Spoon Posted September 4, 2010 Report Share Posted September 4, 2010 Heya fellow Card Makers, I wanted to celebrate my 4th Level Star with my very first thread in the Realistic Cards Section. I usually prefer the Pop Culture Section, and if you think that those cards are utter crap, I'll go back there and live a happy life All of the cards were made for different contests, the first one for Laevateins 1on1-Contest (Had to be a Dragunity monster), the second one as a... I actually can't remember, but it had no requirements, and the third one for Strikers "Luck and Skill Contest" (had to be a Synchro Monster that has something to do with luck). As you can see they're all from already existing archetypes, because that's far easier for me if I don't have any anime or a game as a draft. Now I want to hear the opinion of the "pros". Things I already know about: Pic of card 1 is overused, effect of card 3 is heavily overpowered, my OCG sucks. You don't need to remind me of that... but if you want it that badly, go ahead [center][img]http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/773/234848u.jpg[/img] [i][b]Lore: "Crimson Field Hawk" + 1 or more non-Tuner Winged Beast-Type monsters When this card is Synchro Summoned, add 1 Dragon-Type "Dragunity" monster from your Deck to your hand. If this card is used as a Synchro Material Monster for the Synchro Summoning of a "Dragunity Knight" monster, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of "Dragunity" monsters in your Graveyard x600.[/b][/i] [img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/4337/234848y.jpg[/img] [i][b]Lore: 1 Tuner + 1 or more "Iron Chain" non-Tuner monster(s) Once per turn, you can remove 1 "Iron Chain" monster in your Graveyard from play to destroy 1 face-up monster your opponent controls and send cards from their Deck to the Graveyard equal to the level of the monster you removed from play. If you control 1 or more "Iron Chain" monsters besides this one, this card cannot be targeted by your opponents card effects.[/i][/b] (Picture Credit to Father Wolf) [img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/6808/234848s.jpg[/img] [i][b]Lore: 1 "Fortune Fairy" Tuner + 1 or more "Fortune Fairy" non-Tuner monsters Once per turn, if you control at least 2 "Fortune Fairy" monsters on the field and if this card is in your Extra Deck, roll a 6-sided die: Increase the Level of 1 "Fortune Fairy" monster you control by the rolled number. It is treated as a Tuner monster until your End Phase and can only be used to Synchro Summon a "Fortune Fairy" Synchro Monster. When this card is succesfully Synchro Summoned, you can Special Summon up to 4 "Fortune Fairy" monsters from your hand or Deck. This cards gains 700 ATK and DEF for each "Fortune Fairy" you control. Other "Fortune Fairy" monsters you control cannot be selected as an attack target. Once per turn, if you draw a "Fortune Fairy", you can roll a 6-sided die: Inflict damage to your opponent equal to the Level of the drawn monster x100 multiplied with the rolled number. After the effect is resolved, return that card to your Deck and shuffle it, then draw 1 card.[/i][/b][/center] So long, Spoon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted September 4, 2010 Report Share Posted September 4, 2010 Spoon your cards are incredible, I have said this before and I will say this again you are one of the most creative and brilliant, card-maker/contest judge/card critic you deserve the title of moderator on of these days. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Griffin Posted September 4, 2010 Report Share Posted September 4, 2010 The first seems awkward, since Crimson Field Hawk is for Laval Decks, and Dragunities usually use Dragon-Tuners, not winged-beast. The tributing monsters in your s/t zone effect also feels un-needed. The second... Is actually really, really nice. Good job on that one. The last... well, since Fortune Faries don't actually exist, and don't have any tuners, it isn't Summonable and can't be commented on much, since I expect you made some tuner and forgot to post it. Also, [acronym='If you want to hear from the "pros", try Written Cards, most people there know the game pretty well.']pro tip.[/acronym] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spoon Posted September 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 4, 2010 [quote name='chedbonlahor' timestamp='1283599306' post='4598266'] Spoon your cards are incredible, I have said this before and I will say this again you are one of the most creative and brilliant, card-maker/contest judge/card critic you deserve the title of moderator on of these days. [/quote] I really appreciate that, thank you [quote name='-Griffin' timestamp='1283602043' post='4598291'] The first seems awkward, since Crimson Field Hawk is for Laval Decks, and Dragunities usually use Dragon-Tuners, not winged-beast. The tributing monsters in your s/t zone effect also feels un-needed.[/quote] That the Crimson Hawk is for Laval Decks was actually (more or less) intended. As you can see, this is no "Dragunity Knight", but a normal "Dragunity" monster. As far as I know, all Dragunity Synchros are Dragunity Knights. This card should've been kind of a changeover between 1. Lavals and Dragunity's and 2. The lower level Winged-Beast Dragunitys and the Dragunity Knights. Also, Crimson Field Hawk is the only Winged Beast Tuner that is not a Blackwing. It happens to have the Fire Attribute, which corresponds with the weapon of this card (though it is no Union, but I don't care). Yep the combination between Lavals and Dragunitys seems kinda random... but that's because it is You may be right that this effect is a bit un-needed and overloads the card... I think about changing or removing it, but I also wait for other comments. I initially wanted the "burnish" effect to stay, just because his sword burns... whatever. [quote]The second... Is actually really, really nice. Good job on that one.[/quote] It's also the simplest and most boring card of the 3... what does that say about this section again? Just kidding, thanks, it was one of my first attempts of a really realistic card that fits in the actual TCG [quote]The last... well, since Fortune Faries don't actually exist, and don't have any tuners, it isn't Summonable and can't be commented on much, since I expect you made some tuner and forgot to post it.[/quote] Well, the Tuner is [i]in[/i] the card, if you read carefully Also I know that the Fortune Fairies don't exist, but there [i]are[/i] cards for them ([url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Fortune_Fairies"]Fortune Fairies[/url]), and that's enough for me to work with... and no excuse for not commenting on it [quote]Also, [acronym='If you want to hear from the "pros", try Written Cards, most people there know the game pretty well.']pro tip.[/acronym][/quote] Gnyhaha, thanks for that, but cards without a picture... I don't know... just not my style Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spoon Posted September 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 5, 2010 Giving this a friendly little *bumpedibump* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
some guy789 Posted September 5, 2010 Report Share Posted September 5, 2010 i dont know much about this site but those cards are good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But where do u people get these pics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spoon Posted September 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 5, 2010 [quote name='some guy789' timestamp='1283676822' post='4602046'] i dont know much about this site but those cards are good! But where do u people get these pics [/quote] Thanks First Picture: Google. Second Picture: Father Wolfs Image Archive (see Showcase Sub-Forum, it's stickied). Third Picture: DeviantArt. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spoon Posted September 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2010 There's some serious *bump* going on here... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buttercup Posted September 7, 2010 Report Share Posted September 7, 2010 1st one should say send- you can't Tribute S/Ts. It's not necessary anyway. 5/10 2nd one is decent. OP'd effect is balanced by having to play Iron Chains or tune with Iron Chain Dragon. 7/10 3rd one has a cool effect ruined by the fact you have to run Vanillas and use a Die roll. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spoon Posted September 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2010 First of all: Thank your responding and commenting [quote name='Ser Warjacksworth' timestamp='1283847609' post='4609493'] 1st one should say send- you can't Tribute S/Ts. It's not necessary anyway. 5/10[/quote] I don't tribute S/Ts, I tribute monsters in my S/T Zone... a huge difference But I took that effect out anyways. [quote]2nd one is decent. OP'd effect is balanced by having to play Iron Chains or tune with Iron Chain Dragon. 7/10[/quote] Did I get you right: The effect is overpowered, but balanced at the same time because Iron Chains are bad (read: not in the current Meta)? That's some stupid stuff right there... I know why I love Pop Culture, the people here take this stuff way to serious [quote]3rd one has a cool effect ruined by the fact you have to run Vanillas and use a Die roll. 5/10[/quote] The die roll had to be implemented because luck was a requirement for that card (remember, it was for a contest). And yes, you have to run Vanillas for this... I guess my next attempt on a set is going to be a whole Fortune Fairy Archetype to make them playable... because that's [i]sooooo[/i] important for a single card to be decent, isn't it? [/sarcasm] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buttercup Posted September 7, 2010 Report Share Posted September 7, 2010 [quote name='Spoon' timestamp='1283850318' post='4609515'] First of all: Thank your responding and commenting I don't tribute S/Ts, I tribute monsters in my S/T Zone... a huge difference But I took that effect out anyways. Did I get you right: The effect is overpowered, but balanced at the same time because Iron Chains are bad (read: not in the current Meta)? That's some stupid stuff right there... I know why I love Pop Culture, the people here take this stuff way to serious The die roll had to be implemented because luck was a requirement for that card (remember, it was for a contest). And yes, you have to run Vanillas for this... I guess my next attempt on a set is going to be a whole Fortune Fairy Archetype to make them playable... because that's [i]sooooo[/i] important for a single card to be decent, isn't it? [/sarcasm] [/quote] You still say send. I said it's an overpowered effect but a balanced card. And the reason they're not in the current meta is because they're bad. Yes it is. The only good card that you have to run Vanillas for is Herald of Perfection. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Griffin Posted September 7, 2010 Report Share Posted September 7, 2010 [quote name='Ser Warjacksworth' timestamp='1283851230' post='4609521'] I said it's an overpowered effect but a balanced card. [/quote] http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Oxymoron Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Buttercup Posted September 7, 2010 Report Share Posted September 7, 2010 [quote name='-Griffin' timestamp='1283883907' post='4609976'] http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Oxymoron [/quote] Effects are different from Summoning Conditions and stats. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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