FGH - Feminatrix Gone Haywire

[Rosstein]

Since the last topic I made about them, I added more monsters, edited a few existing ones and -ofcourse- always tried to stay within the boundries of not being overpowered. They're meant to be top-tier, but not broken.

The idea of this set is to get an adventage when having more LP than you're opponent and having to pay a cost when your LP is lower. However, as the set progressed, this idea only ended up in Feminatrix Atmosphere, with most of the other Feminatrix monsters only increasing LP. I was wondering if that's good enough, or if I should put "While your Life Points are higher than..." in more Feminatrix cards.

The two most important cards:
[img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/9393/15299.jpg[/img][img]http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/9393/15299.jpg[/img]


So without further ado, here's the rest:

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[spoiler=Amason, Amazon of the Feminatrix]
[img]http://img130.imageshack.us/img130/9393/15299.jpg[/img]
If this card is the only monster on your side of the field, it is not destroyed by the effects of Monster, Spell and Trap Cards and it can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. Once per turn you can send all other "Feminatrix" monsters from your side of the field to the Graveyard and destroy 1 card on the field.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Ambush of the Feminatrix]
[img]http://img713.imageshack.us/img713/9393/15299.jpg[/img]
You can only activate this effect if there is a face-up "Feminatrix" monster on your side of the field. Negate the attack of 1 monster your opponent controls and destroy the attacking monster. Inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to half the ATK of the destroyed monster.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Angelic Guidance of the Feminatrix]
[img]http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/9393/15299.jpg[/img]
Each time a "Feminatrix" monster is removed from the field, place 1 Angel Counter on this card (max. 2). You can send this card to the Graveyard to draw 1 card for each Angel Counter on this card. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, except by it's own effect, you can destroy 1 card on your opponent's side of the field for every Angel Counter that was on this card.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Djävul, Fiend of the Feminatrix]
[img]http://img818.imageshack.us/img818/9393/15299.jpg[/img]
Once per turn, you can place 1 "Feminatrix Counter" on a monster your opponent controls. Monsters with a "Feminatrix Counter" can not attack this card. During the Battle Phase, instead of atticking with this card, you can increase your Life Points equal to the ATK or DEF of a monster with a "Feminatrix Counter".[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Drottning, Queen of the Feminatrix]
[img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/9393/15299.jpg[/img]
"Furstinna, Princess of the Feminatrix" + 1 or more non-Tuner "Feminatrix" Monsters
When your opponent Special Summons a monster, he/she must discard 1 card. If they can not, negate the activation of the Special Summon and destroy the Summoned monster. When your opponent activates the effect of an Effect Monster, he/she can discard 1 card. If they do not, it's effect is negated.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Drotting II, Little Queen of the Feminatrix]
[img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/1382/15299b.jpg[/img]
If you control a "Drottning, Queen of the Feminatrix", you can Special Summon this card from your hand or Graveyard. As long as you control another "Feminatrix" monster with a different name on your side of the field, this card is not destroyed as a result of battle and you take no Battle Damage from a battle involving this card. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card to destroy 1 card on the field, but your opponent can negate this effect by discarding 1 card.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Feminatrix Atmosphere]
[img]http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/9393/15299.jpg[/img]
Once per turn during your Main Phase 1, while your Life Points are higher than your opponent's, you can destroy cards on the field up to an amount equal to the difference between Life Points divided by 1000 (rounded up to full numbers). If your Life Points are lower than your opponent's, you must send 1 "Feminatrix" monster from your hand to the Graveyard during your End Phase. If you can not, destroy this card. This card effect's negated if there is no face-up "Feminatrix" monster on the field.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Furstinna, Princess of the Feminatrix]
[img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/4364/15299l.jpg[/img]
When this card is succesfully Normal summoned, you can Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower "Feminatrix" monster from your hand or Graveyard. That monster's effect(s) is negated until it is removed from the field.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Jungfru, Maiden of the Feminatrix]
[img]http://img844.imageshack.us/img844/9393/15299.jpg[/img]
When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 "Feminatrix" monster with less than 2000 DEF from your hand or Deck.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Kesjerinna, Empress of the Feminatrix]
[img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/9393/15299.jpg[/img]
"Drottning, Queen of the Feminatrix" + 1 or more "Femintarix" monsters
You can only Special Summon this card from your Extra Deck by sending the above cards from either side of the field to the Graveyard. (You do not use "Polymerazation".) This card can not be used as a Fusion Material Monster. Control of this card can not switch. Your opponent must discard 2 cards if they activate a Spell, Trap or Monster card effect. If they cannot, it's effect is negated. This card gains 250 ATK for every "Feminatrix" monster in either player's Graveyard.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Knekt, Soldier of the Feminatrix]
[img]http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/5811/15299i.jpg[/img]
While you control another "Feminatrix" monster with a different name, if this card destroys a monster by battle, you can increase your Life Points by an amount equal to the Level of the destroyed monster x250.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Krigare, Warrior of the Feminatrix]
[img]http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/6343/15299y.jpg[/img]
Your opponent can not select another "Feminatrix" monster as an attack target. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, you can add 1 "Feminatrix" monster from your Deck to your hand.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Prästinna, Priestress of the Feminatrix]
[img]http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/7809/15299o.jpg[/img]
As long as this card remains in your Graveyard, you can increase your Life Points by 250 for every face-up "Feminatrix" monster on your side of the field during your Standby Phase.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Reinforcements of the Feminatrix]
[img]http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/9393/15299.jpg[/img]
This card can only be activated while you control a face-up "Feminatrix" monster. During this turn, all "Feminatrix" monsters gain 750 ATK and when a "Feminatrix" monster attacks a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the attacking monster's ATK, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Skeppare, Captain of the Feminatrix Kesjarinna]
[img]http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/5811/15299i.jpg[/img]
You can Special Summon this card from your hand or Graveyard if you control a face-up "Kesjarinna, Empress of the Feminatrix". When this card is Special Summoned by it's own effect, your opponent must discard their entire hand. Once per turn, you can equip this card to a face-up "Kesjarinna, Empress of the Feminatrix", OR unequip it and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, this card is destroyed instead.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Anforäre, Chief of the Feminatrix Kesjarinna]
[img]http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/6832/15299p.jpg[/img]
1 "Feminatrix" Tuner + 1 "Skeppare, Captain of the Feminatrix Kesjarinna"
Once per turn, you can equip this card to a face-up "Kesjarinna, Empress of the Feminatrix", OR unequip it and Special Summon it. When this card is Special Summoned, your opponent must remove their entire Graveyard from play. When equipped to a monster by this card's effect, that monster can destroy 1 card on the field once per turn during the Main Phase. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, this card is destroyed instead.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Soul Transfer of the Feminatrix]
[img]http://img52.imageshack.us/img52/9393/15299.jpg[/img]
Once per turn, you can send "Feminatrix" monsters from your hand or Deck to the Graveyard, up to the amount of "Feminatrix" monsters face-up on the field. Gain 500 Life Points for every card send to the Graveyard by this effect.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Väktare, Guardian of the Feminatrix]
[img]http://img713.imageshack.us/img713/1382/15299b.jpg[/img]
This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face up on the field, in the Graveyard or in the Deck. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect:
o As long as this card remains face-up on the field, "Feminatrix" monsters can not be targeted by effects controlled by your opponent. Additionally, this card can not be destroyed by battle with a Level 6 or lower monster.[/spoiler]


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P.S.
I have seen some people adding ACTUAL Holofoil effects to their pictures. Is there any easy way of doing this? As it makes the cards that much more professional...

P.S.S.
For those wondering: I wanted to create a Femme Fatale-theme that is NOT crap as ass *cough*Amazoness/Harpies*cough*.

P.S.S.
If anyone has a better picture for "Prästinna, Priestress of the Feminatrix", I'll be happy if you could send it to me. Because the current picture just sucks in my opinion, but it was the only "Femme Fatale of Death"-ish picture I could find Same goes for Jungfru really, lol.

[Rosstein]

I know it's a lot of text, but come on... BUMP?

If someone knows how I can put them in boxes that can hide or open up, please tell me. I think it would make this thread more appealing lol.

[Coro Kouhai]

It's already pretty appealing.......
LMFAO, jk.

But otherwise, they look and sound like legit cards. If i hadn't seen 'em here, I might have mistaken them for something new......
XD

8 or 9/10.
At least, I think.

[Rosstein]

@ Coro Kouhai: Thanks, geheh . The whole point of this set was to be as legit as possible and seeing as how you almost thought they were real, I think that worked out pretty well! If only I could add ACTUAL holofoil effects too

But yeah, DO you know how I can box these cards? Scrolling down takes a long time like this D:

[► ®Ćŕý® ◄]

[quote name='Rosstein' timestamp='1283300419' post='4586724']
@ Coro Kouhai: Thanks, geheh . The whole point of this set was to be as legit as possible and seeing as how you almost thought they were real, I think that worked out pretty well! If only I could add ACTUAL holofoil effects too

But yeah, DO you know how I can box these cards? Scrolling down takes a long time like this D:
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To hide the cards there is a simple code.

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just remove the ( )'s when you type in what you want it to be tited example if you typed that in.

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Also cards look fine 8/10. ;]

- Ryan

[Rosstein]

@ ► ®Ćŕý® ◄: Thanks, the thread looks so much more clean now As well as that it doesn't take 9001 seconds to scroll down

Also thanks for the feedback, you couldn't find anything that could be improved?