► ®Ćŕý® ◄ Posted August 23, 2010 Report Share Posted August 23, 2010 Removed, May be locked. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweetie Belle Posted August 23, 2010 Report Share Posted August 23, 2010 Plenty of OCG errors, and your pic is a recolored Jinzo Anniversary Edition. Also, it can't be a Synchro; Jinzo is not a Tuner. Synchros need a Tuner. Also, he negates himself as well: "While this card remains Face-Up on the field, you may discard 2 cards from your hand to destroy 1 Monster or Spell Card on your opponents field." is negated by this: "While this card remains on the field no monster effects can be used." Keeping the entire effect, here's a fix for you: Dark Jinzo DARK | Level 8 [Machine / Synchro / Effect] "Jinzo" + 2 or more non-Tuner DARK monsters You can discard 2 cards to destroy 1 monster OR 1 face-up Spell Card your opponent controls. The effects of Monster Cards cannot be activated. ATK / 3200 DEF / 3000 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bahamut - Envoy of the End Posted August 23, 2010 Report Share Posted August 23, 2010 Dark Jinzo? As opposed to what? Light Jinzo? Good Jinzo? The dude is evil enough as it is. Plus no Tuners involved in summon (and the other monsters have to both be 1 star) Effect doesn't bare much resemblence to Jinzo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ovedrive Posted August 23, 2010 Report Share Posted August 23, 2010 OCG Fix [quote] [b]While this card remains Face-Up ( "Once per turn, during your _ Phase" sounds better there <--)[/b] on the field, by discarding 2 cards from your hand, destroy 1 Monster or Spell Card on your opponent's field. While this card remains on the field negate the effects of all Monsters on the field. [/quote] Negating effects of all Monsters on the field is OP'd. In the last sentence, u are negating this card's effect also. So u must put "except this card". The pic already exists. It's only background recolored. If you make it less op'd and with better pic, it would be good card... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
► ®Ćŕý® ◄ Posted August 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2010 [quote name='maximillianpegasus' timestamp='1282590214' post='4557774'] Plenty of OCG errors, and your pic is a recolored Jinzo Anniversary Edition. Also, it can't be a Synchro; Jinzo is not a Tuner. Synchros need a Tuner. Also, he negates himself as well: "While this card remains Face-Up on the field, you may discard 2 cards from your hand to destroy 1 Monster or Spell Card on your opponents field." is negated by this: "While this card remains on the field no monster effects can be used." Keeping the entire effect, here's a fix for you: Dark Jinzo DARK | Level 8 [Machine / Synchro / Effect] "Jinzo" + 2 or more non-Tuner DARK monsters You can discard 2 cards to destroy 1 monster OR 1 face-up Spell Card your opponent controls. The effects of Monster Cards cannot be activated. ATK / 3200 DEF / 3000 [/quote] I see, I never did a Synchro, so I never knew most of that good to have in my aresenal, I SHALL remove this card due to the fact of it being totaly off-set. >_> - Ryan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted August 23, 2010 Report Share Posted August 23, 2010 I'm gonna assume you mean "Dark Jinzo" as in negative energy or something. As far as the actual card, I like the idea, but it could be A LOT more creative. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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