royal digimon set

[kaijinzero]

hi peopls, my name is kaijinzero. im creating a set with a few digimon, 21 in fact. they will feature the royal knights, plus 8 others.

[Мερhilεs]

[color="#FF8C00"][center][b]Here, these are some tips for your "victory greymon"

1) I believe the name should be capitalized, so instead of "victory greymon", it's "Victory Greymon". However you don't have to capitalize words like "the", of course.

2) Most pictures that do not have a background most people find lacking. I reccomend staying away from pics with white or plain backgrounds, because sometimes the thing that attracts people to a card is how it looks.

3) Your card is overpowered for it's Level. I'm pretty sure that there's a (unspoken) rule about making a Vanilla (normal) monster with more than 3000 ATK. I don't know why, but I think it concerns Blue-Eyes White Dragon. Since your card is Level 8, you could keep the ATK your card already has and make it Level 9, or reduce the ATK to make it suitable for a Level 8 (I reccomend about 3000 / 2600-ish).

The one other thing I think would make your card better is an effect instead of just plain old flavor text. Flavor text can be interesting, but unfortunately "victory greymon"s is a little dull in my opinion. A great effect would make it so much better. Try to keep your OCG decent to, and your grammer in flavor text too. Good luck.[/b][/center][/color]

[kaijinzero]

thanks dude. ill try to fix that soon.