Bahamut - Envoy of the End Posted August 25, 2010 Report Share Posted August 25, 2010 This is a prototype card for a powerhouse in my latest custom deck. A machine deck with swarming Support Mechs to use as tributes for the powerful Heavy Mechs, who soldier into battle solo, with only their Probe Units to aid them. Probes can either give protection to their Heavy Mech, or possibly be the main antagonists with the Mech offering them protection as a deterant. Without the support of the Probe Units, these tanks are able to activate their 'self destruct' effect, causing massive collateral damage, be it field or hand destruction or burn damage. This deck would consequently need a lot of magic support. It's all in early development right now. [img]http://img841.imageshack.us/img841/2804/258150.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only be Tribute Summoned if it would become the only Monster card on your side of the field as a result. While this card is on the field, you cannot summon monsters. When this card is summoned successfully, Special Summon 'Probe A' and 'Probe B' Tokens (FIRE, Machine, 1 Star, ATK 0, DEF 1500). If Heavy Mech Prototype is destroyed, destroy these Tokens. While 'Probe A' is on the field, this card gains 300 ATK. While 'Probe B' is on the field, this card is unaffected by Spell cards. If there are no Probe Tokens on the field, you can activate the following effect:- Destroy this card to destroy all Spell and Trap cards on your opponents side of the field.[/spoiler] Big mention to Black Makinkaizer who's Bizarro Sephiroth gave me the inspiration for this monster machine, and to JazinKay's brilliant archieve for the image. As ever all advice on an appropriate name, picture, OCG, and general effect would be greatly appreciated. Would like to shorten the text but not sure how, also may want a more Tank like image. If I get some good feedback and I can get more ideas I could develop this idea into a full deck. Thanks. Matt Bahamut Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted August 25, 2010 Report Share Posted August 25, 2010 Higher level maybe , and the might be some OCG errors Good pic and the effect looks good overall 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bahamut - Envoy of the End Posted August 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 25, 2010 This card has been up for 14 hours and I've had 1 reply. ONE!!! I am a mite peeved by that. and breathe... Rep to 5D's for the constructive advice, dunno bout bumping it up to Lv9 because the base stats aren't amazing for even a 7, depends on the support monsters I guess, Machines have a lot of support so maybe a 9 and a slight ATK boost. Anyone else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demodude08 Posted August 25, 2010 Report Share Posted August 25, 2010 I think it should be bumped up to 8, and have it's attack increased to 2500. It IS a heavy mech, after all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
burnvictimOv Posted August 25, 2010 Report Share Posted August 25, 2010 I like the pic, name, and the effect is cool and creative, keep up stuff like this and make it a full deck i think it would be cool [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/218666-alien-invader-finished/"]Alien Invader Finished[/url] This is my first completely finished set, and i would really like some feed back, even if you dont want to look at them all please skim and reply Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bahamut - Envoy of the End Posted August 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 26, 2010 Thanks for the positive feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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