ЯчυКδ ңґεηđдϊ Posted September 3, 2010 Report Share Posted September 3, 2010 [img]http://img830.imageshack.us/img830/7861/180888o.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Lore]This species was thought to have died out long ago. The humanoid race he was once part of was highly developed. There was technology that surpasses even that of what we have today. This individual though, thought that black magic would solve its problems. It got its hands on a book that was forbidden to be read, by the ruler of the time. This creature opened the book and began to read. Suddenly, a shroud of black mist consumed its body. When it awoke there was nothing but ruins about this creature. The creature thought about going to see the old temple, and suddenly its body began to dissipate. Its body reformed in the temple only for it to find its whole species, extinct.[/spoiler] [img]http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/7905/180888.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Lore]She was shunned as a child by her fellow tribe members for her mother being an elf. As she grew older a hatred for her tribe began to grow. Eventually this hatred consumed her and sent her into a frenzy. She slaughtered the members of her tribe, including her father for being the cause of all her pain and suffering through the years. A few days after slaughtering her tribe she arrived in the village of Kyrod. In this village she found her mother and murdered her in her sleep. She is now seen carrying her mother's head where ever she is.[/spoiler] [img]http://img52.imageshack.us/img52/7120/180888r.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Lore]He was outcasted by his tribe for thoughts of performing witch-craft. He stumbled across the Shadow Dweller's encampment and was attacked by them. When he was on the brink of death, Zarg, the Shadow Dweller's leader, decided to let him live as a slave among them.[/spoiler] [img]http://img814.imageshack.us/img814/7905/180888.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Lore]This goblin was raised from a baby by the Shadow Dwellers. He is a master scout as well as archer. He is never seen during the day, but comes out to "play" at sight of first moon light.[/spoiler] [img]http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/4208/180888p.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Lore]This being was brought to this world from another dimension. It sucks energy from all who oppose it, to feed its never ending lust. The more energy it consumes, the bigger and more fearsome it seems.[/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altaïr Posted September 3, 2010 Report Share Posted September 3, 2010 pretty good but the Chrike card would maybe frighten young viewers who are like 7 or 8.[I]if we have any[/I] other then that they're great 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ЯчυКδ ңґεηđдϊ Posted September 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 3, 2010 [quote name='mason1999' timestamp='1283481998' post='4594183'] pretty good but the Chrike card would maybe frighten young viewers who are like 7 or 8.[I]if we have any[/I] other then that they're great 8.9/10 [/quote] thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ЯчυКδ ңґεηđдϊ Posted September 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 3, 2010 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted September 3, 2010 Report Share Posted September 3, 2010 First one at 3300 ATK is OP. Last one at 3200 DEF is OP. Max ATK + DEF for Level 7+ is 2950ATK and 3000 DEF. Blue Eyes White Dragon is the only Normal monster that has 3000 ATK and it will stay that way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ЯчυКδ ңґεηđдϊ Posted September 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 5, 2010 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
M.B X Posted September 5, 2010 Report Share Posted September 5, 2010 [quote name='LiAM' timestamp='1283550485' post='4596282'] First one at 3300 ATK is OP. Last one at 3200 DEF is OP. Max ATK + DEF for Level 7+ is 2950ATK and 3000 DEF. Blue Eyes White Dragon is the only Normal monster that has 3000 ATK and it will stay that way. [/quote] Says who? Were here to make our own cards our way dont give me that in real OCG & TCG B-eyes can stay the most powerful vanilla, but here non of his biz!!! BTW, good cards bad images 5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted September 5, 2010 Report Share Posted September 5, 2010 [quote name='M.B X' timestamp='1283717936' post='4603663'] Says who? Were here to make our own cards our way dont give me that in real OCG & TCG B-eyes can stay the most powerful vanilla, but here non of his biz!!! BTW, good cards bad images 5/10. [/quote] It's called Realistic Cards for a reason. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legokun Posted September 5, 2010 Report Share Posted September 5, 2010 [quote name='mason1999' timestamp='1283481998' post='4594183'] ...like 7 or 8.[I]if we have any[/I] [/quote] *Points to ruler of gx* I commend you for making Vanillas, but, there just vanillas, not much to rate. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ЯчυКδ ңґεηđдϊ Posted September 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 9, 2010 [quote name='BrickFist™' timestamp='1283719158' post='4603761'] *Points to ruler of gx* I commend you for making Vanillas, but, there just vanillas, not much to rate. 8.5/10 [/quote] thx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted September 9, 2010 Report Share Posted September 9, 2010 As a top vanilla fan myself I must say I am very impressed. In general these are very good, however I have but only 1 criticism. I believe that the descriptions in some not all of ypur cards are excessive, creating a ballanced description for a vanilla is no easy task and where most people don't put enough for the description I feel that you have put too much. As a result you haven't left enough to the readers imagination because you have tried to overcompensate, sometimes the best vanillas are the most subtle. However that is my only criticsm otherwise they are very good as a vanilla-holic myself I am impressed. 9.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ЯчυКδ ңґεηđдϊ Posted September 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 10, 2010 [quote name='chedbonlahor' timestamp='1284069668' post='4612130'] As a top vanilla fan myself I must say I am very impressed. In general these are very good, however I have but only 1 criticism. I believe that the descriptions in some not all of ypur cards are excessive, creating a ballanced description for a vanilla is no easy task and where most people don't put enough for the description I feel that you have put too much. As a result you haven't left enough to the readers imagination because you have tried to overcompensate, sometimes the best vanillas are the most subtle. However that is my only criticsm otherwise they are very good as a vanilla-holic myself I am impressed. 9.6/10 [/quote] i appreciate ur criticism Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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