Coro Kouhai Posted August 30, 2010 Report Share Posted August 30, 2010 This is my first real shot at an Archetype, and I wanted to try and make something original. So, I got the idea for an Archetype whose effects are mostly based off decreasing their own Attack and Defense. Risky, right? I know! It's cool! I tried to give them some un-heroic aspects, like reducing their own attack, gaining Life Points here and there, and just stuff you wouldn't see Yugi, Jaden or Yusei doing, really. This is just because I wanted to make them the main-character's Deck in a possible fan-fic, so I wanted them to seem as un-main character as possible, without sucking, you know? I think I did a good job. SO, Here's introducing my first actual attempt at an Archetype, The Wing Cherubs. [spoiler=Monsters] [spoiler=In Deck] [img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/2170/269697.jpg[/img] Card Lore: Once per turn during your Main Phase, you can lower this card's ATK by 500 to change the Battle Position of one of your opponent's monsters. (This card's ATK does not return to normal during the End Phase) [img]http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/2170/269697.jpg[/img] Card Lore: During your opponent's Battle Phase, you can lower this card's DEF by 700 to negate an attack declared on this card and end the Battle Phase. (This card's DEF does not return to normal during the End Phase) [img]http://img843.imageshack.us/img843/2170/269697.jpg[/img] Card Lore: If you control a face-up 'Wing Cherub' monster, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. If this card is Special Summoned by it's own effect, it's ATK and DEF become 100, and remove it from play when it is removed from the field. [img]http://img827.imageshack.us/img827/7019/269697b.jpg[/img] Card Lore: When your opponent Summons a monster with an ATK stronger than the highest ATK of a monster you control, return this card to your hand. When this card is returned to your hand by this effect, one face-up 'Wing Cherub' monster has their ATK or DEF value return to normal. [img]http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/6607/269697h.jpg[/img] Card Lore: When a face-up 'Wing Cherub' monster is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can reduce this card's ATK and DEF by 900 to return one monster your opponent controls to their hand. (This card's ATK and DEF do not return to normal during the End Phase) [img]http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/6994/269697i.jpg[/img] Card Lore: Once per turn, you can reduce the ATK of this card by 100 to look at an opponent's Set card. If the ATK of this card is higher than 0, this card cannot be destroyed by Battle. [img]http://img825.imageshack.us/img825/7019/269697b.jpg[/img] Card Lore: During your opponent's turn, you can send this card from your hand to Graveyard to change the Battle Position of one of your opponent's monsters. You can remove this card in your Graveyard from play to negate an attack on a 'Wing Cherub' monster you control. [img]http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/9641/269697k.jpg[/img] Card Lore: You can discard this card from your hand to increase the ATK of a face-up 'Wing Cherub' monster by 1200 until the End Phase. [img]http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/6994/269697i.jpg[/img] Card Lore: Once per turn during your Main Phase, you can reduce the ATK of this card by 400 to change an opponent's Attack Position monster into face-down Defense Position. (This card's ATK does not return to normal during the End Phase) [img]http://img828.imageshack.us/img828/7019/269697b.jpg[/img] Card Lore: You can reduce the ATK and DEF of a face-up 'Wing Cherub' monster you control by 600 to Special Summon this card from your hand. [img]http://img827.imageshack.us/img827/7027/269697u.jpg[/img] Card Lore: You can Special Summon thie card by Tributing a face-up 'Wing Cherub' monster you control. If this card is Special Summoned by it's own effect, reduce it's ATK by 300. If this monster attacks an opponent's Defense Position monster with an ATK higher than that monster's DEF, inflict the difference as Damage to your opponent's Life Points. [img]http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/2170/269697.jpg[/img] Card Lore: This monster's ATK becomes the combined ATK of all other face-up 'Wing Cherub' monsters you control. When this card is sent to the Graveyard from the field, gain Life Points equal to the ATK of a face-up 'Wing Cherub' monster you control. [img]http://img825.imageshack.us/img825/821/269697za.jpg[/img] Card Lore: This monster is destroyed if you do not control another face-up 'Wing Cherub' monster. Once per turn during your Main Phase, you can reduce the ATK of this monster by multiples of 100 (max. 600) to increase the ATK of another face-up 'Wing Cherub' monster by the same amount. During your End Phase, gain Life Points equal to this card's ATK. [img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/9650/269697a.jpg[/img] Card Lore: Once per turn during your Main Phase, you can reduce the ATK of this card by 500 to Special Summon one 'Wing Cherub' monster from your hand. When this card's ATK is reduced to 0 by this effect, destroy this card and Special Summon one 'Wing Cherub' monster from your Graveyard. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Extra Deck] [img]http://img839.imageshack.us/img839/2282/269697e.jpg[/img] Card Lore: 1 'Wing Cherub' Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters Once per turn during your Main Phase, you can reduce the ATK of this monster by 400 to select one monster your opponent controls. Remove the selected monster from play face-up. Special Summon the monster back to your opponent's side of the field during your opponent's next Standby Phase after the activation of this card's effect. (This card's ATK does not return to normal during the End Phase) [img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/2170/269697.jpg[/img] Card Lore: 1 Tuner monster + 1 or more 'Wing Cherub' non-Tuner monsters You can reduce the ATK of this monster by 1000 to Special Summon one 'Wing Cherub' monster from your Graveyard. You cannot conduct a Synchro Summon the turn you use this effect. As long as you control another 'Wing Cherub' monster, this is the only monster your opponent can target for an attack. (This card's ATK does not return to normal during the End Phase) [img]http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/7027/269697u.jpg[/img] Card Lore: 1 'Wing Cherub' Tuner monster + 1 or more 'Wing Cherub' non-Tuner monsters During your Main Phase, you can reduce the ATK of this card by 600 to return one card your opponent controls to the owner's hand. If the ATK of this card reaches 0 by the use of this effect, destroy this card and Special Summon one 'Wing Cherub' monster from your Graveyard. [img]http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/2170/269697.jpg[/img] Card Lore: 'Wing Cherub - Rose the Petal' + 'Wing Cherub - Fern the Bright' You can Tribute a face-up 'Wing Cherub' monster to have this card gain ATK equal to that card's ATK until the End Phase. [img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/2170/269697.jpg[/img] Card Lore: 'Wing Cherub - Krystal the Silver' + 'Wing Cherub - Beak the Blade' You can reduce the ATK of this card by 1100 to make the ATK of this card 2800 until the End Phase. If this card destroys an opponent's monster while this effect is active, gain Life Points equal to the ATK of the monster destroyed. When this card's ATK reaches 0 by it's own effect, destroy it and Special Summon one 'Wing Cherub' monster from your Graveyard. [img]http://img838.imageshack.us/img838/2170/269697.jpg[/img] Card Lore: 'Wing Cherub - Lyra the Conductor' + 'Wing Cherub - Guard the Stoic' The Fusion Material monsters for the Fusion Summon of this card must be the correct ones. You can pay 500 Life Points to switch the ATK and DEF of this card until the End Phase. If this monster is destroyed during your opponent's turn, gain 1500 Life Points. [img]http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/774/269697r.jpg[/img] Card Lore: 1 'Wing Cherub' Tuner monster + 1 'Wing Cherub' 'Fairy-Type' Fusion monster This card can only be Special Summoned by Synchro Summon. When this card is Synchro Summoned successfully, you can select two monsters your opponent controls. Remove from play one 'Wing Cherub' monster in your Graveyard and reduce the ATK of the selected monsters by the ATK of the removed monster. When this card inflicts Battle Damage, gain Life Points equal to half the damage inflicted, rounded up. [img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/2170/269697.jpg[/img] Card Lore: 1 'Wing Cherub' 'Winged-Beast Type' Synchro monster + 1 'Wing Cherub' 'Fairy-Type' monster This card can only be Special Summoned by Fusion Summon. This card gains 400 ATK for every 'Wing Cherub' monster in your Graveyard. You can reduce the ATK of this monster by 1200 to destroy one Spell or Trap card, and one monster your opponent controls. If this monster is destroyed by battle during your opponent's Battle Phase after it had it's ATK reduced by it's own effect, immediately end your opponent's turn. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Spell and Traps] [img]http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/2170/269697.jpg[/img] Card Lore: When you control no monsters, you can Special Summon one 'Wing Cherub' monster from your hand. That monster gains 500 ATK. You can send this card from the field to the Graveyard to increase the ATK of a 'Wing Cherub' monster by 800 until the End Phase. [img]http://img840.imageshack.us/img840/4008/269697q.jpg[/img] Card Lore: You can only equip this to a 'Wing Cherub' monster. That monster gains ATK equal to half it's DEF. You can send a monster equipped with this card to the Graveyard to Special Summon up to two 'Wing Cherub' monsters whose combined ATK is equal to or less than the equipped monster's ATK. [img]http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/8004/269697x.jpg[/img] Card Lore: You can only activate this card during the turn you've used the effect of a 'Wing Cherub' Fusion or Synchro monster, or the effect of 'Cherub Garuda Eagle', by selected the monster whose effect you used. Return that monster's ATK and DEF values to normal. [img]http://img838.imageshack.us/img838/1486/269697l.jpg[/img] Card Lore: You can only activate this card during the turn you've used the effect of a 'Wing Cherub' Effect Monster, by selected a monster whose effect you used. Special Summon one 'Wing Cherub' monster from your hand or Deck with lower ATK than the selected monster. [img]http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/4949/269697w.jpg[/img] Card Lore: You can only activate this card when your opponent declares an attack on a face-up 'Wing Cherub' monster you control. Negate the attack, and end the Battle Phase. All face-up 'Wing Cherub' monsters gain ATK equal to the attacking monster's Level x 100 until your next End Phase. [img]http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/8946/269697p.jpg[/img] Card Lore: You can only activate this card when your opponent activates a card effect that would destroy a card you control. Negate the effect and destroy the card, then Special Summon one 'Wing Cherub' monster from your hand. [/spoiler] So that's it for now, i guess. Thanks goes to JazinKay, that heroic figure, for the images. Comments and critisms? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuri Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 cards are nice, just skimmed through saw OCG and wording errors (TCG like) but only found little. Based on my skimming these cards are pretty good unless someone can prove me wrong I give these 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coro Kouhai Posted August 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 Bumpity bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.GhostRyder Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 [b][size="2"]OCG seems clean. Pics sre good and I like them. [color="#00FF00"]8/10[/color][/size][/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coro Kouhai Posted August 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 Sweet. Thanks for the comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coro Kouhai Posted September 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 3, 2010 ......... Bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coro Kouhai Posted September 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 5, 2010 SUPER BUMP! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coro Kouhai Posted December 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 1, 2010 ULTRA BUMP FROM THE PAST! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Black Rose:. Posted December 2, 2010 Report Share Posted December 2, 2010 I wouldn't exactly call the names for the monsters 'original', but nevertheless good cards. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Embittered Moon Posted December 2, 2010 Report Share Posted December 2, 2010 this would make a good counter-archetype for blackwings. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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