Death12328 Posted January 16, 2008 Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 16, 2008 Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 Ummm, the grammr is off, and it can be a bit strong,6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death12328 Posted January 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 Its ocg is off? Weird.. its the "Once per turn" part isn't it? If so simple clarifying: When a card doesn't specify when it goes off for the Once Per Turn trick, its actually during your turn, same thing with the effects of the Cloudians, Six Samurai and others who have that wording.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted January 16, 2008 Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 OCG is fine. No errors. Hella overpowered. 2000 ATK at LV4 that kills a monster every turn??? You kidding me? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death12328 Posted January 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 Probably, but then again "Only during your turn" is the ruling for cards "Once Per Turn" effects that don't specify things like "Once per turn, during the main phase" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alordzynix Posted January 16, 2008 Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 Hella overpowered. 2000 ATK at LV4 that kills a monster every turn??? You kidding me? Thats what I wanted to say XD! Any way I would try a lower ATK and a Higher Level. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted January 16, 2008 Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 Probably' date=' but then again "Only during your turn" is the ruling for cards "Once Per Turn" effects that don't specify things like "Once per turn, during the main phase"[/quote'] What? Take ALZ's advice. Actually, no. It will still be broken. Unless you make it like, 2 tribute... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death12328 Posted January 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 I will adjust the attack... though for future thought: -It cannot hit the player even if equipped with Shooting Star Bow - Ceal-The 2nd effect only happens during the controllers turn, as the ruling for Once Per Turn effects that don't specify what Phase they go off happen during your turn ONLY. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted January 16, 2008 Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 I will adjust the attack... though for future thought: -It cannot hit the player even if equipped with Shooting Star Bow - Ceal-The 2nd effect only happens during the controllers turn' date=' as the ruling for Once Per Turn effects that don't specify what Phase they go off happen during your turn ONLY.[/quote'] It doesn't matter. Smashing Ground does the same thing. It's limited to 1. If this card was real, since it can do it as many times as you want, it would be banned. Keep it over 1500 ATK though, so it can't be specialed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death12328 Posted January 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 2 tribute dinner with extra spice... Also please don't tell me are thinking on the ruling of cards like the Six Samurai, I checked that with a judge (who knows what hes doing) and told me for instance that Yaichi's ability is a "During my turn" effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted January 16, 2008 Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 2 tribute dinner with extra spice... Also please don't tell me are thinking on the ruling of cards like the Six Samurai' date=' I checked that with a judge (who knows what hes doing) and told me for instance that Yaichi's ability is a "During my turn" effect.[/quote'] Nope. Still broke. Make the ATK around 1550. Or maybe 1900. 1550 is unusable... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 16, 2008 Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 Ok, sry about my first comment, I wan actually looking at another card, an though I was typing on there, but apparently not, sry, anyway, listen to Bhim, he has is perfect on the idea ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death12328 Posted January 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 Okay rip out the 2nd effect, basically you got a Dark Magician who cannot attack directly... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 16, 2008 Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 No, I want that effect, just make it have a lower ATK, like 1500. I'd like that is it was 1500, keep everything else ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death12328 Posted January 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 Made one change I should have just made from the beginning, replaced "highest" with "lowest" Now its not much of a change but if your opponent has say 4 Scapegoats and a Mobius the Frost Monarch, your going to hit the token, and still have little Suzuki against big Monarch. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted January 16, 2008 Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 So if you rip out the second effect, it's useless. Thus, it shouldn't be made. Sometimes cards need to be killed. Unless you take the advice I gave you, you're gonna have to kill this one off... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death12328 Posted January 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 Made a edit to the card, bhim/zyzzyx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted January 16, 2008 Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 Already did See post 11. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death12328 Posted January 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 Gave her a requirement Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted January 16, 2008 Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 Still not feeling it. It's easy to get EARTH monsters in the grave... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death12328 Posted January 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 New version, again, this one has the Special & Normal Summon requirements swapped so she can only be Normal Summoned... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted January 16, 2008 Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 It's not a normal summon then. It's still a special summon But w/e It's still too easy to get out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death12328 Posted January 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 Different requirement... I not tossing this card, the "Failed Experiment" cabinet is over flooded but this card has the chance to be playable just needs the right kick (of spices) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alordzynix Posted January 16, 2008 Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 Different requirement... I not tossing this card' date=' the "Failed Experiment" cabinet is over flooded but this card has the chance to be playable just needs the right kick (of spices)[/quote'] it isn't overpowerd anymore its UNDERPOWERD. Discarding four cards is to much a requirment and maybe still overpowerd for Dark World Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted January 16, 2008 Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 Discarding doesnt' help DW. It's not underpowered... Just unusable, really. Still no good. You need to find the perfect balance, and the one I suggested in post 11 is about as close as you're gonna get [at least tonight]... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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