My Second DBZ

[goku5538]

Rate, comment, advice to a noob like me.
yes I know they are overpowered as all saiyans are...

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[Abe - Demonic Sammich Guy]

i like it.

[WolfFan16]

Hope i get +rep for this
Overall-Set Id is different for all cards. make sure to do that. dont take the rating to seriously b/c i rarely do it anyway but 2/5
Goku-Needs a better image. Fake types are frowned upon here. Ocg and regular grammar is off. numbers are always their symbols (one=1).Tribute not tribute and ss2 goku should be in quotes. Op'ed
Kid Buu- it would be a better as a fusion. effect is much. the card would have 4000 ATk once summoned b/c 2 buus are already gone
majin buu- its a vanilla so its fine.
SS2 Gohan- again w/ the fake type. just make it a ritual card and also change the effect so it wont include the fake type
SS2 Goku- Add 1 more star (no longer commenting on fake types)
ss2 trunks- change effect like gohan
Ss2 vegeta- 1 more star
super buu- should read something like "red-eyes darkness dragon". needs a better image and the effect needs rewording (hopefully someone can comment on that because im not sure myself)
time machine- look @ monster reborn but include the trunks part.
trunks' sword- OCG errors
trunks- needs a better image. and OP'ed
unlock potential- ritual spell card
vegeta- better image. Op'ed. OCG errors
vegeto- should be "ss2 goku+ss2 vegeta". Op'ed effect
Saiyan A- better as a feild and just doesnt word due to fake types

[goku5538]

[quote name='WolfFan16' timestamp='1282613038' post='4559081']
Hope i get +rep for this
Overall-Set Id is different for all cards. make sure to do that. dont take the rating to seriously b/c i rarely do it anyway but 2/5
Goku-Needs a better image. Fake types are frowned upon here. Ocg and regular grammar is off. numbers are always their symbols (one=1).Tribute not tribute and ss2 goku should be in quotes. Op'ed
Kid Buu- it would be a better as a fusion. effect is much. the card would have 4000 ATk once summoned b/c 2 buus are already gone
majin buu- its a vanilla so its fine.
SS2 Gohan- again w/ the fake type. just make it a ritual card and also change the effect so it wont include the fake type
SS2 Goku- Add 1 more star (no longer commenting on fake types)
ss2 trunks- change effect like gohan
Ss2 vegeta- 1 more star
super buu- should read something like "red-eyes darkness dragon". needs a better image and the effect needs rewording (hopefully someone can comment on that because im not sure myself)
time machine- look @ monster reborn but include the trunks part.
trunks' sword- OCG errors
trunks- needs a better image. and OP'ed
unlock potential- ritual spell card
vegeta- better image. Op'ed. OCG errors
vegeto- should be "ss2 goku+ss2 vegeta". Op'ed effect
Saiyan A- better as a feild and just doesnt word due to fake types
[/quote]

thanks man, ill work on them!