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Saiba Aisu

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Ok, I've been a bit inactive as of late, so here is an unusual attempt of mine to regain my old skill...a mini-set of three unique monsters.

 

The monsters gain effects when they are sent to the Graveyard except as a result of battle (i.e. Card Effects, Tributed, etc.). However, some, like Elena required their effects to be activated. So if your opponent has no monsters out, tough luck, you'll have to destroy one of yours. However, you could just destroy her again...

 

CyberBunnyElena.png

 

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"Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can offer 1 Lvl 3 or lower monster on your side of the field to increase the ATK of this card by 100. When this card destroys a monster as a result of battle during a turn when you offered a monster for this card's effect, inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the DEF of the destroyed monster."

 

Please comment/rate! I hope I got the OCG right.

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"Inactive"

 

Should be Beast-Warriors or Warriors

 

"As a result of battle" has been changed to "by battle".

 

Elena - "When this card is sent to the Graveyard except by battle, it can be Special Summoned in ATK Position during your next Standby Phase."

 

Tori - Same edits as Elena, just differently. You're a smart person, you should get it.

 

Destroyer - "You can Tribute 1 LV3 or lower"

 

"offer" = "Tribute"

 

Not bad overall

 

Nice ideas ^_^

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Thanks for "inactive." And I like them as Beasts, lol? ^^ And thanks, I am smart...but I'm quite sure you'll find that it's "In face-up Attack Position." Observe.

 

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And darn, I was so sure it was "offered." Ok, will change. And thanks, hopefully I can get back my old skills... :[

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Saiba Aisu

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Oh lol

 

No' date=' face-up ATK is right

 

I just forgot to type face-up in xP

 

The main thing there was just the wording lol

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Wait...so do I keep the abbreviation? (ATK) The picture says otherwise...or maybe the new cards are like that?

 

>.<

You're making me fret my pretty head! lol

Kindly explain-so my migraine can go away. O.O

And it's not really a Set-it's a mini-set. I will make the other changes though... Thanks, Yankee.

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There good cards but the first and second ones are basically the exact opposite so I think you could have come up with a different idea to make them not resemble each other like they do, and the last one's level should go up as it is a good card and some cards should have be summoned with a sacrifice and I think that is one of them.

And also why do all of them have to have effect. Yeah, effects make a card stronger but what if in the middle of a duel you forget what the effect and you would waste so much time reading over the effects and the cause of that would be because almost every card has an effect.

I do like your cards but I'm just saying maybe make more cards like that but not all of them should have effects and make sure you think of a fresh idea when making a new card.

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There good cards but the first and second ones are basically the exact opposite so I think you could have come up with a different idea to make them not resemble each other like they do' date=' and the last one's level should go up as it is a good card and some cards should have be summoned with a sacrifice and I think that is one of them.

And also why do all of them have to have effect. Yeah, effects make a card stronger but what if in the middle of a duel you forget what the effect and you would waste so much time reading over the effects and the cause of that would be because almost every card has an effect.

I do like your cards but I'm just saying maybe make more cards like that but not all of them should have effects and make sure you think of a fresh idea when making a new card.

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I'm quite glad to hear that you like them. I am sure that Rabbit Destroyer, and Cyber Bunny Elena and Tori are meant to work together. And I'm sorry, but most members don't take too kindly to making Normal monsters...just a hint since you're quite obviously still wet behind the ears. And in a Duel, effects shouldn't take more than a minute to read. That is, of course, if you are a competent Duelist. *Er-hem* Moving on...and I did think of a fresh idea when making these. Hardly any cards have effects that activate by being sent to the Graveyard except by battle, and no one has ever made Bunny Girl cards. Thanks for your comment...anyways.

 

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6.5/10 simple rating:-)

 

O.O I thought we went over this? Why do you rate so lowly for no reason? Ridiculous, especially since most people think I'm a better card maker than you...no offense, but it is actually kind of sad. Oh well. Thanks anyways. Anyone else?

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There good cards but the first and second ones are basically the exact opposite so I think you could have come up with a different idea to make them not resemble each other like they do' date=' and the last one's level should go up as it is a good card and some cards should have be summoned with a sacrifice and I think that is one of them.

And also why do all of them have to have effect. Yeah, effects make a card stronger but what if in the middle of a duel you forget what the effect and you would waste so much time reading over the effects and the cause of that would be because almost every card has an effect.

I do like your cards but I'm just saying maybe make more cards like that but not all of them should have effects and make sure you think of a fresh idea when making a new card.

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No. You're wrong.

 

Normal monsters are crap. Never make a normal monster.

 

Effects = good.

 

6.5/10 simple rating:-)

 

O.O I thought we went over this? Why do you rate so lowly for no reason? Ridiculous' date=' especially since most people think I'm a better card maker than you...no offense, but it is actually kind of sad. Oh well. Thanks anyways. Anyone else?

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Look. I'ma be straight with you.

 

That ego of yours is killing me. If you get a 6.5, you get a 6.5. That's it.

 

Would you rather get a 6.5 from him, or a 1 from me?

 

And yes, I do give 1s. I will rarely give more than an 8/10.

 

So relax. Think of it this way.

 

According to you, you're such a great card maker.

 

A good card maker will generally have high standards set for him/her.

 

If you get a bad review, that means that either:

 

A. The person is new, hasn't seen your cards before and doesn't like them. [Not very likely]

 

B. The person just randomly goes to threads and posts a random number [Not very likely to see anything less than a 9 here though]

 

C. Your cards really are crap, and your ego is too big [Probably not this one either though]

 

D. You are not living up to expectations [Dingdingdingdingding]

 

So if you get a low score, you're probably not living up to expectations. What does this mean? Bias. Yes, bias.

 

Now, I don't implement personal biases in my reviews [for scores only. I may leave the occasional comment saying something like, "I know you can do better than this" or whatnot, but yeah] but there are certainly people who do.

 

Thus, for me, option D does not exist. But for many other people, it does. For God Kaiba, it probably does. So don't cry about a 6.5... It's your fault for not living up to the expectations set for you.

 

I could apologize for the bluntness of this post, but it's the truth.

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Oh, no. I'm not whining...the thing is that GodKaiba rather seems to have a high opinion of his own cards...a fact which many members have proven wrong again and again. And if he thinks they got a 6.5, then he can think as he likes. I've never complained about ratings before...I only complain when people rate and don't explain why. "Simple rating" doesn't qualify for me...I don't know about others, that's just my opinion. And yes, I am rather egotistical...but not too much. I like to think I am better than most-but I know that I am not anything spectacular. Sorry if I sounded stuck-up, that wasn't my intention.

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Maybe Kaiba is just jealous.

 

Excellent cards, change that "offered" though, you may not know it, but I was the one who brought the OCG term to YCM ;) So if you got any questions, PM me.

 

Superb pictures.

 

8/10

 

 

 

 

 

... for the case if you don't accept that, I'm a harsh rater. One who believes giving a 10/10 is impossible, just because there are no perfect cards! And I also look onto the SIZE of the set.... and since it's so small yet, I can't give very much. And 8/10 is actually a REAL compliment from my side.

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