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LiAM Newbie

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Too powerful for a Normal monster.

3000ATK is only allowed for [b]Blue Eyes White Dragon[/b] (as it's Kazuki's favourite and one of his first).

So I would say the max for Normal is 2950ATK :D But you're allowed 3000DEF. (As long as it's balanced).

[u]E.g. [/u]2900ATK/800DEF || 0ATK/ 3000DEF.

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LiAM Newbie

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[quote name='fredknight' timestamp='1283553933' post='4596492']
im not so good with effects but i think i can think of some thing
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Well I recommend reading some existing cards, learning how they play etc.

Why not for it's effect...

[i]Each time this card attacks, put 1 Battle Counter on it (max. 4). This card loses 400 ATK for
each Battle Counter on it. You can remove 4 Counters from this card to destroy all monsters on the field.[/i]

I know it's bland and a bit odd XD but it could be useful, 4 attacks = BOMB.
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fredknight

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[img]http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/5104/230993q.jpg[/img]

When you successfully normal summon this card to the field you may chose one of the flowing effects.* Every Light attribute monster on your side of the field gains 300 ATK.* This gains 200 ATK for every Light attribute monster card sent to the graveyard.

The *'s are the dotes on card with the circle

or should i just one effect

forget the 200 atk increase instead............I dont know

the first effect only ok

[img]http://img825.imageshack.us/img825/3471/230993.jpg[/img]
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Correct OCG:

[color="#1C2837"][font="tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif"]When [s]you successfully normal summon[/s] this card is Normal Summoned, [s]to the field[/s] you [s]may[/s] can [s]chose[/s] select one of the flowing effects: [/font][/color][color="#1C2837"][font="tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif"][b]- [/b]Every L[b]IGHT[/b] [s]attribute[/s] monster on your side of the field gains 300 ATK.[/font][/color]
[color="#1C2837"][font="tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif"][b]- [/b]This [b]card [/b]gains 200 ATK for every L[b]IGHT[/b] [s]attribute[/s] monster [s]card[/s] sent to the [b]G[/b]raveyar[b]d[/b][/font][/color]
[color="#1C2837"][font="tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif"][b]
[/b][/font][/color]
[color="#1C2837"][font="tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif"][b]use this OCG fix [/b][/font][/color]
[color="#1C2837"][font="tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif"][b]
[/b][/font][/color]
[color="#1C2837"][font="tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif"][b]the effect seems ok[/b][/font][/color]
[color="#1C2837"][font="tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif"][b]
[/b][/font][/color]
[color="#1C2837"][font="tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif"][b]it could use a better pic[/b][/font][/color]
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LiAM Newbie

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[u]OCG: Official Card Grammar.[/u]

[color="#0000FF"]When this card is Normal Summoned, activate 1 of the following effects:
● Increase the attack of all LIGHT monsters you control by 300.
● This card gains 200 ATK each time a LIGHT monster is sent to the Graveyard.
[/color]
The Effects are abit simple and overpowered as they both increase the ATK. And its ATK is already really high.
With an ATK of about 2200, and a counter limit on the second, it would be fair.

[color="#008000"][i]Level 8, ATK 2200/ DEF 1500.[/i]
When this card is Normal Summoned, activate 1 of the following effects:
● Increase the attack of all LIGHT monsters you control by 500.
● Each time a LIGHT monster is sent to the Graveyard, put 1 Counter on this card (max. 8). This card gains 200 ATK for each Counter on it.[/color]

[b]+Instead of * for the ●, use a - or number (if the effect uses numbers).[/b]

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FTW (For The Wynn) Newbie

FTW (For The Wynn)

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I'll help you with the OCG (Official Card Grammer) as best I can, plus make a couple of recommendations.

This card cannot be Special Summoned. Once per turn during your Standby Phase you can activate 1 of the following effects:
* Every LIGHT monster on your side of the field gains 500 ATK.
* Select 1 card in your opponent's hand and 1 card in your hand. The cards selected by this effect are returned to their owners' Decks.
* Once per turn during your Main Phase you can discard 1 card from your hand to cut 1 Monster card your opponent controls ATK in half. If you
activate this effect all damage during this turn is reduced to 0.
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LiAM Newbie

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It's fair enough with the new effect.

Can't imagine it seeing much play as it's just a beatstick with a little ATK gain.

Maybe make it that you can discard the top 3 cards of your Deck and destroy 1 face-up monster, you cant attack that turn.

Or when it's destroyed by a DARK monster you can add it to your hand

Or you can Tribute Summon it with 3 monsters, if you do, you can increase your Life Points by 1000.

I don't know, all those are basic and boring =|
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