altemon Posted January 17, 2008 Report Share Posted January 17, 2008 What do you think of this card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeroshot Posted January 17, 2008 Report Share Posted January 17, 2008 you dont need the enter and the entire thing might be OCG mistakes.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arekku_Koro Posted January 17, 2008 Report Share Posted January 17, 2008 you could shorten it so it says "When this card Battles a WATER tpe monster"... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted January 17, 2008 Report Share Posted January 17, 2008 You could work on some errors in the effect, and even though the picture is pretty cool, it needs a background. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 17, 2008 Report Share Posted January 17, 2008 Pretty cool....7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 17, 2008 Report Share Posted January 17, 2008 WATER not water type WIND not wind type and whats with the massive gap? Could be improved Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted January 17, 2008 Report Share Posted January 17, 2008 you don't need seperate paragraphs on card effect:?:x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
university222 Posted January 17, 2008 Report Share Posted January 17, 2008 i agree with all above comments but its quite good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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