Trying something new

[TitanKing]

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PG-13
[Spoiler=En-001][img]http://a.imageshack.us/img291/2328/rbmd.jpg[/img]
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set. You can pay 500 Life Points to change the Battle Positions on your opponent's side of the field. This card cannot attack during the turn this effect was activated. Once per turn, if this card is in your Graveyard, you can discard 1 Dragon-Type Monster from your hand to Special Summon this card from your Graveyard.[/spoiler]
[Spoiler=En-002][img]http://a.imageshack.us/img96/8098/lionessw.jpg[/img]
When this card is Summoned you can select 1 Plant-Type monster in your Graveyard and add it to your hand. When this card is sent to the Graveyard Special Summon 1 "Flower Token" (Plant-Type/WIND/Level 3/ATK 500/DEF 500) in Defense Position. While this card is in your Graveyard you can discard 1 card from your hand to Special Summon 1 Additional "Flower Token". [/spoiler]
[Spoiler=En-003][img]http://a.imageshack.us/img827/4975/airydragon.jpg[/img]
Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower monster from your hand. You cannot conduct your Battle Phase the turn you activate this effect. When this card attacks you can half this card ATK to make a direct attack. During the End Phase you can discard 1 card from your hand to add 1 Fiend Spell from your Graveyard to your hand. [/spoiler]
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[Codeson]

Wow nice.
Bit hard to read the text at times.
Effects are nice.

[Demodude08]

[quote name='Codeson' timestamp='1282945445' post='4572146']
Wow nice.
Bit hard to read the text at times.
Effects are nice.
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What he said

[Duplicitous]

No comment. [b]Cards are awesome.[/b]

[TitanKing]

I need useful comments

[Engetsu]

Pretty awesome looking cards

The text is somewhat hard to read, but it isn't much of an issue as long as you post the card lore.

Your first card, R.B.M Dragoness, is kinda hard to bring out since it can't be Normal Summoned, and that you didn't give it a Special Summoning requirement (which makes it even harder to summon). Give it a Special Summoning requirement, nothing too easy and nothing too difficult.

For Dandyful Lioness, you have some slight OCG error's.

Place a comma after "Summoned" in the first effect, and after Graveyard for the second and third effect.

Remove "Additional". It's not necessary, so remember that as a future reference when making other cards.

As for Fairy Dragoness, you have a couple OCG errors.

"When this card attacks you can half this card ATK to make a direct attack." Kinda odd to halve it's attack when it's attacking a monster, just so it change it to direct attack...so change it to this "If your opponent's monsters are all in Defense position, this card can attack your opponent directly" or something like that.

For the last effect of Fairy Dragoness, does this apply for either player's End Phases? Or just yours? Also it's "Field" not "Fiend" so correct that slight mistake. Also, place a comma after "End Phase".

Just fix up the slight OCG errors and you'll be good.

Hope this helps

Oh and 1+ Rep, for making these awesome cards.

[Phantom M.C.]

pic, details: 5/5 for all 3 cards
LOVE the pics btw ;D
PLZ tell me where you got them?

effects: rbm dragoness
rather annoying effect, can get your opponent's monsters into atk for damage, or if the have a low def, for easy destruction. summoning conditions sort of balance it, but still easy with a redmd. so this is a good card

dandyful lioness
upgraded version of dandylion, useful and is gonna get semi-limited for sure.

fairy dragoness
seems odd a fairy has a direct attack effect like this, but yeah, fairies need more firepower. the field spell effect is rather useful, good to get sanctuary or any other field spell back when its destroyed. honestly, this card could actually be splashable in many decks. good card. my favorite one out of the 3