John A. Zoidberg Posted September 1, 2010 Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 An idea I had [spoiler=BoMF][IMG]http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/9605/227682b2.jpg[/IMG] [spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 3 FIRE monsters in your Graveyard. When this card is Normal Summoned or Flip Summoned, select up to 3 Spell or Trap zones on your field. Zones that are already being used cannot be selected. Cards cannot be used in either of those zones. Your opponent takes 300 points of damage for every Spell or Trap card zone selected during the End Phase of a turn this card has not attacked.[/spoiler][/spoiler] Credit for picture goes to Jazin Kay. Credit for card editing (Border, holo, etc) goes to Zextra. OCG fixes appreciated. Tell me if I should make some more like this, maybe a booster pack or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rosstein Posted September 1, 2010 Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 [quote name='δαίμονας' timestamp='1283304382' post='4587053'] [b]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set.[/b] This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 3 FIRE monsters in your Graveyard. [b]When this card is Normal Summoned or Flip Summoned[/b], select up to 3 Spell or Trap zones on your field. Zones that are already being used cannot be selected. Cards cannot be used in either of those zones. Your opponent takes 300 points of damage for every Spell or Trap card zone selected during the End Phase of a turn this card has not attacked.[/quote] Small error I suppose? lol. Other than that, it's a pretty decent card. The fact that it can be special summoned as easily as that is always a tricky one, as something can go OP very fast like that. HOWEVER! Your effect is really balanced, and I think this card would be used more as a brawler that can be spawned rather than it's effect. But it's effect can help out against a stalling opponent. So all in all, I'd say 8/10 (cause I don't really like how the card's edited and all... I'm pro-holofoil, but this is just too much lol. And the code and stuff is edited poorly too). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted September 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 The stuff that's bolded is perfectly correct OCG >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ЯчυКδ ңґεηđдϊ Posted September 1, 2010 Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 the selected zones cannot be used i think is correct OCG but could be wrong, i cant tell what but i'm sure there are other minor OCG problems the card looks great though and has an alright and balanced effect, 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted September 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 The thing about this card that's great and a lot of people might not get is this: Say your opponent has 3 face down monsters and all of their spell/trap card zones filled. And you're like me: a p**** when it comes to stuff like that. So you don't attack with this card, and then at the End Phase, BOOM. 300-900 damage. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mugendramon Posted September 1, 2010 Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 That card is far too distorted. I'd say you just modified the picture, not much more than that. A good effect, nonethless.[img]http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/wink.gif[/img] You get a 9/10 from the monkeh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rosstein Posted September 1, 2010 Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 [quote name='δαίμονας' timestamp='1283304868' post='4587088'] The stuff that's bolded is perfectly correct OCG >.> [/quote] The point I tried to make was not that it's incorrect OCG. It's the fact that it can't be Normal Summoned, yet it's effect activates when it's Normal Summoned... That just can't be right. Please correct me if I'm wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted September 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 What do you mean by distorted? If you mean the visual effects, I just PM'd Zextra asking for a border and a holo. He gave me bost 1 with the border and holo, and then he gave me this one, too. And I liked this one more. A lot cooler IMO.[quote name='Rosstein' timestamp='1283305123' post='4587107'] The point I tried to make was not that it's incorrect OCG. It's the fact that it can't be Normal Summoned, yet it's effect activates when it's Normal Summoned... That just can't be right. Please correct me if I'm wrong. [/quote] Oh yeah, sorry XD. I put the "can't be normal summoned or set" thing in at the last minute, so I forgot to edit the other part. +rep for pointing that out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rosstein Posted September 1, 2010 Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 [quote name='δαίμονας' timestamp='1283305290' post='4587110'] Oh yeah, sorry XD. I put the "can't be normal summoned or set" thing in at the last minute, so I forgot to edit the other part. +rep for pointing that out. [/quote] No worries. I might be the most inactive member here (having only 10+-ish posts over 3 years lol. Although all of them were in the timespan of 2010 ), I actually have quite the experience with the game itself. So stuff like that catches my eye quickly. I actually suck at OCG spelling xD I usually just copy parts of existing cards to prevent OCG errors and then just edit my own effect in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted September 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 Lol, cool. Yeah, that's always good to be good at stuff right when you start getting active.I'll try to fix the OCG up later. I'm pretty tired now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted September 1, 2010 Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 eh, just enough to hit the balanced mark. good job, though the holo might have been a bit too much. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted September 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 Again, I didn't make the holo. I asked Zex to do it for me, and I personally liked it a lot, so I used it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted September 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 [quote name='Galadrien' timestamp='1283310689' post='4587466'] eh, just enough to hit the balanced mark. good job, though the holo might have been a bit too much. 8.5/10 [/quote] And how could I have made it more balanced if it was 'just barely' balanced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted September 1, 2010 Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 Congratulations for making 5 Stars! +3 reps for that! I really like it! The effect is (just about) balanced and creative. I would love this card - an Ojama King for S/T Ultimate Lockdown: 2x Ojama Kings (or 1 Knight) + 2x This... 9.5/10 Also, I would like to credit Dranzer123 (credited in my sig) for making the template Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted September 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 This wasn't my celebration card, but thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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