Demodude08 Posted August 24, 2010 Report Share Posted August 24, 2010 More coming. [b][u][size="2"]THE OVERFORCE[/size][/u] THE OVERFORCE REALM[/b] is another realm, where the primordial elementals reign. Humankind is almost nonexistent, and those that do exist are geniuses; engineers and scholars. They decided, one day, to fight the Unstable Force, and so, built mechanical [b]GOLEMS[/b] for the primordial elementals to use as bodies. Although they fought valiantly, the Unstable Force still prevailed over them, and so they went to more extreme measures. Using more complex mechanical bodies, they harnessed the stronger powers of the primordial elementals. These bodies are known now as the [b]CORE OVERFORCE[/b], and allow the primordials a fighting chance. Still requiring more power, the humans combined their powers into the three primary fused Overforce; Steam, Sand, and Chaos. Requiring human pilots, these [b]ADVANCED OVERFORCE[/b] also lead to the development of more powerful bodies for the primordials, the [b]X OVERFORCE[/b], and combining the two, the Humans and the Primordials worked together to create the [b]ADVANCED X OVERFORCE[/b]. Will the Humans and Primordials prevail against the Unstable Force? Only time will tell. [b]OVERFORCE SUPPORT[/b] [img]http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/522/271660r.jpg[/img][img]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/1885/271660y.jpg[/img][img]http://img826.imageshack.us/img826/7308/271660d.jpg[/img][img]http://img826.imageshack.us/img826/498/271660i.jpg[/img][img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/7308/271660d.jpg[/img][img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/8130/271660.jpg[/img][img]http://img683.imageshack.us/img683/3700/271660s.jpg[/img][img]http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/8130/271660.jpg[/img][img]http://img843.imageshack.us/img843/4329/271660e.jpg[/img][img]http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/2352/271660xm.jpg[/img][img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/8130/271660.jpg[/img][img]http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/9959/271660h.jpg[/img][img]http://img825.imageshack.us/img825/9656/271660f.jpg[/img][img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/7308/271660d.jpg[/img] [b]CORE OVERFORCE[/b] [img]http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/9739/271660t.jpg[/img][img]http://img825.imageshack.us/img825/8593/271660fd.jpg[/img][img]http://img844.imageshack.us/img844/6605/271660j.jpg[/img][img]http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/7308/271660d.jpg[/img][img]http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/9656/271660f.jpg[/img][img]http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/9458/271660v.jpg[/img][img]http://img801.imageshack.us/img801/6605/271660j.jpg[/img][img]http://img801.imageshack.us/img801/866/271660c.jpg[/img] [b]ADVANCED OVERFORCE[/b] [img]http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/9959/271660h.jpg[/img][img]http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/7003/271660o.jpg[/img][img]http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/8130/271660.jpg[/img][img]http://img826.imageshack.us/img826/304/271660l.jpg[/img][img]http://img838.imageshack.us/img838/7154/271660k.jpg[/img][img]http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/866/271660c.jpg[/img][img]http://img682.imageshack.us/img682/6605/271660j.jpg[/img][img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/3700/271660s.jpg[/img][img]http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/498/271660i.jpg[/img][img]http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/1885/271660y.jpg[/img][img]http://img844.imageshack.us/img844/7003/271660o.jpg[/img][img]http://img683.imageshack.us/img683/8130/271660.jpg[/img][img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/8130/271660.jpg[/img] [b]UNSTABLE OVERFORCE[/b] [img]http://img843.imageshack.us/img843/615/271660p.jpg[/img][img]http://img839.imageshack.us/img839/2966/271660sx.jpg[/img][img]http://img801.imageshack.us/img801/3700/271660s.jpg[/img] [b]GAIA OVERFORCE[/b] [b]ULTIMATE OVERFORCE[/b] OCG fixes, OP/UP card fixes, suggestions, and comments are welcome and appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crossader Posted August 24, 2010 Report Share Posted August 24, 2010 Emm some of the images are good... btw... they are weak... all of them... 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demodude08 Posted August 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2010 Tis not finished. They are merely cannon fodder. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legiit Posted August 24, 2010 Report Share Posted August 24, 2010 very underpowered. 5 stars for 900atk and 1800 DEF?? no way... and all the other cards are underpowered. but the pics are nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demodude08 Posted August 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2010 Added the first advanced overforce, the purpose for the cannon fodder, "Overforce Adapter", which gains the abilities of whatever other overforce are on the field at the time.Finished the four primary advanced overforce Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raiza Posted August 24, 2010 Report Share Posted August 24, 2010 I like them. They are slightly underpowered although the pics are good and its got a nice concept. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demodude08 Posted August 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2010 Yay!Btw, if their UP, tell me how and how I should fix it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demodude08 Posted August 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 25, 2010 Added the first X overforce, Extremely powered up versions of the standard overforce. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demodude08 Posted August 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 25, 2010 Bump for comments.Updated "Overforce Reactor" to make it less OP'd. Now it gives a maximum boost to non-fused Overforce monsters of 200 attack and defense, and a maximum boost to fused overforce monsters of 400 attack and defense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted August 25, 2010 Report Share Posted August 25, 2010 Overforce Reactor- Picture is okay other than the text on it. It only helps a little. Overforce Fusion- Very useful for a set like this. My main complaint would be the pic is blurry. Overforce Stone- Picture has some text on it and the effect gives it 3000 DEF for a 5 star monster? Bit Oped... Overforce Wind- Picture is good, i guess its balanced so its fine Overforce Water- Quite a few OCG errors and text on the picture, Other than that its fine Overforce Fire- Text on the picture, Mabey Borderline OPed.... Overforce Death- Not crazy bout the name, Text on the pic, other than that its also okay Overforce Lightning- Bit UPed with the attack...Text on the pic but the pic is awsome so its fine Overforce Adapter- Uped for a 7 star monster pic is okay... Overforce Fusion monsters in general are all UPed except Fire x and Stone x who might be a little OPed I like how Fire and Water=Steam and Wind+Stone=Sand Overall The pics flux about in quality and so do the cards, in general they seem to be UPed, This is good for a new guy but you can do better, I like the idea so run with it. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted August 25, 2010 Report Share Posted August 25, 2010 Overforce Reactor- Picture is okay other than the text on it. It only helps a little. Overforce Fusion- Very useful for a set like this. My main complaint would be the pic is blurry. Overforce Stone- Picture has some text on it and the effect gives it 3000 DEF for a 5 star monster? Bit Oped... Overforce Wind- Picture is good, i guess its balanced so its fine Overforce Water- Quite a few OCG errors and text on the picture, Other than that its fine Overforce Fire- Text on the picture, Mabey Borderline OPed.... Overforce Death- Not crazy bout the name, Text on the pic, other than that its also okay Overforce Lightning- Bit UPed with the attack...Text on the pic but the pic is awsome so its fine Overforce Adapter- Uped for a 7 star monster pic is okay... Overforce Fusion monsters in general are all UPed except Fire x and Stone x who might be a little OPed I like how Fire and Water=Steam and Wind+Stone=Sand Overall The pics flux about in quality and so do the cards, in general they seem to be UPed, This is good for a new guy but you can do better, I like the idea so run with it. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted August 25, 2010 Report Share Posted August 25, 2010 Overforce Reactor- Picture is okay other than the text on it. It only helps a little. Overforce Fusion- Very useful for a set like this. My main complaint would be the pic is blurry. Overforce Stone- Picture has some text on it and the effect gives it 3000 DEF for a 5 star monster? Bit Oped... Overforce Wind- Picture is good, i guess its balanced so its fine Overforce Water- Quite a few OCG errors and text on the picture, Other than that its fine Overforce Fire- Text on the picture, Mabey Borderline OPed.... Overforce Death- Not crazy bout the name, Text on the pic, other than that its also okay Overforce Lightning- Bit UPed with the attack...Text on the pic but the pic is awsome so its fine Overforce Adapter- Uped for a 7 star monster pic is okay... Overforce Fusion monsters in general are all UPed except Fire x and Stone x who might be a little OPed I like how Fire and Water=Steam and Wind+Stone=Sand Overall The pics flux about in quality and so do the cards, in general they seem to be UPed, This is good for a new guy but you can do better, I like the idea so run with it. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demodude08 Posted August 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 25, 2010 Alright, but what exactly are the ocg errors on Overforce Water? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demodude08 Posted August 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 25, 2010 Alright, but what exactly are the ocg errors on Overforce Water? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demodude08 Posted August 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 25, 2010 Alright, but what exactly are the ocg errors on Overforce Water? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demodude08 Posted August 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 25, 2010 Alright, but what exactly are the ocg errors on Overforce Water? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demodude08 Posted August 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 25, 2010 Alright, but what exactly are the ocg errors on Overforce Water? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted August 25, 2010 Report Share Posted August 25, 2010 [s]im surprised it made it to 18[/s] lol im not like that the OCG is way off and they could hv better pics nice effort 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mojito465 Posted August 25, 2010 Report Share Posted August 25, 2010 I think they are all really good and the pictures r cool!!! Battle Phase is capital btw Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mojito465 Posted August 25, 2010 Report Share Posted August 25, 2010 accidental Double Post Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted August 25, 2010 Report Share Posted August 25, 2010 [s]im surprised it made it to 18[/s] lol im not like that the OCG is way off and they could hv better pics nice effort 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demodude08 Posted August 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 25, 2010 Arg so much miltipostI'm sorry if this stuff takes long, but my computer, if I may say bluntly, is being a total DICK.I am pleased to announce my computer has temporarily stopped dicking around. I have now started creating the next Overforce support, the "Unstable Overforce". Designed to act as a one shot cannon, the Unstable Overforce are immensely powerful, but only stick around for one turn, whereupon they disperse back to their fusion materials.Started adding Overforce support cards. Now came up with a story behind the Overforce. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demodude08 Posted August 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 25, 2010 Updated, with the 6 Primordials. Golem to come next. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demodude08 Posted August 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 25, 2010 Overforce Golem added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mojito465 Posted August 25, 2010 Report Share Posted August 25, 2010 Have you though of making a Overforce Magma a fusion made of Fire and Stone. P.S. why is Steam weaker than Fire But awsome other stuff. Maybe you should make some so they dont need to use polymerization, maybe remove from play the required monsters on your field to summon some of the fusions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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