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[img]http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/4103/276900q.jpg[/img]
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[img]http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/5120/276900mh.jpg[/img] [img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/8876/276900n.jpg[/img] [img]http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/4814/276900.jpg[/img] [img]http://img841.imageshack.us/img841/5595/276900v.jpg[/img] [img]http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/7850/276900h.jpg[/img] [img]http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/4227/276900b.jpg[/img] [img]http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/4227/276900b.jpg[/img] [img]http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/8876/276900n.jpg[/img] [img]http://img706.imageshack.us/img706/4814/276900.jpg[/img] [img]http://img841.imageshack.us/img841/1817/276900m.jpg[/img] [img]http://img839.imageshack.us/img839/2915/276900s.jpg[/img] [img]http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/2585/276900c.jpg[/img] [img]http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/5397/276900y.jpg[/img] [img]http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/9021/276900u.jpg[/img] [img]http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/729/276900p.jpg[/img] [img]http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/729/276900p.jpg[/img] [img]http://img713.imageshack.us/img713/3562/276900z.jpg[/img] [img]http://img843.imageshack.us/img843/4227/276900b.jpg[/img]
Thats the monster s i have so far tell me what you think i can handle criticism.



[img]http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/4807/276900o.jpg[/img] [img]http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/5397/276900y.jpg[/img] [img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/4103/276900q.jpg[/img] [img]http://img827.imageshack.us/img827/1817/276900m.jpg[/img] [img]http://img714.imageshack.us/img714/601/276900w.jpg[/img] [img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/3296/276900e.jpg[/img] [img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/6392/276900j.jpg[/img] [img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/6386/276900ou.jpg[/img] [img]http://img693.imageshack.us/img693/4227/276900b.jpg[/img] [img]http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/1091/276900i.jpg[/img]
Thats all the spell cards i have so far.

[img]http://img827.imageshack.us/img827/7699/276900x.jpg[/img] [img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/7850/276900h.jpg[/img] [img]http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/9021/276900u.jpg[/img] [img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/3562/276900z.jpg[/img] [img]http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/3084/276900uq.jpg[/img] [img]http://img829.imageshack.us/img829/4814/276900.jpg[/img] [img]http://img840.imageshack.us/img840/9021/276900u.jpg[/img] [img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/6706/276900tj.jpg[/img] [img]http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/601/276900w.jpg[/img] [img]http://img825.imageshack.us/img825/7699/276900x.jpg[/img] [img]http://img534.imageshack.us/img534/3842/276900r.jpg[/img]


This i made for the fun of it i doubt its realistic.
[img]http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/9135/276900k.jpg[/img] [img]http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/3296/276900e.jpg[/img]
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x.x Oh...wow....

There are a lot of wording issues, but I get what you're saying, so that's not THAT bad, but on some of them, it can get really confusing, so please fix that.

But look at your ATK and DEF values. WAY, WAY OFF. You HAVE to change them, and DRASTICALLY. NO level 4 monster has 2,500 DEF and no draw back that I know of. Gear Golem the Moving Fortress is the highest at 2,200, but even THAT'S stretching it in my opinion. I can't even specifically say what monsters, but you need a super review on ATK and DEF values, because yours are crazy out there.

Moon Light Death should be a Counter Trap card. If it counters a card, most likely, it's going to be a Counter Trap. Not always, but most of the time. And the rest of its effect is just odd. It needs a drawback of some sort as well.

No such thing as a Quickplay Trap. o.o Make that Reaper card a Normal Trap or something. Also a name change, I'm pretty sure there's a Reaper of the Cards that exists. It's a level 5 monster, I think. I used to use it in an old game.

Overall, my rating is 1/10. The ATK/DEF is just extremely poor, and the effects are very hard to understand and picture. >_< I can see that you're going for just throwing in cool effects, but if you're going to do that, you need to have lots and lots of balance. A lot of your effects are super overpowered and broken, only because of the ATK/DEF or level of the monster. My suggestion is reviewing a lot of current YGO cards and try to realize the balance in the ATK/DEF and the level, then mirror that onto the cards you create.

=) I hope you can take what I say as constructive criticism, and use it to get better, because I really do think the idea is cool! Ninjas are a pretty cool set of people, so if you just fix 'em properly, they could be perfect in no time!
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thanks for your opinion ill fix them right now. ^,^ Kisho is my favorite so ya

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[color="#800080"][size="3"][font="Comic Sans MS"][b]No fake types plz...[/b][/font][/size][/color]
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Aww why cant i make a Ninja type the series already have ninja monsters under warriors. They made reptile types why cant i make Ninja types
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[quote name='Incintigrin' timestamp='1283303930' post='4587024']
x.x Oh...wow....

There are a lot of wording issues, but I get what you're saying, so that's not THAT bad, but on some of them, it can get really confusing, so please fix that.

But look at your ATK and DEF values. WAY, WAY OFF. You HAVE to change them, and DRASTICALLY. NO level 4 monster has 2,500 DEF and no draw back that I know of. Gear Golem the Moving Fortress is the highest at 2,200, but even THAT'S stretching it in my opinion. I can't even specifically say what monsters, but you need a super review on ATK and DEF values, because yours are crazy out there.

Moon Light Death should be a Counter Trap card. If it counters a card, most likely, it's going to be a Counter Trap. Not always, but most of the time. And the rest of its effect is just odd. It needs a drawback of some sort as well.

No such thing as a Quickplay Trap. o.o Make that Reaper card a Normal Trap or something. Also a name change, I'm pretty sure there's a Reaper of the Cards that exists. It's a level 5 monster, I think. I used to use it in an old game.

Overall, my rating is 1/10. The ATK/DEF is just extremely poor, and the effects are very hard to understand and picture. >_< I can see that you're going for just throwing in cool effects, but if you're going to do that, you need to have lots and lots of balance. A lot of your effects are super overpowered and broken, only because of the ATK/DEF or level of the monster. My suggestion is reviewing a lot of current YGO cards and try to realize the balance in the ATK/DEF and the level, then mirror that onto the cards you create.

=) I hope you can take what I say as constructive criticism, and use it to get better, because I really do think the idea is cool! Ninjas are a pretty cool set of people, so if you just fix 'em properly, they could be perfect in no time!
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thanks man ill look them over

Hows this so far?
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