Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted September 2, 2010 Report Share Posted September 2, 2010 New here, just wanted to test out an archtype. If this goes well I'll keep making more of this type. OCG fixes are much appreciated. Edit: fixed some earlier problems and added a few more cards I've been thinking about. I'm worried aboutthe cards being OP'd or UP'd. Also added the first tuner, synchros coming in the future. [spoiler=monsters][img]http://img801.imageshack.us/img801/1165/276075y.jpg[/img] Lore: When this card is sent to the Graveyard, remove it from play. Once per turn, while this card is on the field, you can send 1 removed from play monster to the Graveyard to remove 1 other card in your Graveyard from play. [img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/3158/276075as.jpg[/img] Lore: When this card is sent to the Graveyard, remove it from play. Your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target as long as you control another "Dimensional Dragon" monster. During the end phase, if a card was removed from play this turn, you can select 1 card from your Deck and remove it from play to gain 500 Life Points. [img]http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/1985/276075m.jpg[/img] When this card is sent to the Graveyard, except by its own effect, remove it from play. Once per turn, you can return this removed from play card to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower removed from play "Dimensional Dragon" monster, exept "Dimensional Dragon Mizu." [img]http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/6626/276075.jpg[/img] Lore: When this card is sent to the Graveyard, except by its own effect, remove it from play. If this card attacks, it is changed to Defense Position at the end of the Battle Phase. If your Opponent attacks, you can return this removed from play card to the Graveyard to negate it. [img]http://img828.imageshack.us/img828/6626/276075.jpg[/img] Lore: When this card is sent to the Graveyard, remove it from play. You can send this removed from play card along with one other removed from play "Dimensional Dragon" monster to the Graveyard, ignoring their effects, in order to Synchro Summon one monster from the Extra Deck whose level is equal to the combined level of the returned monsters. [img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/4461/276075i.jpg[/img] Lore: When this card is sent to the Graveyard, except by its own effect, remove it from play. Once per turn, you can return this removed from play card to the Graveyard to have one "Dimensional Dragon" monster gain 1300 Attack until the Endphase. This effect can be activated during either players turn. [img]http://img830.imageshack.us/img830/6626/276075.jpg[/img] Lore: When this card is sent to the Graveyard, remove it from play. When this card is normal summoned, remove up to 3 monsters in your deck from play. This card gains 100 Attack for each of your removed from play dragon monsters. [img]http://img829.imageshack.us/img829/1985/276075m.jpg[/img] Lore: When this card is summoned, you can special summon 1 removed from play "Dimensional Dragon" monster. Its effect is negated. If this card is removed from the field, send the summoned monster to the Graveyard, ignoring its effect. [/spoiler] [spoiler=spells][img]http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/6626/276075.jpg[/img] Lore: Select 3 removed from play dragon monsters and add them to your Deck. Then shuffle your Deck and draw 2 cards. [img]http://img685.imageshack.us/img685/6626/276075.jpg[/img] Lore: Send any number of removed from play "Dimensional Dragon" monsters to the Graveyard, ignoring their effects. Then destroy a number of your opponents cards up to the number of cards sent to the Graveyard by this effect. [/spoiler] [spoiler=traps][img]http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/1165/276075y.jpg[/img] Lore: You can only activate this card when a "Dimensional Dragon" monster is selected as an attack target. Destroy all face-up Attack Positon monsters your opponent controls and add 1 removed from play monster to your Graveyard, ignoring its effect. You cannot use the effect of any card with the same name as the returned monster until your next End Phase. [img]http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/6626/276075.jpg[/img] Lore: Inflict life points equal to the number of "Dimensional Dragon" monsters removed from play x300. Then return all of your removed from play "Dimensional Dragon" monsters to the graveyard, ignoring their effects. [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted September 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 2, 2010 Are they really that bad? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shin~ Posted September 2, 2010 Report Share Posted September 2, 2010 [spoiler=Kaen]"When this card is sent to the [b]Graveyard[/b], remove it from play. Once per turn[b],[/b] you can remove [b]1[/b] card in your [b]Graveyard[/b] from play." Alot of card like "Soul Absorption", "Necroface" and "Helios" will work well with this effect but anyway you put it for your: -"Dimensional Dragon Arashi" that will do the same as "Soul Absorption" but with a larger cost and a less LP gain. -"Dimensional Dragon Aisu" that made this effect OP since you can use its effect while it is removed from play then use "Kaen" to remove 1 "Aisu" in your graveyard from play that will return to the graveyard and destroy 1 card then you can use a face-up "Arashi" effect to remove "Kaen" that will do the same again SO you can destroy 4 card in each turn and after you remove 3 "Kaen" you will not need "Arashi". -"Dimensional Dragon Mizu".that will be the same as "Aisu" but instead of 4 destroyed cards you will summon up to 4 "Dimensional Dragon" monsters in each turn. You should add "once per turn" to "Aisu" and "Mizu" last effect. 6.5/10.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Arashi]"When this card is sent to the [b]Graveyard[/b], remove it from play. Your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target as long as you control another "Dimensional Dragon" monster. While this card is in face-up Attack Position, each time a card is removed from play, you can select [b]1[/b] card [b]from[/b] your [b]Deck[/b] and remove it from play to gain 500 [b]Life Points[/b]." 1500 DEF is high for a level 2 monster change it to 1400-1200 or lower its ATK to 200-0. Way too OP since it do not say that the removed card have to be in any where you can use this card as many time as you wish so remove all "Aisu", "kean" and "Mizu". -Return all "Aisu" to the graveyard so you can destroy 3 of your opponent cards. -Use "kean" to remove all "Aisu" from play. -Again return all "Aisu" to the graveyard to destroy 3 of your opponent cards. -Return all "Mizu" to the graveyard so you can special summon all "Kaen". That will destroy 6 of your opponent cards (if he/she even had 6 cards) give you 500-4500 LP and 4 monsters in 1 turn. You should add "in your Graveyard" after "each time a card is" With this you still can do the above but only if you had 3 "Kean" removed from play but with the fix on "Aisu" and "Mizu" it will not happen. 6.6/10.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Mizu]When this card is sent to the [b]Graveyard[/b], except by its own effect, remove it from play. You can return this removed from play card to the [b]Graveyard[/b] to [b]Special Summon 1[/b] removed from play "Dimensional Dragon" monster, exept "Dimensional Dragon Mizu." So it is less limited "Giant Rat" for the "Dimensional Dragon" monsters. You should add "Once per turn," before "You can return this removed from play card ...". 6.2/10.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Aisu]When this card is sent to the [b]Graveyard[/b], except by its own effect, remove it from play. If this card attacks, it is changed to [b]Defense Position[/b] at the end of the [b]Battle Phase[/b]. You can return this removed from play card to the [b]Graveyard[/b] to destroy [b]1[/b] card on the field. So it is less limited version of "". You should add You should add "Once per turn," before "You can return this removed from play card ...". 5.9/10.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Dragon's Dance]Select 5 removed from play monsters and add them to your [b]Deck[/b]. Then draw 2 cards. It is a powerful version of "Pot of Avarice". It can take your opponent cards and you do not have to shuffle your deck so you can put that 5 card on the top and draw 2 of them. It is dragon dance so it should do some thing for the dragons. You should add "shuffle your Deck and" after "Then". 6.6/10.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Clash of the Dragons][b]You can only activate this card[/b] when a "Dimensional Dragon" monster is selected as an attack target. Destroy all [b]face-up[/b] Attack Positon monsters your opponent controls and add [b]1[/b] removed from play monster to your [b]Graveyard[/b], ignoring its effect. "Mirror Force" is Limited and you made a powerful version of it !!! I think ", ignoring its effect." should be ". That monster's effect(s) is negated until it is removed from the Graveyard.". 6/10.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Dragon's Hunger]I think it should be "Lose Life Points equal to the number of "Dimensional Dragon" monsters removed from play x300. Then return all of your removed from play "Dimensional Dragon" monsters to the Graveyard and negate their effects until they are removed from the Graveyard.' Why would you want to do so ?![/spoiler] I hope this is clear ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sotos Posted September 2, 2010 Report Share Posted September 2, 2010 Generally a good idea, but I think that Aisu is way too OP'D, and also these pictures (especially Kaen's) should really belong to stronger monsters, not just Lv. 4s... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted September 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 2, 2010 K I'll work on those problems. Never saw the OP'd combo I made .[quote name='KING101' timestamp='1283424238' post='4591802'] I think it should be "Lose Life Points equal to the number of "Dimensional Dragon" monsters removed from play x300. Then return all of your removed from play "Dimensional Dragon" monsters to the Graveyard and negate their effects until they are removed from the Graveyard.' Why would you want to do so ?! [/quote] Actually here, I don't know about comepletely negating their effects. I was using a quick burn damage effect that had the drawback of losing all of the monsters that were removed from play. This may just turn out to be one of those cards that no one uses. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted September 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 2, 2010 Still looking for advice... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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