Kuri Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 SET: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/219731-kurifalcon-punch-justice-has-broke-through-your-doors10100-10100-020/ This is for my Justice Hero and Justice Beast Archtypes. Anyways onto the fan fic... [spoiler=Chapter 1] "...Heathren Island, once named Duel Island due to the fact that it used to be filled with eager duelists ready to fight. The island used to be a graveyard filled with old abandoned cards and no order, until one day. A man by the name of Heathren set foot on the island and challenged all the duelists on the island. He one every single battle easily, then he finally reached Mt.Paku. Mt.Paku was where the former Island Duel King use to sit, until Heathren ended his rule on the island and created a peaceful environment. Soon the island grew and the population rose, still there are some who duel, but most have left for the main land, that is why only a few duelists remain on the island." "Mr. Fu tell the story again!" "Alright, alright. One more time" "Dad!!!!!" A voice yelled. The door in the classroom slammed open. "Duel me now!!!" The voice came from a boy who was only 12 years old, he wore a red shirt and black shorts. His name is Maku. "Why now? I was just about to-" "I wanna test my new deck! I think I can beat you now!" Maku said getting out his deck. "Mr.Fu! Duel!" A tiny voice said from the class. "Oh ok...Only a quick little duel!" "Woooo! My deck will win for sure!" Maku said running out of the classroom. "You guys follow me. Watch the duel carefully." Mr.Fu lead the children out of the classroom. "Alright Dad. 2000 Life Points set!!!" Maku said readying his duel disk. Maku's duel disk was cracked on some parts and had a faded black coloring which seemed to no longer match with the duel disk. "....2000 set...oi Maku..." Mr.Fu said rubbing his neck. Soon the two had their hands filled with 5 card from their deck. "I'll go first dad! Drrrraw!" Maku lifted one card from his deck quickly and put it in with the other cards. "I set Justice Hero Scroll Ninja in attack position and end my turn!" Maku swiftly placed the card onto his duel disk and the card then appeared on the ground showing off a fighting dance. "Have you even though of a strategy? Oi..." Mr.Fu then drew a card himself. "I place 1 card face-down and end my turn." Mr.Fu placed his card and it appeared face-down in the Spell & Trap zone. Maku then drew his next card and again placed it with the others. "Fool! My Justice Hero Scroll Ninja can attack you directly, but I already know what card you set so I won't attack right now. So I'll just play Justice Hero Immortal Mask in defense position!" He took a card from his hand and placed it onto his duel disk. Then a green depressing mask appeared onto the field next to the other monster Maku set. The mask then let out a tear and returned to its default face. "I'll set a face-down and end my turn." Mr.Fu drew his next card and picked one of the cards from his hand and showed the card to Maku "Maku be prepared! I summon my Cyber Dragon card from my hand!" A mechanical dragon appeared roaring onto the field. "And since your mask has 0 attack and 0 defense I attack it full on!" Mr.Fu then commanded his dragon to attack. "Hahah dad why? My mask cannot be destroyed!" Maku said smiling. Cyber Dragon still continued to attack the mask. "Errr....Cyber Dragon stop!" The dragon then retreated back to Mr.Fu's side. "I then end my turn..." "I'm going to win yes I am!" Maku said as his next card was drawn. "Ok first I'll play the card Mystical Space Typhoon and destroy your face-down!" Maku's face-down card then was revealed and it swallowed Mr.Fu's face-down card which revealed Miror Force. "Next! I play the spell card polymerization and I fuse my two monsters together!" Maku's monsters then were swallowed into a vortex where they slowly disappeared. "I now summon Justice Hero Immortal Ninja! But that's not all! I play the spell card Axe of Despair and equip it to my Immortal Ninja" The monster then held an axe in its hands then it chuckled as its ATK rose from 2300 to 3300. "Now I-" There was an explosion. It came from Mt.Paku. Then Mr.Fu's face turned dim. "Maku get the children out of the island." Mr.Fu demanded. "And don't worry I'll be ok." Mr.Fu then ran to the mountain. Maku then rushed the children to the safety rafts which were placed near the shore. Hundreds of people were racing to the other rafts and watched as Mt.Paku shook. "Dad!!!!!" Maku yelled. "You better come back cause I'm gonna beat'cha!" Maku then put his head down, the children with him started to whisper and some cry. "Fu your here? Haha never thought you would come. You have a family you wouldn't want them to morn over you?" A sinister voice said. "Well let's see about that. My deck has been built to its full power, so I'm sure to win." Mr.fu said grabbing out his deck. "Hahahaahaha...Well ok then...an 8000 Life Point duel it is, ready, set..." The sinister voice paused. Then the two said. "Duel!"[/spoiler] Tell me what you think. And don't forget to rate my set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grassman131 Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 Pretty good, glad i could be the first to comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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