a continous or field spell card for the Stormkin which allows them to adjust thier attack after theyve been summoned. and thank you both for your help :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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