fire horse

[cimari]

[img]http://img829.imageshack.us/img829/6697/272328.jpg[/img]
This beast was once a normal horse, till a fire consumed it. This beast has been on fire since, always tortured by the flames.

[cimari]

[img]http://img829.imageshack.us/img829/8774/272328p.jpg[/img]
This beast spits ice fire at you.

[cimari]

[img]http://img801.imageshack.us/img801/6697/272328.jpg[/img]
This card gains 100 ATK for every dark beast monster in any remove from play zone. This card must attack an effect monster on the field. LVL 3 or lower cannot attack this card. If they do remove them from play. You must pay 1000 life points when you summon this card. If this card is destroyed you must pay 1000 life points.

[Six Samz 500]

1st card whats the point, second card is rubbish and doesnt make sense and ocg is wrong 5/10

[cimari]

[quote name='yamibakura51' timestamp='1283419355' post='4591729']
1st card whats the point, second card is rubbish and doesnt make sense and ocg is wrong 5/10
[/quote]
for one i made them cuz i could n i just wanted help on correcting them dont be a douche about the cards i couldnt think of an effect for them so i made them normal monsters

[.GhostRyder]

[b][size="2"]Vanillas need Support.
Post the all in one post please.
Look at other cards to get the jist of making.
'nuff said.[/size][/b]

[cimari]

[quote name='.Ghost Rider' timestamp='1283462297' post='4593144']
[b][size="2"]Vanillas need Support.
Post the all in one post please.
Look at other cards to get the jist of making.
'nuff said.[/size][/b]
[/quote]
k thnxs