pOrTeRthrash Posted September 2, 2010 Report Share Posted September 2, 2010 [b]It's been a while since i've post something so i decided to, post my [color="#FF8C00"][b]1ST VANILLA[/b][/color]monster. Here it is hope you like it... [/b] [indent][indent][indent][indent][img]http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/8643/253593i.jpg[/img][/indent][/indent][/indent][/indent] [size="4"] [spoiler=VAGUE VANILLA][i]A vague soul who walks through desolated fields. In search of some live left in so many desolation fields that has pressenced in his painfull life, hoping for one day to find the Heavenly Garden to fullfill its life and finally rest in peace...[/i][/spoiler][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted September 2, 2010 Report Share Posted September 2, 2010 Not very beast and without an effect, it wont last long. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Codeson Posted September 2, 2010 Report Share Posted September 2, 2010 (In search of some live left) = In search of some "life" left? How can it walk on feet that Skinny Just looking at it the English Doesnt seem correct this part Like you repeated He searches through desolation fields twice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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