Kakashi Hatake Posted September 4, 2010 Report Share Posted September 4, 2010 [spoiler=Prologue][center]• Prologue[/center] Pokemon. Magical creatures with extraordinary powers! It is said that there are hundreds-maybe thousands of different species of Pokemon out there! New and greater kinds are being discovered every day. Even the imagination can only barely even touch the surface! These creatures are captured and befriended for adventure and competition. Used in battle and fun, pokemon are used everywhere. Pokemon trainers and breeders travel miles, through forests and fields, even through different regions! [center]Our story starts in New Bark Town of the Johto Region. Our protagonist has just moved in to town and he plans to get his first pokemon tomorrow.[/spoiler][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted September 4, 2010 Report Share Posted September 4, 2010 Show. Don't tell. This isn't really a prologue. The first paragraph talks about Pokemon, which we already know about. It sounds like the intro of a Pokemon movie. Then there's a sentence for exposition. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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