Syncro_monster Posted September 1, 2010 Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 This is the best name I came up with the. Comment please. [img]http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/120/228676.jpg[/img] LORE: 1 tuner+1 or more non-tuner LIGHT monsters. When it is your opponents turn this card can negate the activation of a Spell-Card. When this monster destroys a DARK monster inflict 500 extra damage to your opponents Life Points. When a DARK monster attacks this monster increase it´s ATK by 400 points for each LIGHT monster in your Gravayerd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted September 1, 2010 Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 It all seems fairly balanced to me. The low ATK could be raised a bit? I don't know, 2000? I mean it's a Level 7, there's a LV6 with 2600 XD Being specific for only a LIGHT Deck too, makes it need LIGHT support, Marshmallon ftw. Since it can negate Spell Cards too, that's a bit iffy, I know Stardust can negate anything, but he is removed from the field for a bit. Maybe make it: [list] [*]Once per turn, pay 800 Life Points, negate the activation of a Spell Card and destroy it. [*]Discard 1 card, negate the activation of a Spell Card and destroy it. [/list] The specific DARK ATK increase is a bit low. There are a few cards that gain a slight bit more, say 800/1000 without saying "for each monster in your Graveyard", just a good bog standard 800/1000 extra ATK with no leeway. It's all fair and well, good for a new card. Oh and, the image makes it look like it can fly XP... Winged-Beast-Type? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dries965 Posted September 1, 2010 Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 unlike LiAm i say it is OP, mostly due to the last effect, where it gains a permanent increase in atk, with only two it is already a 2650 beatstick, even if it is dark, But the last two effect doenst suite name, maybe if there was an effect that you could look at your opponent face down card once per turn and remove last two effects, and then crank up is started atk a little bit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted September 1, 2010 Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 [quote name='Dries965' timestamp='1283356164' post='4588608'] unlike LiAm i say it is OP, mostly due to the last effect, where it gains a permanent increase in atk, with only two it is already a 2650 beatstick, even if it is dark, But the last two effect doenst suite name, maybe if there was an effect that you could look at your opponent face down card once per turn and remove last two effects, and then crank up is started atk a little bit [/quote] I'm assuming where it says "attacks this monster" he means "battles this monster" and hoping that it only lasts until the end of Damage Calculation. If not, then I would say that it's previous UP comment, would become slightly more OP, as any ATK/ DEF boost makes something overpowered. But my previous recommendations still count for the Spell negation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Syncro_monster Posted September 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 [quote name='LiAM' timestamp='1283354894' post='4588551'] It all seems fairly balanced to me. The low ATK could be raised a bit? I don't know, 2000? I mean it's a Level 7, there's a LV6 with 2600 XD Being specific for only a LIGHT Deck too, makes it need LIGHT support, Marshmallon ftw. Since it can negate Spell Cards too, that's a bit iffy, I know Stardust can negate anything, but he is removed from the field for a bit. Maybe make it: [list] [*]Once per turn, pay 800 Life Points, negate the activation of a Spell Card and destroy it. [*]Discard 1 card, negate the activation of a Spell Card and destroy it. [/list] The specific DARK ATK increase is a bit low. There are a few cards that gain a slight bit more, say 800/1000 without saying "for each monster in your Graveyard", just a good bog standard 800/1000 extra ATK with no leeway. It's all fair and well, good for a new card. Oh and, the image makes it look like it can fly XP... Winged-Beast-Type? [/quote] I think you`re right, i like the idea: once per turn discard 1 card to negate the activation of a Spell Card and destroy it. Thnx for the comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.GhostRyder Posted September 1, 2010 Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 [quote name='LiAM' timestamp='1283354894' post='4588551'] It all seems fairly balanced to me.The low ATK could be raised a bit? I don't know, 2000?I mean it's a Level 7, there's a LV6 with 2600 XDBeing specific for only a LIGHT Deck too, makes it need LIGHT support, Marshmallon ftw.Since it can negate Spell Cards too, that's a bit iffy, I know Stardust can negate anything, but he is removed from the field for a bit.Maybe make it:[list][*]Once per turn, pay 800 Life Points, negate the activation of a Spell Card and destroy it.[*]Discard 1 card, negate the activation of a Spell Card and destroy it.[/list]The specific DARK ATK increase is a bit low. There are a few cards that gain a slight bit more, say 800/1000 without saying "for each monster in your Graveyard", just a good bog standard 800/1000 extra ATK with no leeway.It's all fair and well, good for a new card.Oh and, the image makes it look like it can fly XP... Winged-Beast-Type? [/quote] [b][size="2"]Damm you stole my words. XD Basically LiAM said what I was going to say. Good for a new member.[/size][/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAEGING D0GKING Posted September 1, 2010 Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 Good for a new member, but needs to work on OCG. Oh and it seems sorta op. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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