My First Card(ITS AMATEUR)

[ElementOfSpace]

[img]http://img840.imageshack.us/img840/3171/ttra.jpg[/img]
i know its bad but its my first card.
and plz tell mwat i could do to get better and wat im good at



[size="6"][color="#8B0000"]1non-tuner DARK monster + "Red Dragon Archfiend"

[s]If Red Dragon Archfiend is in the Graveyard, you can synchro summon(card has typo) this monster only by using 2 dark non-tuner monsters and lowering its ATK by 800 points.[/s]For every DARK monster and dragon type on the field this card gets 50 ATK points[/color][/size]

[Scyire]

Make the second img tag [/img]

[LiAM]

You can't Summon it.

[theqman]

holy crap how did u get that card to look soooooooo cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[senatheEND]

Wrong side of the card for stars for dark synchro
Its Kazuki takahashi not Takazuki
Dark synchros listed wrong.. never Dark tuner+ its always -
The cards OCG is real bad
Effect is useless..

Example of correct Dark synchro
[img]http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/4647/deathenddragon.jpg[/img]
1 non-Tuner monster - 1 "Dark Debris Dragon"
In order to Special Summon this card, subtract the Level of a Dark Tuner monster from the Level of 1 other monster you control; the value must equal the Level of this card. This monster cannot be destroyed by battle. You can Tribute 1 other monster to destroy all other monsters on the field and inflict 200 damage to your opponent for each card destroyed by this effect.


ALL dark tuners have this effect printed on them
"In order to Special Summon this card, subtract the Level of a Dark Tuner monster from the Level of 1 other monster you control; the value must equal the Level of this card."
2/10 Welcome to card maker xD enjoy your stay

[ElementOfSpace]

ya i know i failed but i was really just trying to do it and not spend so much effort b ut i will ltr so ill just take out the effect, switch the name, and by dark non-tuner, i meant dark atribute

[senatheEND]

"1 DARK non-tuner"