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Guardian of Light Archtype [My First Cards]


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Although this is my first time on Yugioh Card Maker, i am no simplton when it comes to getting the greatest detail i can onto these. Note that i used Kazuki Takahashi's name as the creator to make the cards as realistic as possible, Please Enjoy and rate ^^.
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[i]Guardian of Light, Hirophanth[/i]
ATK: 2500 DEF: 2200 Level: 7
[Warrior / Synchro / Effect]
Effect: 1 Tuner Monster + 1 or more Non-Tuner Monters
When this card is Synchro Summoned sucessfully, Destroy 1 Spell or Trap card your Opponents side of the field for each "Guardian of Light" Monster on your side of the field.

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[i]Guardian of Light, Terifear[/i]
ATK: 900 DEF: 600 Level: 3
[Warrior / Tuner]
Effect: When this card is Summoned, if it is the only "Guardian of Light" Monster on your side of the field, you may Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Guardian of Light" Monster from your Hand to your side of the field.

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[i]Guardian of Light, Siguroga[/i]
ATK: 1400 DEF: 1600 Level: 4
[Warrior / Effect]
Effect: Increase the ATK of this card by 300 points for every other "Guardian of Light" Monter on your side of the field.

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[i]Broken Shell[/i]
[Trap]
Effect: This card can only be Activated when your Opponent declares a Direct Attack. Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower "Guardian of Light" Monster from your Hand or Deck to your side of the field.

Thank you so much for anyone who gives [u]Constructive Critique[/u] from the Community. If you find something wrong with my OCG, please feel free to correct me, I love learning from mistakes, they teach the best lesson.
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All the cards bond well, I can see how you could manage to Special Summon a few in succession.

With the Trap, it can go either way, you can Summon, but then lose the monster from another attack >.<

Overall, all the effects are unique and pretty well balanced.

I like them all, they now just need more support to be usable XD

How about an effect for a Spell like;
[i]Discard 1 card. ADD 2 "Guardian of Light" monsters from your Deck to your hand.[/i]

Maybe with that, you can Special Summon an extra monster through the effect of the Tuner. XD

It's a quick Synchro Summon, and usually you would only be able to destroy the one S/T.

But yeah, all balanced, not too powerful but a good Summoning ability and Synchro use. XP
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New member makes good balanced cards...Have to Love you...

Other than that let me help you with something here...
OCG, you have some errors....i meant the way your cards are written can be done in a much easier way...

Here is OCG fix:

Guardian of Light - Hierophant
1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monster
When this card is Synchro Summoned, destroy 1 Spell or Trap card your opponent controls for each face-up "Guardian of Light" monster you control.

Guardian of Light - Terifear
When this card is Summoned, if this is the only "Guardian of Light" you control, you can Special Summon a Level 4 or lower "Guardian of Light" monster from your hand.

Guardian of Light, Siguroga
Increase this card's ATK by 300 for each "Guardian of Light" you control.

Broken Shell
This card can only be activated when your apponent declares a direct attack. Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower "Guardian of Light" monster from your hand or Deck.

There an OCG thread somewhere If I can Find it i will post it for you.
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So technically my OCG was fine, you just simplified it? Awesome ^^, I dont like doing things one whay when there's a much easier way right under my nose.

BTW, for Heirophanth, it would be "...Synchro Summoned successfully,..." other wise, even if someone used something like "Bottomless Trap Hole". her effect would still work. I dont want that.
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o.o Oooo, not bad! >_< I know I'm just a low ranking member, but I might as well give the best help I can. But really, the only problem I see right now is originality. o.o These all just seem to be a common Special Summoning archetype, like the Dark World or something. Perhaps making a common effect for all of them, like the Crystal Beasts Continuous Spell effect, and then just adding special, unique effects to them? Small suggestion.

Originality I'll give a 3/10, but overall, I'll give it a 6/10, because Lights always need more to them, and it looks like a really fun series. =)
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