Duplicitous Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 [color="#0000FF"][b]Blue-Eyes White Dragon Elder[/b][/color] [IMG]http://i612.photobucket.com/albums/tt210/Gara305/createcardphp-8.png[/IMG] [color="#000000"][b]Effect:This card can only be summoned by discarding 1"Blue-Eyes White Dragon" from your hand to the graveyard.If this card is destroyed by battle add 1 Dragon-Type monster from your deck to your hand.[/b][/color] [color="#000000"][b]Reps are appreciated[/b][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 Name: Could be better...Mabey "Elder Blue-Eyes White Dragon"? PIC: Its okay...Nothing special... Edit job on the card hurts my eyes >.< ?The baby blue on tan isnt very appealing.... OCG looks good Effects okay Balance is okay 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duplicitous Posted August 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 [quote name='Archwing' timestamp='1283268912' post='4584896'] Name: Could be better...Mabey "Elder Blue-Eyes White Dragon"? PIC: Its okay...Nothing special... Edit job on the card hurts my eyes >.< ?The baby blue on tan isnt very appealing.... OCG looks good Effects okay Balance is okay 7.5/10 [/quote] [color="#000000"][b]Thanks!^^[/b][/color][color="#000000"][b]I know that name isn't so good bu't didn't have anything on mind.[/b][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limited Edition KING Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 [center][IMG]http://i612.photobucket.com/albums/tt210/Gara305/Untitled-22.png[/IMG] [b]White Dragon Elder would be a better name. Lose the border it's just not very appealing at all.[/b] [i]This card can only be Summoned by discarding 3 "Blue-Eyes White Dragon" from your hand to the Graveyard.[/i] [b]3 Blue Eyes, that's a bit too much to ask. I recomend lowering it down to discarding 1 Blue Eyes, and lowering its ATK to say 2500, usually Elder's have less strength than the young.[/b] [i]When this card destroys an opponents monster inflict 500 damage to your opponents Life Points.[/i] [b]Eh, just doesn't appeal to me, why give a Blue Eyes card burn damage?[/b] [i]If this card is destroyed by battle add 1 Dragon-Type monster from your deck to your hand.[/i] [b]Well, its more around the Dragon Type which makes more sense than the burn effect from before, but you won't be able to use this effect because there aren't that many monsters that can actually beat this guy in battle. So yeah, this card needs alot of fixing for it to be decent, the image isn't great but it's okay.[/b] [/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 Totally Overpowered. Especially if you're running a Dragon Search Deck. Easily done really. Try lowering it's ATK and DEF, and maybe instead of Special Summoning, make it have a drawback. Like you can't control any other cards or activate Spells etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Riku~ Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 [quote]Name: Could be better...Mabey "Elder Blue-Eyes White Dragon"? PIC: Its okay...Nothing special... Edit job on the card hurts my eyes >.< ?The baby blue on tan isnt very appealing.... OCG looks good Effects okay Balance is okay 7.5/10 [/quote] [quote][b]White Dragon Elder would be a better name. Lose the border it's just not very appealing at all.[/b] This card can only be Summoned by discarding 3 "Blue-Eyes White Dragon" from your hand to the Graveyard. [b]3 Blue Eyes, that's a bit too much to ask. I recomend lowering it down to discarding 1 Blue Eyes, and lowering its ATK to say 2500, usually Elder's have less strength than the young.[/b] When this card destroys an opponents monster inflict 500 damage to your opponents Life Points. [b]Eh, just doesn't appeal to me, why give a Blue Eyes card burn damage?[/b] If this card is destroyed by battle add 1 Dragon-Type monster from your deck to your hand. [b]Well, its more around the Dragon Type which makes more sense than the burn effect from before, but you won't be able to use this effect because there aren't that many monsters that can actually beat this guy in battle. So yeah, this card needs alot of fixing for it to be decent, the image isn't great but it's okay.[/b][/quote] These, to the letter. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duplicitous Posted August 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 [quote name='King.' timestamp='1283269876' post='4584934'] [center][IMG]http://i612.photobucket.com/albums/tt210/Gara305/Untitled-22.png[/IMG] [b]White Dragon Elder would be a better name. Lose the border it's just not very appealing at all.[/b] [i]This card can only be Summoned by discarding 3 "Blue-Eyes White Dragon" from your hand to the Graveyard.[/i] [b]3 Blue Eyes, that's a bit too much to ask. I recomend lowering it down to discarding 1 Blue Eyes, and lowering its ATK to say 2500, usually Elder's have less strength than the young.[/b] [i]When this card destroys an opponents monster inflict 500 damage to your opponents Life Points.[/i] [b]Eh, just doesn't appeal to me, why give a Blue Eyes card burn damage?[/b] [i]If this card is destroyed by battle add 1 Dragon-Type monster from your deck to your hand.[/i] [b]Well, its more around the Dragon Type which makes more sense than the burn effect from before, but you won't be able to use this effect because there aren't that many monsters that can actually beat this guy in battle. So yeah, this card needs alot of fixing for it to be decent, the image isn't great but it's okay.[/b] [/center] [/quote] [color="#000000"][b]Ok thanks going to repair my mistakes soon[/b][/color][color="#000000"][b]Update!Changed the border.Maked him weaker.Check it out![/b][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gaara305 Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 New version seems much better then the original!Good work! 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duplicitous Posted August 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 [quote name='Gaara305' timestamp='1283280118' post='4585343'] New version seems much better then the original!Good work! 8.9/10 [/quote] [color="#000000"][b]Thanks!^^[/b][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Riku~ Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 Much better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duplicitous Posted August 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 [quote name='~Riku~' timestamp='1283281074' post='4585404'] Much better. [/quote] [color="#000000"][b]Thank you...L[/b][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alex :D Posted August 31, 2010 Report Share Posted August 31, 2010 how do you make it blue around? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duplicitous Posted September 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 [quote name='Alex ' timestamp='1283296362' post='4586436'] how do you make it blue around? [/quote] Download the border,copy your card in MS Pain,then copy your border on your card and then just uncheck draw opique. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Riku~ Posted September 1, 2010 Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 [quote][quote] Much better.[/quote] Thank you...L [/quote] What? How did you find out my secret identity?! Oh wait... -Looks at avi and sig- Eheheheh... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duplicitous Posted September 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 [quote name='~Riku~' timestamp='1283331546' post='4588084'] What? How did you find out my secret identity?! Oh wait... -Looks at avi and sig- Eheheheh... [/quote] [color="#000000"][b]Lawliet...now that i have your name i can kil you buhaha [/b][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Riku~ Posted September 1, 2010 Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 Never! Anyway, this Light vs L thing seems a little spammy, so continue by PM kthxbai. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duplicitous Posted September 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 [u][color="#000000"][b]Bump![/b][/color][/u] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alex :D Posted September 2, 2010 Report Share Posted September 2, 2010 [quote name='Assassin (Hero)' timestamp='1283329186' post='4588039'] Download the border,copy your card in MS Pain,then copy your border on your card and then just uncheck draw opique. [/quote] Ohh... ok thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted September 2, 2010 Report Share Posted September 2, 2010 [center][color="#9932CC"][b]I'm confused. Why are there two different cards in this thread by two different people?[/b][/color][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted September 2, 2010 Report Share Posted September 2, 2010 [quote]I'm confused. Why are there two different cards in this thread by two different people? [/quote] That was the original. The new one is better 8/10 I allready rated the pic and stuff so yah.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duplicitous Posted September 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 2, 2010 [quote name='Archwing' timestamp='1283449598' post='4592493'] That was the original. The new one is better 8/10 I allready rated the pic and stuff so yah.... [/quote] [color="#000000"][b]Thank you for the rating!^^[/b][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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