Some Zombies and Fiends

[Cryohydra911]

Some more recently made cards that I have made. Possible the only relations between them all is that they are all DARK monsters.

[img]http://img829.imageshack.us/img829/9598/254322v.jpg[/img]
[b]Once per turn, during your End Phase, if you have no more than two monsters on your
side of the field (including this one), then you can remove from play 1 DARK monster from
your Graveyard to Special Summon 1 DARK monster whose Level is equal to or lower than
the DARK monster removed from play. This card is also treated as a Zombie-Type
monster when applicable.[/b]
[img]http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/8904/254322t.jpg[/img]
[b]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. When this card is Special Summoned,
destroy all monsters on the field except for Zombie-Types, excluding this card. Increase all
Zombie-Type monsters' ATK and DEF by 200. During your next Standby Phase, decrease
the ATK and DEF of this card by 500.[/b]
[img]http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/9717/254322g.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/5899/254322f.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/6821/254322l.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/5899/254322f.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img28.imageshack.us/img28/7232/254322b.jpg[/img]
[b]This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to the owner's hand the turn it is
Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned or flipped face-up. If this card is flipped face-up because
of an attacking monster and is not destroyed by battle, you may increase the ATK of this card
by 400 until this card returns to your hand.[/b]

And then, some spell cards to go along with them.

[img]http://img203.imageshack.us/img203/1120/254322k.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/1120/254322k.jpg[/img]

[zacharyd527]

good cards

[Card Board Box]

[quote name='zacharyd527' timestamp='1283047175' post='4576757']
good cards
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[color="#9932CC"][size="4"]GEE, THAT WAS HELPFUL! [/sarcasm]

Let's see...
* Cards do not have 2 Types. Look at your "Necromantic Queen"

* "you may" should be "you can"
* "Zombie-type" should be "Zombie-Type"

* @ Ecara Infernous:
", discard all monsters on the field" should be ", destroy all monsters on the field"

* @ Yjirueji
"and wins the battle" should be "and is destroyed by battle"

* "defense position" should be "Defense Position" (Also applies with "Attack Position")
* "face up" should be "face-up" (Also applies with "face-down")
* "two" should be "2" (Also applies with other numbers)

OCG needs quite a bit of work...
Pictures are good except for "Pits of Fiends" (I think the name should be "Pit of Fiends"), Ithink you could find a better picture that's not from Star Wars.

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[Cryohydra911]

[quote name='Card Board Box' timestamp='1283103775' post='4578590']
[color="#9932CC"][size="4"]GEE, THAT WAS HELPFUL! [/sarcasm]

Let's see...
* Cards do not have 2 Types. Look at your "Necromantic Queen"

* "you may" should be "you can"
* "Zombie-type" should be "Zombie-Type"

* @ Ecara Infernous:
", discard all monsters on the field" should be ", destroy all monsters on the field"

* @ Yjirueji
"and wins the battle" should be "and is destroyed by battle"

* "defense position" should be "Defense Position" (Also applies with "Attack Position")
* "face up" should be "face-up" (Also applies with "face-down")
* "two" should be "2" (Also applies with other numbers)

OCG needs quite a bit of work...
Pictures are good except for "Pits of Fiends" (I think the name should be "Pit of Fiends"), Ithink you could find a better picture that's not from Star Wars.

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Thanks for the advice, but two things.

1. With Yjireuji, it would not make sense if "and wins the battle" becomes "and is destroyed by battle." If Yjireuji was destroyed by battle, how would it make sense to increase its attack by 500? It would be in the graveyard, and it couldn't do anything. I don't understand that piece of advice.

2. I'll change the name for "Pits of Fiends," as you are correct. It is a typo that I didn't intend and didn't see until you mentioned it. I also didn't know the pic was from Star Wars, lol.

I'll apply all other changes that I think my cards will benefit from. Again, thanks for the advice.

[Card Board Box]

[color="#9932CC"][size="4"]Oops. xD

If you mean't Yjirueji wins the battle (he is not destroyed), it would be:

"and is not destroyed by battle"
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[Cryohydra911]

[quote name='Card Board Box' timestamp='1283126485' post='4580074']
[color="#9932CC"][size="4"]Oops. xD

If you mean't Yjirueji wins the battle (he is not destroyed), it would be:

"and is not destroyed by battle"
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Oh. Okay.

Okay, got the revised cards up on the thread.
I couldn't find a better pic, though, so the Star Wars one will have to do for now.

[The God of Darkness]

good cards