Archwing Posted September 1, 2010 Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 Well this is part of my set[color="#FF0000"] [url=http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/220024-the-eternal-flame-3-support-for-fire-archtypes/page__p__4588571__fromsearch__1#entry4588571]~The Eternal Flame~[/url] [/color] But thats getting little attention and i want to know what you think. Feedback please.... [img]http://img829.imageshack.us/img829/1951/121928s.jpg[/img] LORE:When this card is sent to the Graveyard you can pay 500 Lifepoints to Special Summon this card in Attack Position. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if you control this monster on the field, you can equip it to a face-up "Volcanic" monster on your side of the field as an equip card, OR unequip it and Special Summon it in face-up attack position. When equipped to a monster by this card's effect, all direct damage done to your opponent by the equipped "volcanic" mosters card effect is doubled. (1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, this card is destroyed instead.) Im sure there are OCG problems but if you see them dont just say you saw them, point them out and dont forget to rate >.< Image credit to HP Doom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ЯчυКδ ңґεηđдϊ Posted September 1, 2010 Report Share Posted September 1, 2010 pic needs to be better as in not looking drawn, volcanic needs quotations around it in effect, seems good otherwise 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shizuku Oikawa Posted September 2, 2010 Report Share Posted September 2, 2010 lol, Ooze Attack Position is capitalized, other error has been said Kinda good, lol, a little overpowered for a Level 1 monster, lol I'll just rate Ooze with a 8.5/10, lol I feel as if Grunika is gonna love him Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted September 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 2, 2010 [quote]pic needs to be better as in not looking drawn, volcanic needs quotations around it in effect, seems good otherwise 7/10 [/quote] Thanks for the rate, But i personally like the picture so im gonna keep it. [quote]lol, Ooze Attack Position is capitalized, other error has been said Kinda good, lol, a little overpowered for a Level 1 monster, lol I'll just rate Ooze with a 8.5/10, lol I feel as if Grunika is gonna love him [/quote] fixed, Yah... It is kinda Overpowered.... I might just increase his lv by one or two... I was trying to mix Revival Jam and volcanic monsters >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted September 2, 2010 Report Share Posted September 2, 2010 op to the max, this + doomfire = otk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted September 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 2, 2010 [quote]op to the max, this + doomfire = otk [/quote] Hmmm True.... i didnt think of doomfire when making this... but to be fair if your opponent summons doomfire your screw'd anyway, right? >_> I might make its first effect more like revival Jams....Or should i make it so you cant equip it to doomfire? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted September 2, 2010 Report Share Posted September 2, 2010 Add a comma after graveyard, the pic is better for a Toon Lava Golem. Good effect. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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