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i know they suck but i making a set FOR FUN AND I DONT CARE ABOUT ERRORS


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hope you like and dont tell me about ocg errors :lol: ^^
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[quote name='.Cpt Awesome' timestamp='1283632459' post='4600029']
You know, if you don't care you'll keep making the same errors forever. That's why you need to WANT to improve, dude. Nobody is here to humiliate you for your cards, they're trying to help you to improve. So, you should allow people to correct you.

Awesome ;)
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awesom what lol they suck

what you still here for cpt???

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Pay 500 Life Points to activate this card. All "Hell" monsters gain 500 ATK and DEF.

(Pro Tip: Card Names and Types are capitalized.)

During your opponent's Battle Phase, this card can and must be the target of all attacks.

Spellcaster, not magician

(Pro Tip: Make sure you list where your cards are being Special Summoned from.)

If this card is destroyed as a result of battle, Special Summon 1 "Hell" monster from your Deck. Your Deck is then shuffled.

This card cannot be Normal Summon or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 2 "Hell" Monsters you control. As long as you control this card, increase the ATK and DEF of all "Hell" monsters you control (Excluding this one) by 100.

There you go. Your own archtype. Enjoy it when it lasts.
Poor OCG, i don't like them. But, your new, so your rate gets 3 more points.
5/10
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[quote name='BrickFistâ„¢' timestamp='1283634279' post='4600128']
Pay 500 Life Points to activate this card. All "Hell" monsters gain 500 ATK and DEF.

(Pro Tip: Card Names and Types are capitalized.)

During your opponent's Battle Phase, this card can and must be the target of all attacks.

Spellcaster, not magician

(Pro Tip: Make sure you list where your cards are being Special Summoned from.)

If this card is destroyed as a result of battle, Special Summon 1 "Hell" monster from your Deck. Your Deck is then shuffled.

This card cannot be Normal Summon or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 2 "Hell" Monsters you control. As long as you control this card, increase the ATK and DEF of all "Hell" monsters you control (Excluding this one) by 100.

There you go. Your own archtype. Enjoy it when it lasts.
Poor OCG, i don't like them. But, your new, so your rate gets 3 more points.
5/10
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i thought i changed magician to spellcaster sry bout that i was tired when i made these
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....well, I can't say (or rather repeat) the obvious.....
But I do have a question for you. If you know that your OCG isn't very good, then why not try to improve? (improving means listening to others people's criticism)

Anyways, overall, your cards are okay for a beginning cardmaker.
I'm gonna say a [b]6/10[/b].
Just get better pictures, better names, less OCG errors, don't use make types, and spice up the effect abit (most of your your effect have been used before).

Keep trying and I'm glad you had fun making cards ^_^

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