Silent Member Posted January 16, 2008 Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 3 FIRE Fiend-Type monsters in your Graveyard. When this card is summoned, destroy 1 Field Spell. If there is no Field Spell on the field, remove from play this card. When this card attacks your opponent directly, activate 1 of the following effects:-Destroy 1 Field Spell on the field.-Inflict damage to your opponent equal to half this card's ATK. At the End Phase of the turn this effect was activated, remove from play this card. EDIT:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 3 FIRE monsters in your Graveyard from play. When this card is summoned, destroy 1 Field Spell. If there is no Field Spell on the field, remove this card from play. When this card attacks your opponent directly, inflict damage to your opponent equal to half this card's ATK. At the End Phase of the turn this effect was activated, remove this card from play. EDIT:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 3 FIRE monsters in your Graveyard from play. When this card is summoned, destroy 1 Field Spell. If there is no Field Spell on the field, remove this card from play. This card cannot attack directly. When this card attacks, inflict damage to your opponent equal to half this card's ATK. At the End Phase of the turn this effect was activated, remove this card from play. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 16, 2008 Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 3 FIRE Fiend-Type monsters in your Graveyard. When this card is summoned' date=' destroy 1 Field Spell. If there is no Field Spell on the field, remove from play this card. When this card attacks your opponent directly, activate 1 of the following effects:-Destroy 1 Field Spell on the field.-Inflict damage to your opponent equal to half this card's ATK. At the End Phase of the turn this effect was activated, remove from play this card.[/quote'] Well its hard to read, thats bad for a start... Picture is not too impressive Field Spell Card Field Spell Card both better OCG this card from play is more reconised correct OCG. Its just bad really, slightly overpowered, slighty. Its not really special. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Member Posted January 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 Thanks for comments. I thought it was balanced. Any more suggestions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RiffMaster Alex Posted January 16, 2008 Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 there are barely any fire fiends. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 16, 2008 Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 Precisely my thought too icemaster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arekku_Koro Posted January 16, 2008 Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 It's okay... 6/10... meh pic meh ocgs... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Member Posted January 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 Yeah, I meant for it to be so powrful yet have enough drawbacks to it. Looking at it now, it seems to have a bit too many drawbacks, just a smidge. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jadenyuki52 Posted January 16, 2008 Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 that's pretty much a one-time-use-only card. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Member Posted January 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 How? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Saboooom Posted January 16, 2008 Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 This card is really confusing... When it's summoned, you destoy a Field Spell Card on the field, but it's other effect is to destroy 1 Field Spell Card. First of all, nobody who would use that card would use that effect; they'd probably inflict 2000 damage instead (Just a thought :P), Secondly, nobody has more than 1 field card in a deck (unless you're a n00b), if any. The length of this effect could be greatly cut down, enabling us to read the effect off the card instead of you typing it out. Maybe this would be better: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 3 FIRE monsters in your Graveyard from play. When this card is summoned, destroy 1 Field Spell. If there is no Field Spell on the field, remove this card from play. When this card attacks your opponent directly, inflict damage to your opponent equal to half this card's ATK. At the End Phase of the turn this effect was activated, remove this card from play. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Member Posted January 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2008 This card is really confusing... When it's summoned' date=' you destoy a Field Spell Card on the field, but it's other effect is to destroy 1 Field Spell Card. First of all, nobody who would use that card would use that effect; they'd probably inflict 2000 damage instead (Just a thought :P), Secondly, nobody has more than 1 field card in a deck (unless you're a n00b), if any. The length of this effect could be greatly cut down, enabling us to read the effect off the card instead of you typing it out. Maybe this would be better: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 3 FIRE monsters in your Graveyard from play. When this card is summoned, destroy 1 Field Spell. If there is no Field Spell on the field, remove this card from play. When this card attacks your opponent directly, inflict damage to your opponent equal to half this card's ATK. At the End Phase of the turn this effect was activated, remove this card from play.[/quote'] Okay, changing effect now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 17, 2008 Report Share Posted January 17, 2008 Pretty nice, but kind of strong =/7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Member Posted January 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2008 Which one? Please review second, even a short one on the thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted January 17, 2008 Report Share Posted January 17, 2008 pretty nice, but why is there 2 of the same card just diffrent effects Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted January 17, 2008 Report Share Posted January 17, 2008 It could be a bit more unique, and I see some problems that were already pointed out by other users. Overall, good job! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted January 17, 2008 Report Share Posted January 17, 2008 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 17, 2008 Report Share Posted January 17, 2008 That is alot better, i like the 2nd card, but a part of the effect doesent work for me, when it attacks directly, inflict half the atk of this card to you opponent, that isnot how it is worded, but Does that mean it can do 6000, or just 2000? I don't really know this stuff that well =/sry for the dumb question Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Member Posted January 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2008 Sorry. It means that it inflicts that damage along with it's damage. I didn't mean for it to be attacking directly. Another change is neccescary. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Member Posted January 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2008 Sorry. It means that it inflicts that damage along with it's damage. I didn't mean for it to be attacking directly. Another change is neccescary. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted January 18, 2008 Report Share Posted January 18, 2008 unjwhy is it there twice?any way7/10not good with any other cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted January 18, 2008 Report Share Posted January 18, 2008 unjwhy is it there twice?any way7/10not good with any other cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Member Posted January 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2008 1.unjwhy is it there twice?any way7/102.not good with any other cards. 1. I wanted others to see the other versions. 2. What do you mean. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Member Posted January 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2008 1.unjwhy is it there twice?any way7/102.not good with any other cards. 1. I wanted others to see the other versions. 2. What do you mean. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted January 18, 2008 Report Share Posted January 18, 2008 1.unjwhy is it there twice?any way7/102.not good with any other cards. 1. I wanted others to see the other versions. 2. What do you mean. lol down sides, and the upside to itself doesnt allow good cooperation with other cards >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted January 18, 2008 Report Share Posted January 18, 2008 1.unjwhy is it there twice?any way7/102.not good with any other cards. 1. I wanted others to see the other versions. 2. What do you mean. lol down sides, and the upside to itself doesnt allow good cooperation with other cards >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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