my first fusion set

[theqman]

ok here is this little set i put together i know i didint put much effort in them and i know they arnt very creative but i want to see ur oppinions![img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/6898/276407.jpg[/img]
that is the fusion card and here is the 2 that create it![img]http://img826.imageshack.us/img826/6898/276407.jpg[/img]
[img]http://img830.imageshack.us/img830/6898/276407.jpg[/img]


oo yea heres the ritual [img]http://img830.imageshack.us/img830/8520/276407r.jpg[/img]

[Megaman91]

Even if you hadn't made many efforts to do this cards, please don't post such things. First of all, it's nonsense that an Effect monster needs a Ritual Spell to be summoned. Also, they're too way underpowered (a 4-Star with only 150 ATK and DEF that needs a card to be Summoned? A 7-Star Fusion with no effect and such a little ATK and DEF?). Then, in a Ritual Spell you may specify which monster is referred to, and in the Fusion you must say what monster needs. The bacteria image is also ugly, like the aqua one. In definetily, this is a 4/10, only because you're new here. However, i see that you can have some potential in making cards. but I recommend you to see other's cards first, so you can balance properly yours.

[Kuri]

pics=epicness
set deserves 9/10 just some OCG errors










































































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[/sarcasm] You really need a lot of work set gets 0/10...OCG just killed my mind...and pics ripped my heart in half...you make me wanna kick puppies...[/size]

[theqman]

[quote name='Kuri' timestamp='1283371380' post='4589375']
pics=epicness
set deserves 9/10 just some OCG errors

umm thanks but can u give me some more info about OCG cuz i dono what that is










































































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[/sarcasm] You really need a lot of work set gets 0/10...OCG just killed my mind...and pics ripped my heart in half...you make me wanna kick puppies...[/size]
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